I think you did a wonderful job on the fight scene, at least in my imagination as I followed it in my mind.  I'm glad you came up with a new creature and they're very different.  I have a feeling she'll be a heroine to the Inu soldiers and they'll look at her more differently than any other human.  To them she may even be special.  When they finally reach the citadel, they'll probably tell their fellow soldiers about her.  Of course, Sesshoumaru will hear this and make him even more curious about her, I bet.  Like everyone else, I eagerly await 'the meeting'.

One more important thing -  !!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!!   Sorry about all the nausea.  Hope it gets better.

Woah!! So exciting, this fight scene was kick-ass! I can't wait till Kagome finally meets Sesshomaru!!!!!

I like this story, it has the potential to become one of the site's favorites, but I am a bit worried that the updates will be few and far in between which makes me sad and afraid that it will become one of those stories where we only see updates every couple of months or so....

In any case, the plot is original and I like the way you make Kagome & Inuyasha interact with each other! I also love the way you have made the strenghts of each one of them, be an asset to the other!

The fight scene was good! The monsters where very cleverly done and I enjoyed seeing the collaboration of everyone to win the battle!

I am really looking forward to the first meeting between Sesshomaru and Kagome, and I have no doubt that the pre conceived ideas the Inu lord has about humans will make their first encounter less than ideal!! But we all know that Kagome is on a class of her own and will surely prove her worth to everyone!

Congratulations on your pregnacy! I wish you the best of luck and hope the nausea and vomiting will go away fast and allow you to enjoy the rest of your pregnancy in bliss!

I look forward to your next update with anticipation!

Thank you for sharing!

MidCat

congratz on the good news! ur story is so awesome. i cant wait for the next update :)

Wow, I think this is absolutely great. Its really logical, I guess you can say, that someone like Kagome would be chosen to be Sesshomaru's wife and the whole idea that she has no choice but to become that is awesome. Keep writing, I can't wait!

I like how you're portraying the characters as they seem completely incharacter. I hope you update soon as I truly enjoy your story.

I really adore your fic! and even though i sometimes don't leave a review after each chapter, it's not that i didn't like it. most time i read new chapters through my phone, when i'm at work or something, and i don't do reviews when i do that. Just know that i really think you are an amazing writer. i love that you're not rushing the story so it's totally fine that Sesshoumaru and Kagome won't meet for a while. anyways, i definitely am looking forward to the next chapter. ^-^

I just found this story and it has captured my already. Please hurry with the next updates, I cannot wait to read on. It is amazing. More, please. I cannot wait until Sesshoumaru meets Kagome.

And off they go! I wonder how many attacks the inu-group faces with Kagome traveling with them? We'll see, we'll see...

Poor Kagome. I hope everything turns out well for her. Though if my understanding of her character is correct at all, she'll outshine everyone else and put Sesshomaru's yokai wives in their place quite easily, assuming she has the raw power she SUPPOSED to have in Canon... (where did it go anyway, in Canon that is...?)

So far, the story has been quite fast-paced in developement, but I also understand that story has to START at some point instead of dragging the beginning for 20+ chapters. Just be careful not to prolong the First Meeting between the two lovebirds too long as I'm sure all of your readers are eager to see how it turns. I have trust in your writing skills.

A piece of advice. Don't watch the review numbers, watch the read/hit numbers. They matter more. For example, I'm not normally a reviewer, more of a lurker. Yes, bad me, sorry! So don't feel discouraged because of how few reviews you get. Read numbers tell you how many read it, reviews tell you how many have courage to give you feedback, be it a three-word phrase "please update soon!" or a longer, more critical and helpful review. And most importantly: don't let your enjoyment in writing lay solely on reviews, or even read numbers. Remember, it's your story, you should write it to have fun yourself, and not care too much about other's opinions. If others like your work, they read it and some even give feedback. If they don't like it, it's their problem and their loss because they are missing on one interesting and well-written piece of story there. But that's just my opinion there.

Keep up the good work and keep your head high! Oh. And, please, do update soon! XD

I think you story is good and I like your style of writing. I've been reading it as you go just haven't reviewed before i dont think. Anyway as to your comment about putting off sess and kag meeting for 3 or 4 more chapters I'm not so sure that is wise. To me you have made this story sort of fast paced so putting off them meeting for that long will ruin the flow. With how you have the story flowing now I would say maybe putting it off for 2 at most unless you do plan to go back and rewrite the previous chapters and stretching things out.

As previously mention I like how things are so I don't think you need to change anything. Also a bit of advice, I know that it is hard to want to continue a story if you aren't getting alot of reviews but just remember its the fics that get updated regularly that are seen within the first few pages so it is possible people just didn't know you story was here. Another thing, people may not always review. Look more at your reading count then the reviews. I think I've said enough. Keep up the good work.

Pweez continue! It's great!

I dunno why everyone isn't reviewing, this is a wonderful fanfiction. I definitely enjoy it.

Although InuKag isn't my favourite ( coughcoughsesskagcough ) I'm definitely liking the whole -Inuyasha is a bashful man who hasn't experienced affection in his life- kind of attitude. It's cute.

The four wives unnerve me. Maybe because it's never been done before or because I believe Sesshoumaru should only belong to Kagome and Kagome alone....but that's just me. They must have some significance in the story. Although I have this nagging feeling they will cause trouble for Kagome in the future.

All in all, I've enjoyed it so far. Please don't get discouraged. You write beautifully. Really.

Keep it up.

This was a rather slow chapter with not much development.  I hope the next one is a bit more involved.

You are doing wonderfully! I even added this story to story alerts because I don't want to miss a single update! Keep up the good work, you have great potential as a writer :)

I really like the idea of this story and it is well executed.  It should be fireworks time when InuYasha delivers Kagome to Sesshomaru.  Good job! 

gah while i love this fic and the idea i kinda hope something horrible but amusing happens to inuyasha for making her do this, and EFing up her life even if it means we get to see her with Sess. maybe someone can accidently set inuyasha's hair on fire. and does Sess have pups with any of his wives? i cant help but wonder how their feeling about all of this.....

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I love this! i cant wait for more >:3

I love where your going with this story, its got a bit of spunk to it that i think will keep the story interesting! It difintely sounds like Kagome is needed at the western palace, but i can't wait to see how much things a shaken up with her arrival! I really enjoy stories where Kagome has a strong character base not the weak damsel in distress door mat that some other stories like to write her as, so thank for that!!!  Keep up the great work, and ill look out for your next update, soooooo can't wait for our favourite duo to meet, i really want to see how you write that out!!!

Wonderful! looking forward to the next chaper. ^-^