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darke wulf (Chapter 15) - Wed 09 Feb 2011

Yay!  Thank you so much for this fantastic chapter!  I'm not sure how you did it - my brother and his wife just had a baby, and from what they tell me I don't know where you found the time to write this, but I am so very happy you did!


L-desu (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

yes!!!  more stolen moments for the two would-be lovers.  this totally made my day!  you have no idea.


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Yay I'm glad they got a bit of time alone.  Once again I am absolutely in love with how you're writing Inuyasha.  I just adore his part int his story and I think you have him down to a tee.  But I think what I like best about this chapter was the amount of jealousy being flung back and forth.  It gave all this lovely friction and banter...and passion ^_^  I had wished that they had kissed in this chapter.  But hey, I am definitely not a critic of authors who like to take their time and build romatic tension :)  Thank you for updating and congrats on your sweet new addition to your family.  I look forward to the next update.  Keep up the good work!


Izzy (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

I dont mind the wait at all as long as it comes out like this >.< this chapter was too cute <3


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

OMFG i so thought she was going to glomp him! Kagome glompage is one of my favorite things!

 

this was an awesome update, and a wonderful chapter! I'm glad that Ryo kinda got put in her place even if for no other reason i see that she will be troublesome!


Marifer (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Yay! I was so happy when I saw that you had updated. The scene with Kagome and sesshomaru was very sweet and I look forward to see how they will react after the embrace. Congrats on the new addition to your family. I eagerly anticipate your next update.


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

OMG thank you for updating, I sooo love this story, the realism of the characters and each step of the journey.  This story is pheoniminal, thank you for the adventure, I am very much enjoying the ride!


LunaGirl (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Congratulations on your new baby!   We all are very happy for you and your family!  Also, congratulations on your nomination on the awards, hope you win!

This chapter was amazing! I loved everything about it and I was screaming SQUEEEEEEEEE!!! When Sesshomaru licked the wounds clean. He is a warrior, so I am sure that he feels more of a connection with a woman who understands battle and the risks involved with it. I hope that he realizes that soon!

AWESOME update! I can't wait for the next one! -LG


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Ohhh second review for the same chapter. Whatever... actually this should probably be a PM, but I'm too lazy to go to your profile...

Congrats on your little boy!!!!!!!!! Don't worry about the tiny lapse in updating, writer's block happens to us all, and then of course there are always other things going on in our lives. Plus, ahem, when your beta happens to be a bit of a slacker... that adds a weekor so to the wait...

Anywho, you deserve all the nominations you get; it's a beautiful story!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Heyhey!

Obviously it's awesome, but i also just wanted to add that I love the changes you did to the bit with the arm/wrist reaching bit. It sounds much better! Good job!


Kat (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

congrats on the new baby, i'm sure he's adorable.

 

take your time with updates you're a new mom, we don't expect you to do everything

 

update when you can this story is awesome


aiko (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

ahh..don't stop there... want more..please, pretty please... *puppy dog eyes make*


Channell C. Walker (Chapter 14) - Thu 03 Feb 2011

I really like your story, but there are somethings that bother me. I don't know if you have a beta, but I think you need one. You have misspellings, wrong word usage, and you have omitted the apostrophes in many of your contractions and possessive forms. Also you use the word 'condone' wrong and it is confusing because I have no idea which word you mean to use instead. Here's the URL for condone's definition: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/condone 

I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I only want to help you become a better writer. If you need someone to look over your work before you post it I gladly offer my services. You can reach at chica2otome@yahoo.com

-Suisen


Euphoric Sorrow (Chapter 14) - Mon 24 Jan 2011

I love this story and often come back to it just to be certain that I haven't some how missed an update.  Alas this time just like many others proved my efforts to be overly optimistic.  Keep up the great work!!! I'm anxious to find out what happens next.-Euphoric Sorrow


Sepherous (Chapter 14) - Fri 14 Jan 2011

What an exciting chapter! i'm very much looking forward to the continuation of your story. I'm a new reader and i just soaked in all the chapters and its a wonderful story so far! Can't wait for more, also congrats on the little jellybean :)


Selenay (Chapter 14) - Thu 13 Jan 2011

Wow! This is so exciting! That chapter was explosive with suspense, I liked it! I love this workld you've created, it's so intriguing and flavorful!

And Ryo, I felt like I was going to be dead set against her, but I'm glad she has some redeeming qualities. Even if she is so impossible, and rude.


Selenay (Chapter 5) - Thu 13 Jan 2011

Wow, this is really cool! I'm really enjoying this! Those tree beasts....Holey-Moley! They actually creep me out! Ohhh....man, I read a book with something similar, it may not have been similar, but I remember this feeling of being so entirely frightened and disturbed by some baddie.

 

Oh! It's the modified lizard-men in the Sword of Truth series. The Mriswith! Creepy creatures, they lost their rational minds, and when they aren't moving and when they are, you can barely see them, your brain will recognize them for only an instant before dismissing it, and then forgetting you even noticed them. But by then, you're dead.


Emily (Chapter 14) - Thu 23 Dec 2010

I really enjoy this beautiful story of yours. I really adore what you have done with Kagome's character. You've kept true to it and that's something I admire greatly. Keep up the great work! i cannot wait to read more!


Lavender (Chapter 14) - Thu 16 Dec 2010

OHMAGGADDD! that battle scene was so intense! Wow words cannot describe how much I love this story! I really like the way Kagome bonded with Sprit (sorry forgot how to spell it in Japanese :P). Also, her relationship with Sesshy is completely perfect and totally resonable. I dont like stories where all of a sudden he thinks shes just soooo amazing. In your story it gradually builds, so its totally awesomesauce! This is fabulous! Keep it up!

-LavB


BlackBirdBasilica (Chapter 14) - Thu 09 Dec 2010

please please please write more cause this is soooooooo goood i am in love with your writing soo please update soon C:


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