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sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 12) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

0o0o0o0o0o!!!! I LOVE THIS! I really love how Kagome all Lets go for a ride beasty! >:3 awesome!!


SexyMikoK (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Oct 2010

I cant wait to see the next chapter. I am severely enjoying your story. Please update soon. :)


amy (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

I LOVE YOUR STORY! DO NOT STOP WRITING! HAVE YOU EVER READ THE STORY OF QUEEN ESTHER, THE KING, AND THE SAVING OF THE JEWISH PEOPLE BY THEIR  QUEEN. PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 11) - Mon 11 Oct 2010

You must be a fellow equestrian!  ^_^ 

 

LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I cannot wait for more - this story has officially placed me so far at the edge of my seat that I fell off it at the end of the chapter. It is a great play on the movie "One Night with the King"!  Haha.

Love it! PLease update soon!

~Sandreline


Dana Daidouji (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

This is such a great story! It's coming along so nicely :)


G (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

Nice. I'm being oh, so very observant about Kagome's technique, so very bright to leave the review immediatelly and then, I get to the end of the chapter where you clearly state where you got your knowledge from... Taking about being hotheaded...

And you wrong about one thing. Taming a horse in only an hour IS possible.Usually, it indeed takes more time, but it IS possible. I managed in about 40mins... (Heh... Good, old times... Horses are the only things which I'm not being hotheaded with...)

Once again - great chapter! (Should I mention the suddenly and deliciously hot atmosphere at the end?)

Keep up, please, no matter how long it takes to update. I'm following you and I will till the end.

 


G (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

Wow, what a great chapter! I was truly mesmerized by the scene of taming the horse! Tell me, did you read anythuing about horse's body language? Because, you see, what Kagome did is nothing short of a technique of the first, original "Horse Whisperer".This is the was the lead female horse in the wild living herd would have behaved to pacify (or, rather put in his place) the horse that broke the herd's rules, this is how Horse Whisperer also behaves. (I studied it some time ago and used this knowledge, it really works! I too used it in my fiction.)


jojo661538 (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

wow another great chapter i love i mean absolutely love this story keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^


Momo (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

Do not fret too much, I find this chapter went quite well and flow-y. Keep up the great work!


Mishikaiya (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

I am sorry the original was deleted! I know that can be devastating. *shudders at thought* Anyway, lovely chapter. I feel you explained Kagome's handling of the horse very well as I've seen it before on tv. Good stuff.


darke wulf (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

Fabulous job!  This story is an absolute treat!  I can't wait to read more.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

0o0o0o0o Such a lovely update!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

Look marvelous, darling!! Glad to be of assistance. I know I've already read this, but I wanted to review anyway. :P

I really like the way the story is progressing thus far. Good character development and general flow. I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Hehehe... I get a sneak preview... and that excites me.

Ursh... now if only I could get inspired enough to sit my a$$ down and get the next chapter on Sangria done. Ugh! I'm a failure... *headdesk*

Much love! Can't wait for the next one!


Sena (Chapter 10) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

Oh my, I quite like this story! I have only begun reading it, I went through all 10 chapters at once! I am enjoying how much interaction Sesshomaru and Kagome are having in this story. Please keep writing it, this is a lovely story so far.


Vrey (Chapter 10) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

...i need more >_>


summerbirdy (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Sep 2010

uwaaah! I only just started reading this (saw r0o's awesome pic and has to read) and I couldn't stop until last words.. You have just added yourself on my list of authors who keep me hanging on every word they write.

Can't wait this to continue. I love the way you make all characters and their behaviour have a place in this story as well as Kagome's knowledge.. love it love it love it!!!!


Mishikaiya (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Sep 2010

To first answer your questions, before I forget, this chapter did not feel rushed. Everything leading up to this point in terms of making the characters' thoughts and feelings known all coincide in a realistic progression. (And as this was your favorite to write, it was my favorite to read thus far!)

I did not want to leave a review after every single chapter since I went through all of them in one sitting this evening. I feel your story is incredibly written and the plot is rich. I love how the characters are portrayed with the perfect amount of insight into their thoughts and feelings. I am very glad to have found this story, though now that I have read what there is thus far, I am sad to admit I had it on the backburner as a future read for so long! I have not found any difficulites in the amount of dialogue because I feel that you write it when it fits.

In short, I have greatly enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next chapter. :)


Carla! (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Sep 2010

I think it was wonderfully written and the conversation in this chapter was awesome! I will look forward to your next update! Good luck! =)


Dawn of Roses Kiss (Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Sep 2010

awesome job! Keep up the good work! Oh and congratulations!!!! I like to save reviews for the last chapter btw. Sorry I'm an annoying reviewer like that :P


Fish Wishes (Chapter 10) - Mon 27 Sep 2010

The plot of your story is very intriging. Though the style of writing itself is not complicated, your use of symbolism is very nice. Because I am simply crazy when it comes to grammar, punctuation, and spelling, I find it frustrating when a word was misplaced. Meaning, you wanted to use a different word, but used one similar instead.

Please do not be disheartened by critism, I just wanted to ask if you were going to go back and fix the chapters before? Admittedly, if I find a story with many mistakes in the first chapter or two, I stop reading it. I do not want your story to loose exposure because of something such as this.If I can offer any help, I would be glad to.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Fish~

 


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