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Kanda (Chapter 18) - Sun 09 Jul 2017

awh, it's sad to know that i've come to the last update of chapter and know that it's not the end. it's a really great story, not to mention you have an incredible writing style. there's a word i'm looking for to describe it, lol, but can't remember it atm. maybe it's elegant. you have an elegant writing style. that's probably it, lol, for now. anyway, i hope yer inspired to come back and finish this story. i really would like to know the outcome and especially where those void demons are coming from!! hope yer enjoying life as well and that you won't ferget us readers! <3


Kanda (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Jul 2017

you were nervous about yer beginning? gurl, this getting to be a great start! i'm nervous myself about updating my own fic on here, yer writing of chapters and the words themselves are remarkable and well organized. *sigh* wish mine was like yers.


stephanie (Chapter 18) - Thu 18 May 2017

Wonderful story


ponpiri (Chapter 18) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

nooooo. i'm so mad I started this story only to realize that it's incomplete and probably won't be finished. 


LadyBri23 (Chapter 18) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

I wish this would be updated. I want to see what happens next. This story is great so far.


Orchidaceae (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Mar 2016

How's it going?  Hope things are well.  Was wondering if you will be finishing this story or not??????? Please let us know.  Thanks.  Luv your story :)


SilverInu93 (Chapter 18) - Sun 08 Nov 2015

i would love to see this story finished it caught my attention


KShadeslady (Chapter 18) - Tue 05 May 2015

I love that you can review a chapter more than once here. That whole nuzzling scene was very HOT by the way. And very nicely done.  Cheers! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 18) - Tue 05 May 2015

I loved this storY and I truly hope you bring it to a proper finish. She needs to finish the garden, they need to solve their conflicts and of course they need to vanquish the void demons! So many loose ends to tie up! Please, Please, Please...this is really too good to just leave hanging. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 17) - Tue 05 May 2015

Really nice chapter! Yeah! Shippo! Really loved their reunion. I like that you have addressed something most don't, several wives for political alliances. This would be normal during that period. I like Honoria's character. I'm glad they aren't all scheming harpies. So sad for her position. Sigh, only one more chapter to go. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 May 2015

Another really nice chapter. I like the easy nature of their bonding over personal stories. I am loving Kanga. I have a soft spot for Tengu (have you ever read The Heavenward Path? It's delightful, there are two slim novels). Can't wait to see him in action. Alright here's my moan. You wrote 'in all intensive purposes his future wives.' That phrase should be 'for all intents and purposes'. It does tend to get run together. Lovely chapter and Thank  You!


KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Tue 05 May 2015

Very satisfying chapter! Putting down a snotty Ryo and being tended too by Sessh. Just delightful.  And because I am a spelling and grammar nazi, it's reins when talking about a horses bridle, not reigns, which means to rule. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Tue 05 May 2015

I like the way you did that. Gone us the present action and then go back in time to bring us back to it. Hmm confusing sentence, but I think you know what I mean. Again, you did a good job with the fight scene. Just think of it like dancing, with swords. I also like the conflicting emotions of our major characters. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Tue 05 May 2015

Oh I missed reviewing this chapter. Yeah Kagome, took matters into her own hands. keep up the good work. cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Tue 05 May 2015

Such a fun chapter. I enjoyed it very much. You have his character down very well As well as Kagome's. I will most likely finish this today. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Tue 05 May 2015

Loved, Loved, LOVED this chapter! Okay, I'm a horse owner and a huge fan of Pat Parelli and Buck Branahan! You don't manhandle a horse, you become their partner and leader! Turning her back and walking away usually sparks their curiosity and they will follow you. Approaching face on is what a predator would do. Okay enough! You did an awesome job on the horse whispering. Cheers! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 May 2015

Oh, that was a really lovely chapter. You know my favorite part of the 2nd Karate Kid movie was the tea ceremony. It was so elegant. I hope one day to participate in one. She has shaken him to his core. Very nice. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 04 May 2015

That was wonderful. Of course, we all knew that Kagome and Rin would be wonderful together. Loved the chapter and your attention to detail. It brings the story to life. I understand the want for more dialogue but I really enjoy all the loving details you include. Thanks for that. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 May 2015

Another really lovely chapter. I like all the details you include. It's makes for a lovely mental image. Thanks do much for this delightful story. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 May 2015

Wahoo! That was awesome! I love how you built it up And how Kagome befriended the demoness and then stood up to him bristling with indignation! Brought a smile and a giggle! Nicely done! Cheers!


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