Dreamer
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Created On: 08/08/2016 09:35:37
Hey, Thanks for your Review on my story Frozen. I really appreciated your comments on how to make the story better.
Hope you keep reading.  Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thanks. I am laughing at myself right now because I re-read my review and realized I made a couple of errors myself. We all make mistakes but we eventually improve on them as we go forward. You will get better as you go forward too. Trust and believe.
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Sessakag
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Created On: 08/04/2016 15:23:30
Thank you for another fabulous review of Cold! I'm really happy you like it so far. As to your questions, Kagome is 22 and Sesshomaru is 52. I'm still unsure if I want Kagome to be a virgin or experienced, I'm debating. The new chapter has a little bit of action, so I hope you like it! Hope to hear from you again!  Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I think Kagome should be a virgin. I think it will be more interesting because of their age difference and I don't think Kagome has found the right person to give it up to yet especially with her mysterious past.
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Sessakag
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Created On: 07/30/2016 03:50:01
Hello, hello! Thank you for reviewing Cold again!! I love reading what you think! It was a bit slow, I'm being extra careful because I am way out of my comfort zone with lol. Never wrote a scifi. I wasn't planning on making a glossary for the words but I could do that, though some probably won't translate to anything normal as the words were made up in heat of writing. I'd love to tell you more about Kagome's origins but that would spoil the surprise  I hope you continue to enjoy and speak your thoughts on this new story. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Hi there! No worries on that glossary. I'll use my imagination on the possible meanings of the words. You are doing very well on this story since you are out of your comfort zone. I can't wait to find out Kagome's origins and secrets. lol. Most definitely I will continue to read and review this new story.
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Sessakag
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Created On: 07/28/2016 04:12:10
Hello again! Thank you for reviewing Cold! I'm glad you are still find the the story interesting. Hope to hear from you again!! 
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Sessakag
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Created On: 07/25/2016 12:12:21
Thank you for your thoughtful review of Cold! I'm glad you are enjoying it. Angel is pretty long, I know. It was my first fanfic started back in 2009 so I understand how difficult it can be to get into. I made a ton of errors  But I do hope you like my new story all the way to the end! Thank you! Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I most definitely will continue reading to the end and you have a fan in me. Thank you for taking the time to send me response on my review.
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Created On: 07/20/2016 06:00:47
Hiya,
Thanks for reviewing Only Time will Tell. Well, Rin seems to be hiding, 'cause I posted the raw unedited version of the story to Dokuga. I haven't yet edited and added more content for her. It's just part of my proofing process. I'll re-read tomorrow and or add some stuff for her, probably won't be much, but just enough for her LOL not to seem like she's hiding. XD. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thanks. lol
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Moonlight Silk
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Created On: 07/18/2016 22:01:06
Thank you so much for that great review. It was long and meaningful. As always your kind praises of my work are appreciated. 
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Created On: 07/17/2016 06:31:09
Edited By Pyreite On: 07/19/2016 00:05:36
Hiya,
Thanks for reviewing Family Ties. I agree all points you raised. I actually started FT four years ago and my writing has matured since. I won't be redoing the earlier chapters, so Kagome being childish makes alot of sense. I wrote FT initially as a response to a DD night. So the prompts being what they were inspired much of the early drabble-chapters. The chapters since number 15 were just written to see whether or not I could make sense of Kagome having a hanyou son. The rest is an experiment to see if I can juggle three adults in a complex relationship. Two being much older than Kagome by several centuries. Mamoru just makes it all even more complicated.
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Well, I'm not sure actually about Sesshy's mother. He'd probably go to her for advice. Also I have no idea if Mamoru is like a normal hanyou or a normal youkai. He's a product of the Shikon jewel not so much a normal human/youkai pregnancy. So I'm also not sure if Sesshy would make him his heir even if he is his son. Well to be honest with the Inu/Kags relationship I'm not sure. I don't plan any of my drabbles they're written spur of the moment. Probably why alot of the stuff in-story is all over the place. XD. Sorry about that. I just write and try to mash it all together as I go. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thanks for responding back. You are right about not wanting to re-write the first beginning chapters. It would be tiresome for you. I was thinking that now that Sessho is in his son's life now maybe some major changes could happen to Mamoru under the power of his father's youki like being changed from a hanyou to a full blood youkai if this makes sense to you. Mamoru can start learning the inuyoukai culture and become strong instead of being wimpy. After all he is heir to the Western Lands and should start learning this. Is Sessho's mother in this story?
Why did Inuyasha and Kagome divorce in the first place, have an affair with Sessho and then remarried Inuyasha again. It shows how fickle she is. Rin seems more mature than she does. Why didn't Kagome become pregnant while she was married to Inuyasha the first time and now that she has married him again or is this something that will come later? I hope I have not bored you with my questions and ideas. Thanks for listening. You are a good writer and I am going to become one of your fans.
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Luna-san
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Created On: 06/21/2016 13:47:00
Thank you for your review on Full Moon It really made my day and made me more confident about my writing
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Siera Serenity Star
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Created On: 04/06/2016 00:24:40
Thanks for your review on You're Still Here! I'm glad you liked it and lol yeah it does have a lot of hidden teasers that could make a much larger show. I may be making a large fanfict story that features the origins of it.
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