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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 11
LM Bluejay wrote:
Aubrey Simone wrote:
Hey guys!

I'm currently in the car on my way to Ohio, so once I get access to the internet again (my phone works, but I'd prefer my laptop) I'll review the recent entries and then post the next prompts.

~Aubrey


Ooh!! Is your destination Cedar Point??? I live in Michigan and have been plotting to get there all summer...I shall conquer the Gatekeeper if it's the last summer thing I do! lol


Ah, no, I'm actually in the Columbus area visiting family, but I've been to Cedar Point - I don't remember it though lol, it was years ago.

Anyway, I haven't done reviews yet, but here are everyone's prompts!


Rin-Rin:



LM Bluejay:

 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 17
06: As Destiny May Have It Rated M

Somehow that was the hardest so far.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 11
Rin-Rin wrote:
06: As Destiny May Have It Rated M

Somehow that was the hardest so far.


Gah, sorry everyone! I've been with family all week, and I haven't seen these guys for quite some time, so I've been trying to spend as much time as possible with them.

At any rate, I know that I still have to do reviews for Rin-Rin's last two entries (is that right?) and Bluejay's one, so I'll do that right now, and in the meantime, here's the next prompt for


Rin-Rin:


~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 17
Yeah, last two.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 12
Finally, here's the entry for my second prompt:
Revelations And Heartaches

EDIT BY WICCAN: This story is rated M, no YIMs under 16!!
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 11
Sakura Dragon wrote:
Finally, here's the entry for my second prompt:
Revelations And Heartaches

EDIT BY WICCAN: This story is rated M, no YIMs under 16!!


Good job Sakura! I still have to review your entry (as well as one of Rin-Rin's) but here's your next prompt!

Sakura Dragon:


It'll be interesting to see how you manage to work this into your story (and your next one is really going to throw you for a loop *hinthint* lol)

~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 12
You don't scare me that easily. It only took me thirty seconds to figure out what i was going to do.

Also, I'm really sorry for making you work extra, Wiccan. Since nothing much is going on yet, I apparently had a blond moment and forgot that I rated my story M and that I have to post warnings for every chapter. Sorry about that.
 
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Sakura Dragon wrote:
You don't scare me that easily. It only took me thirty seconds to figure out what i was going to do.

Also, I'm really sorry for making you work extra, Wiccan. Since nothing much is going on yet, I apparently had a blond moment and forgot that I rated my story M and that I have to post warnings for every chapter. Sorry about that.


Not to worry... everyone is generally very good about noting the ratings, and ANYONE, including me, can forget stuff!!

~~Wiccan~~
 
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Woop woop! Chapter two is read-eh!

Prompt 2: Royal Flush
Words: 4483 of action filled angry Kags and Sess as the storyline falls into place!
Rating: MA. NO YIMs
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 11
Lady Kirara wrote:
Woop woop! Chapter two is read-eh!

Prompt 2: Royal Flush
Words: 4483 of action filled angry Kags and Sess as the storyline falls into place!
Rating: MA. NO YIMs


Good job! Here's the next prompt for

Lady Kirara:



I can't wait to see how you use this one!

Also, here are the updates placements so far:


First Place: Rin-Rin, with six entries completed

Second Place: Lady Kirara and Sakura Dragon with two entries apiece

Third Place: LM Bluejay, with one entry completed

Runner-Up: Aleksandra, with nothing complete as of yet

I'll be messaging Aleksandra if she doesn't respond to this thread by tomorrow evening to see if she's just super busy or simply doesn't want to participate any longer, but as for the rest of you, keep up the great work! It's been really nice so far to read everyone's work, and I have to say that you guys are almost making me want to participate in my own challenge lol!

Anyway, keep having fun, ladies!

~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 1
Finallly....here is my first entry!!! Sorry I've been M.I.A I've got a lot to catching up to do now!!!

www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/8690/1
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 5
Next time you are doing such a challenge, I would like to be involved... i haven't written in a while and my muse could use a little jumpstart....
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 8 Months ago Karma: 11
Aleksandra wrote:
Finallly....here is my first entry!!! Sorry I've been M.I.A I've got a lot to catching up to do now!!!

www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/8690/1


Ah, nice to hear from you, Aleksandra! I was starting to get worried lol! Anyway, I've yet to review your entry, which I'll get to sometime today, but until then, here's your next prompt

Aleksandra:



TheMikoShivae wrote:
Next time you are doing such a challenge, I would like to be involved... i haven't written in a while and my muse could use a little jumpstart....

Sure thing! I'll probably be running this challenge again after this round finishes, so I'll be sure to let you know! Thanks for the interest!

To the rest of my contestants, I hope you're regretting the decision to enter I mean having fun!

~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 10
Entry two!! (woot woot)

City of Flames
Rated MA NO YIMS
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/8665/2
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 11
LM Bluejay wrote:
Entry two!! (woot woot)

City of Flames
Rated MA NO YIMS
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/8665/2


Good job Bluejay! Here's your next prompt!

LM Bluejay:




Also, have I reviewed everyone's entries from the past couple weeks? Let me know if I haven't!

~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 17
Nightmare

There is my number seven entry. Ha! I did it! *Does happy dance*

Rated M
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 11
Rin-Rin wrote:
Nightmare

There is my number seven entry. Ha! I did it! *Does happy dance*

Rated M


Thanks for posting, Rin-Rin! I haven't read or reviewed yet (I'm fairly busy, as I said in my message), but here's your next prompt:



Good luck, and I'll try my best to get around to reading your #7 entry as soon as I can!

Also, just in case any of you get a second to respond, please let me know how your prompts are going (and whether I reviewed everyone's last entries - I don't remember )! If anyone needs help or a hint, don't hesitate to ask - I might be hosting this challenge but I'm not against giving a few pointers!


~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 12
Hey.

My chapter is 2/3 plotted and 1/3 written. I'm afraid I haven't had much time and energy to write recently between school and work, but the ideas are there. I hope I get some time over the weekend to finish.

You reviewed my last chapter.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 10 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 10
My work shift has shifted to nights but I'm sure I can find a way around that. Hopefully by the end of the week I should have my next prompt out.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 9 Months ago Karma: 17
(Was formerly Rin-Rin)

Re-doing my entries: 01 The Other World

MA
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 2 Months ago Karma: 11
WunderBerry wrote:
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Re-doing my entries: 01 The Other World

MA


Hey Wunder (love the new name!)! It's been so long since I've even thought about this thread, but I was looking through my documents and noticed all of my notes for this and came to remind myself of the challenge.

It's nice to see that not everyone has forgotten about this, and I'll be reading your new entry (a full seven months late ) in a few minutes.

To everyone else, would you all still be interested in completing this challenge, or should I scrap this thread and begin anew? Please let me know, if you can -- if I have to, I'll bug PM all of you until I get a response, or just kick you out politely inform you that your place in the Challenge has been revoked.

Let me know as soon as possible, kay?

~Aubrey
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 2 Months ago Karma: 17
I've lost interest in InuYasha fanfiction in general, so you can count me out. It was fun while it lasted, and hope you finally find someone who can finish this!
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 2 Months ago Karma: 12
Hey. I feel really bad for dropping off the planet like that, but I am still interested in this challenge. It's just that I'm a really lazy procrastinator with a lot of ideas that have a tendency to escape me completely when I sit down in front of my computer to write.
But I still want to do this and will try my best. If you still want me, that is.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 2 Months ago Karma: 38
Ohemgee.

Aubrey. Since Wunder dropped, can I have her place? I WAS SO I UPSET WHEN YOU STOPPED TAKING PARTICIPANTS.

Pleaaaaaaaaaaase?

I will be such a good little writer.
 
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 9 Years, 1 Month ago Karma: 11
Sakura Dragon wrote:
Hey. I feel really bad for dropping off the planet like that, but I am still interested in this challenge. It's just that I'm a really lazy procrastinator with a lot of ideas that have a tendency to escape me completely when I sit down in front of my computer to write.
But I still want to do this and will try my best. If you still want me, that is.

Of course you can still participate! So long as you understand that you won't win if you don't pick up the pace lol!

No, but seriously, I definitely understand the whole want-to-write-but-can't-because-the-muse-is-playing-mind-games thing, so believe me, you've got my sympathy!

~Aubrey


Kagome Yuki Niwa wrote:
Ohemgee.

Aubrey. Since Wunder dropped, can I have her place? I WAS SO I UPSET WHEN YOU STOPPED TAKING PARTICIPANTS.

Pleaaaaaaaaaaase?

I will be such a good little writer.

Of course you can! I'll have to scramble her prompts - I don't want you to have an unfair advantage. I'll also make you a new banner, so please let me know if there are any colors you absolutely hate, or text you have trouble reading, or anything else that would help me make it!

Welcome to Hell the challenge!

~Aubrey
 
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