What next, what next, what next???!!! :::yelling like a 2 year old ;):::: But really...what happens next? :O
Hi. First thing. I really like this story, and I hope you continue to write it. I am quite intrigued thus far at only 2 chapters in.
That said, I have to ask. Do you have a beta? Do you have someone helping you edit and spotting grammatical errors. I ask because as good as your story is, it is a little difficult to read with the number of grammatical issue I have spotted so far. I keep having to stop and re-read sentences each time I come across one, and that makes it difficult to follow.
If you don't have a beta, I would be glad to help you out. Just drop me a PM if you are interested.
Again, I hope you continue to write this, as it is very interesting.
Blessings,
Jaded Samuri
Ugh! Just when it was getting soooooo good.....a cliff hanger! I love this story and wait on pins and needles for the next chapter. I can’t wait to see how the next chapter plays out! I bet Rin is the reason that he has more of the curse than anyone else.........Can’t wait to find out!
love your story cant wait for the rest of it its so thrilling and exciting left me sitting at the edge of my seat. great job!!!!!!!!
Rocky (Chapter 15) - Sun 30 Sep 2018
Really hope to see a new chapter soon. This is getting good. What will happen now and how long will both Sesshomaru and Kagome be out for. So many questions. Will they try to hurt Kagome while she is unconscious? What about Inuyasha and his sword? What will happen next, I really need to know. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
I would hate to be in Sesshomaru's shoes right now for the simple fact he has a lot of explaining to do...its not going to help his temper.
Got to hand it to Sesshomaru's mother...the sword is the key, but I'll doubt there's no need for it.
Freaking. Amazing. Point blank period. I absolut loved this chapter and the build up for the next one. Can't wait for the next update! :)
Jamie (Chapter 15) - Wed 29 Aug 2018
Wow... Just wow. Your imagination is a wicked place! Loving how this tale is spinning and eagerly await the next update!
hooray im so glad to see an update from you for this story! its getting so good! ugh sess is so stubborn! i hope he learns his lesson soon! but boy will he be pissed when he wakes up! haha. good for kagome though for showing those lords who is boss! :)
Oh my F'n gosh that was a great chapter.... I read it twice such drama it was so inlightening that I was laughing at the part when Sesshomaru saw Kagome sitting in his throne.... Oh that was a good one. Ahh the stupid bear or should we call him a boar.... lol... I cannot wait until Sesshomaru realizes Kagome is actually the miko that can save the world and saved him. The hunt will be on soon I hope.
Update soon Please.
Absolutely loving this story. I can’t wait until the next chapter. Each time I read a new one I remember how much I love reading it. Definitely one of my favorites. I can’t wait to see the reaction of Sess after all of this.
This chapter was wonderful, I don't want to wait at the end of September for a new chapter, I guess I will have to wait, I hope you update two to three chapters, see you soon!
That update was AMAZING!!! So excited to finally be reading the interactions between Sessh and Kags!
Lorena (Chapter 15) - Mon 27 Aug 2018
Oh man, it wasn't until that last part that I remembered that technically Sesshomaru was the most affected by the curse! Thank goodness Kagome is not an airhead or she totally would've killed him by just plainly focusing on showing her power~ I can't wait to read what happens when they both wake up
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