Omg!!!! What an amazing story!!!! I couldn't stop reading it!!! Please update quickly!!!
Just...wow. I just read this over the span of a few days and I'm a bit blown away! The premise is so lovely, fresh, and unique; it's entirely refreshing to read something that doesn't rely so heavily on overused trope! As a reader, I feel so cared for when I read a piece where the author really takes time to write with great depth i.e. they write in a way that assumes the reader is intelligent by way of pushing use of complicated themes and plot devices. You have obviously taken great care to both research and thread mythology together to blend seamlessly with the original fandom. I also want to compliment you on your pacing. I'm impressed with how fluidly Kagome's adventures worked together - I felt neither rushed nor bogged down in content - which has left me feeling really situated in my understanding of her character. I look forward to you developing Sesshoumaru's character, as well, now that he's taken stage once again. Thank you for taking the time to write so well - I wholeheartedly appreciate the care, time, and patience you put into this for all of us in this community. I await the next chapter with bated breath!
Pearl (Chapter 16) - Fri 09 Nov 2018
Oh my Gosh. ..I am addicted to this story. I just spent the last three days reading everything you had posted. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Pearl
Kat (Chapter 16) - Wed 07 Nov 2018
MORE MORE MORE please?
Really well written so far, definitely an interesting tale and cannot wait to read more. The polar changes in some of the personalities was shocking, but the years made it understandable. Certainly looking forward to the next chapter and the war.
This is truly an amazing story. So well done and properly thought out. I adore lore legends and all there is to magic. Having bound everyone to the cause of saving the youkai, (Youkai, yoki are considered like sheep even in plural. The word youkais is wrong. The only reason I know this is the fact that a japanese friend of mine made it clear to me every time I made the same mistake by bopping me on the head.)
Sad that Kagome has to die at the end perhaps the Kami will grace her with life after all that she has acomplished since no other champion could do what Kagome is doing now. I read this story three times already I know your updates are sporadic but please when you have the next chapter up let kagome kick some arse. Oh I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru will do when he finds Kagome in his chambers with Rin. I wonder what Kagome will find about the curse effect on Sesshomaru and why his soul was far off than the others.
Update soon.
Johann (Chapter 16) - Fri 02 Nov 2018
I'm so inlove with this story..hope you get to see this thru the end..tnx for sharing ????
Faith (Chapter 16) - Fri 02 Nov 2018
Wow such an amazing story!!! I can't wait for the next update!
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