I like how detailed you write about different cultures, but just an advice since it was a long time since you updated i forgot who is who and from where? It gets confusing so many cultures and different creatures. It is definitely a challenge to try and write a piece that includes demons from myths in different parts of the world and connect them in a understanding pattern. I studied history and am familiar with many but not everyone is so i like how you give details but at times i got confused with her guardians since i forget about them. Just an advice try to shorten the times between updates so we don't forget the plot. I get it that it's not easy since i can see the amount of work you put in this. I appreciate and applaud but I really forgot all about sango and miroku already! Wish you good luck and take care! Hope your muse will be agreeable and happy so you will be able to update!
This story is amazing, even if it is taking forever to get to KagomeXSesshomaru. Please update soon.
Didi (Chapter 7) - Tue 03 Jan 2017
What an epic story! I love it.
Loveyaa (Chapter 7) - Mon 02 Jan 2017
Quite an fascinating story. It will be interesting to see how we go from where we are now to the beginning of the story with Kagome back in Japan. A few grammatical errors, but you have quite the way with wrapping up the reading into your tale. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
It was long and beautifuly written. I loved all the trials Kagome has to through to prove herself and get the jewels for the amulet. Can't wait until she gets to that last mysterious one. I am also waiting for the part how she ended up in Sessho's dungeon and facing her trial. I bet the last book is in the Western Palace. I just love this story.
Excellent writing and imagination.
Awesome story. Hoping for more updates.
Beautifully done. Hope your bf is doing better. Can't wait to read the next chapters!
Natalia (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
So intense! Half way there! And I know who the last guardian soul mate is Hana! Thx for updating a good fic!
snow (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
I have been waiting for this story to update its one of my most favorites! its progressing wonderfully and the story telling is exceptional I can't wait to see the next chapters to come I am so fascinated by this story!
I have to say this does have an interesting twist to this. I am getting the sense of foreshadowing of things to come, especially the test Kqgome went through with this guardian, it makes me wonder...hmm...I hope you update soon.
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