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Debra (Chapter 32) - Wed 01 Mar 2017

Oh wow! She finally told him. i look forward to the next one.


Koree (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

YAAAAAAAY !!!! She told him !!! He's happy about it !!! HE SAID HE LOVES L O V E HER !!! Amazing chap :)


Buttercream (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

Yay. I am so glad that Sesshomaru told Kagome that he loved her.  I can not wait for the next update.


hana sora (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

Yey finally, the kiyomi bitch can just go away! because kagome is now pregnant


Natalia (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

Do I see a flicker of hope on the horizon?  amazing chapter!  I may reread it later to see the emotions better since I literally gulped the chapter!  thx a lot for updating! 


Toni (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

Can't wait for the next chapters


Ree-san (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

So happy that they have finally talked and she told him she's pregnant!  I think he should just announce it.  Rin is a big girl and what happened to her is a reality.  He should just let it be known that she married him without telling him the truth and that she has blackmailed/committed crimes as a part of coverup.  No matter what they'll be scandal.  But, putting it out there takes away any power she really has.  


Mona (Chapter 32) - Tue 28 Feb 2017

NOOOOOO!!!  I was so hoping she did not so easily go back to him, oh man now I'm disappointed in how this fanfic is turning out.  


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 31) - Sat 18 Feb 2017

Good chapter, Happy Belated Valentine's Day!


Tana_san (Chapter 31) - Wed 15 Feb 2017

So good to see that Sesshoumaru changed his thought on it just being lust but he still needs to tell that to Kagome. She needs to know he wasn't just using her to saite an urge oravenge a grudge between he and his brother. She wasn't some toy to be played with and tossed back and forth between brothers.

While most would have scoffed at Sesshoumaru using sex to combat her anger, I think sometimes having angry sex can help lower the intensity of the arguement if done properly and to me Sesshoumaru knows her well enough by now to know he needed her to drop her defenses enough to really get down to what they need to discuss. Anger isn't going to solve anything and it'll only make matters worse as it feeds off emotion.

Just as they begin to get going she has vomit. Not every guy would stand by and help you when you're sick. Good going Sessh! Now it's time to talk and the phone rings right?!? Isn't that always the way? Just when you feel the time is right...boom! Ring!!!!!

Just hope Kouga has all the best of news for them because they really need a break right now.

Ta for now,Love!!!

JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 30) - Wed 15 Feb 2017

So sorry for not reviewing this sooner, my friend. Our internet was having some issues and it would disconnect at random times. Since we were having issues with the phone too, I called to have it checked out. Long story short, it's fixed now and it was on their lines not my home's lines, so no cost to me!

You know, if I were Kagome I just wouldn't be able to hold back with all the love Sesshoumaru was pouring into seeing her standing at his door. Just from the greeting alone without words I could tell he felt so lost and remorseful over everything. His love was just so very obvious. He then lets her go and she just walks into the bedroom without one word to him. He took that so well and he waited her out, gave her space to collect her thoughts and rest from the long trip home.

I know Kagome still hasn't talked all her feelings out inside herself but to me, she left him hanging in pure silence and uneasiness way too long. He just kept quiet and seamingly controlled but you gotta know that had to be sooo hard!

By the time she did talk to him it was only because he prompted her and after all this time she starts out by making him the total bad guy. She clearly doesn't remember it was her that threw herself at him and kissed him for all she was worth when they first met in his office for her interview and what hot blooded male wouldn't want to go in for more when the offering is there. InuYasha be darned. InuYasha had gotten his taste of other woman over the centuries and even married and had a child not long before his plans to "re claim" Kagome. Even though she didn't know it, InuYasha betrayed her way before Sesshoumaru did.

That first kiss in Sesshoumaru's office led to beginning to have sex on his desk and they were interrupted by his wife and by the way the conversation went Kagome could tell he was in a marriage that was in the throes of ending and later that night when he sought her out he told her he wanted her, told her to stop him if she wanted to and she encouraged him more. There was something more than lust there within him and now he's telling her he did it all for lust. He couldn't explain what the pull she had over him was at the time, he knew he needed to explore this feeling further...with her and this was something he knew was wrong because she was his brother's woman at one time and InuYasha had plans to re claim her again when the time was right, but other than that Sesshoumaru was just following normal attraction behavior and being inuyoukai, it made more passionate and intense because he had gotten to touch and feel her in his arms, kiss her... passions that spoke volumes to his senses...

Oh geez, here I go again...getting so involved. You are coming along so well in your writing skills, my friend. You're learning to be more descriptive making us feel like we there in the story. You are building better flow and intrigue. I keep wanting to jump up and down with every cliffhanger and scream. You're creating better emotion to like or hate the characters. You have grown so much from the earlier fics and I want you to know how proud I am of you. You have taken on all aspects for writing by proof reading each chapter yourself. I know the desperate need for a beta most writers have. You're getting better all the time and these love triangles, drama, and intrigue is your thing. I love reading the reviews as much as the story! Seeing just how much others are getting so involved is amazing.

Well, I'd better go review the next chapter for you after I skim over what I read before th internet went bad.

Love Ya!!!!

JEN


Aviva (Chapter 31) - Mon 30 Jan 2017

Oops! Read chapter 30 last night and reviewed it afterwards but fell asleep after chap 31without reviewing. I remembered that I didnt review the chapter and decided to do it, however, I clicked on the previous chapter without realizing the error and reviewed it again instead of 31. Well its the thought that counts. xxx


Aviva (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Jan 2017

Wow! Great chapter. Just what they both need to vent their frustrations. Seriously though its time Kagome forgets about the past and live. As Sesshomaru said the past cannot be changed but the future is of their making, and there is a baby on the way. I hope she tells him about the pregnancy whether or not he is preoccupied with other matters. Lastly I am not downplaying the wrongs Sesshomaru did to Kagome, but if she loves him I think she has a big enough heart to forgive him completely. He has apologized to her knowing that the truth will hurt her. She asked him for honesty and he reciprocated, that shows he is willing to change for her. Its time Kouga found some incriminating evidence to help Sesshomaru with his divorce. Update soon. 


Aviva (Chapter 30) - Mon 30 Jan 2017

Its a lot for Kagome to handle hearing the blatant truth from Sesshomaru. I can understand the pain she must feel. I hope she can forgive him.

 


Koree (Chapter 31) - Sun 29 Jan 2017

Great just when she was going to tell him BUT if it's good news from Kouga then it's a ok interruption . Anywho amazing chap :)


hana sora (Chapter 31) - Thu 26 Jan 2017

That was so close!!! just tell him. . 


Inudemoness (Chapter 31) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

All this waiting is making me pull my hair!!! When will she tell him? How will he react!!?? And they needed that lil bit to vent out their frustration....Gr8 chapter!!! Keep the good work coming :D


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 31) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

Oh my goodness, why is it that when a woman or a man gets ready to say something important to each other there is always some kind of interruption, it never fails. (lol) Oh well I suppose something is going to make her change her mind about telling him about the baby.  If it were me I would just go ahead and say what I came there to tell him, get it out of the way and be done with it, then deal with the aftermath later.  I know Kagome is feeling really fragile at the moment but I hope she does not let that stop her from doing what she came to his apartment to do and that is to tell Sessho about is child. He will either accept the news or not. Since he is suppose to be so much in love with her, he would be over joyed because he will get his first heir.

I could go on with this inane rambling and just say that this was a wonderful chapter. Excellent writing. I hope the next installment comes sooner than later, if RL will allow you. You are such a good writer. You get better and better with each story you post. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

 


Sesshomaru's heart (Chapter 31) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

This comment is for "love and faith"... are you sure you don't want to change your screen name? Because your comments does not reflect either. I get you are upset with our hero but how is he a male where? How many women has he slept with? We don't get that within this story based on the portrayal of his character.  His wife manipulated him with much help and now he is stuck with her. We were told that there relationship is really one for show so.... not sure how you generated your hypothesis. So since it has to be an emotional response to how you want the story to progress in will excuse your flaming comment but I will be defending Sesshomaru's honor in cases like this... now have a good da but seriously... Chill out. ;p


Sesshomaru's heart (Chapter 31) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

I loved the chapter. Please update soon....I believe that our Sesshomaru is so distracted by trying to get her back that he can't smell her pregnancy or maybe he isn't paying attention. 

This next part is directed to reviewer Jazz; how is Kagome weak in your opinion? True I was upset with her selfish position but now she does have the power. She can take what she wants because now with her memories back there is no excuse.  It's her choice. Eyes wide if you will. He was the only one brave enough to be completely honest with her. He could have lied but he didn't and he continues to be open with her even now. We were already told about his limited communication skills but his actions speaks volumes. Once you get over your emotional reaction you will see reason too...props to the author on this story because it takes real skill to evoke emotions and have readers relate to and care about the characters. Can't wait to read the next chapter.


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