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Mona (Chapter 27) - Thu 14 Jul 2016

I hope he doesn't find her and if he does she rejects him.


roberta. (Chapter 27) - Thu 14 Jul 2016

Hmm sesshy made a mess of things.


Liddy (Chapter 26) - Tue 28 Jun 2016

Now that I have read all the chapters anticipation is killing me. Please update soon!!


Liddy (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Jun 2016

I started reading this fic on my phone two days ago and wasn't able to leave any reviews. So here it goes. I love your story. The first chapter set up the entire plot beautifully. I especially like how you portrayed Kagome's state of mind, the way she feels about her life now and the uncertainty of the future. Every chapter flowed smoothly into the next making the story easy to read and follow.


Leaora (Chapter 26) - Tue 10 May 2016

Please, please, please update soon.


Aviva (Chapter 21) - Mon 09 May 2016

So sad.


Aviva (Chapter 20) - Mon 09 May 2016

I had to go back and review a couple more chapters, this is so good. I knew this would happen, both brothers are possessive and stubborn. Kagome is caught up in the middle of this big mess and she needs time to process everything.


Aviva (Chapter 26) - Mon 09 May 2016

I am anxious to find out where all this will go. So many things left to sort through for all the characters. At this point I am rooting for Sesshomaru to win Kagome back.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Wed 27 Apr 2016

Very good chapter, keep it coming.


Debra (Chapter 26) - Tue 26 Apr 2016

Good update. Not everyone knows this but a lot of women feel craps as their uterus expands during the early stage of pregnancy. Though if the pain is very bad there could be something wrong, or she could just be stressing herself out and making the pain worse. It could be so many things. I look forward to seeing what you have this lead up to. 


Tana_san (Chapter 26) - Mon 25 Apr 2016

Seems I decided to check in on Dokuga as I found you updated. It's a really great chapter and it shows us a side of Sesshoumaru that proves his feelings toward Kagome are genuine.

I honestly feel bad for him as it seems he's been plagued by troubles for a very long time. I'm glad Kouga has the fore thought not to let InuYasha's tall tales affect his work ethic and I was really betting that he would find something more tangible to give Sesshoumaru so he could legally be cleared of any murder and have proof that he and Rin were set up. Also finding the surgeon who cared for his wife would be just cause for divorce as she knew that Sesshoumaru was marrying for getting an heir and not for love. If he was in love with this female then he would have mated her and not just wed her on paper.

Kagome's suffering cramps and her lack of a period is cause for her to have more concern than she does. Violent abdominal pain with the lateness of her period is a just reason to seek out a doctor just in case there's another reason for the pain. I know that stress can forego a period but to have that kind of pain that even she feels is not the ususal, I think she's waiting too long.

I agree that she needs time away to think about everything and that's a good thing but she doesn't need her friend trying to hook her up with some new guy which is what it sounds like her friend wants to do by taking her out to make new "friends". I hope Kagome doesn't let another guy become a rebound for Sesshoumaru. She's too strong a woman to let that happen after what happened between the brothers. That would be my priority if I were her. Get me straightened out by enjoying a long vacation and if the cramps continue and her period doesn't show she needs to at least take a pregnancy test.

Anyway, thanks for the new update. Message me and let me know how the plans are going for June. I miss talking with and if we get our shedules together I'd like to have a few good talks again. Maybe after everything settles down for you, sound good?

You know I love ya!!!! Hugs and Kisses,

JEN


DivaG (Chapter 26) - Sun 24 Apr 2016

Nice chapter. Sesshoumaru is really in love with Kagome, and I hope he finds soon this person who can clarify what actually happened in Rin's kidnapping and thus divorce his wife and achieve his freedom. As for Kagome, I think that she may be pregnant. Good work


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 Apr 2016

It doesn't sound like Kagome is having a miscarriage. I think she's pregnant and is feeling the effects of stress, after all she would be carrying a demon pup and her body is reacting differntly. Maybe her body is changing some what to prepare her body for accepting the pup. Like she was thinking they were fucking all of the time without protection and isn't demon sperm suppose to be more potent than a hunan male's. Of course being pregnant will have a whole new set of problems and drama. The question would be will she let him know about the pup. He would be excited about it because he has been wanting an heir for a long time now. Because she is a miko, I think the pup should be a full blooded demon to shut Inuyasha's mouth and leave her alone. Kagome has been through some rough times and she needs to try to let go, it will be hard but she is Kagome and she will come through this and stop listening to other people'e gossip and rumors.

This has been another good chapter. I always enjoy your writing.

 

 

 


Blommie8 (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 Apr 2016

Glxydragon (Chapter 26) - Fri 22 Apr 2016

Great chapter. I really feel bad for sesshomaru. I know her tricked kagome and everything but he cares for her. I hope she atleast talks to him soon. Thank for the update!


Mona (Chapter 26) - Fri 22 Apr 2016

Perhaps Kagome is Kagome is pregnant (I hope not) or the stress is really getting to her or she had a miscarriage unknowingly.  

I hope to read more soon, my intrigue of this story has returned.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Wed 06 Apr 2016

Nice, keep it coming.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

It has been awhile since I have reviewed, actually I think the last time was chapter 15, but I have not stopped reading this story. I cannot believe Inuyasha had felt he had a right to come back barging in on Sess and Kagome's life. He made a life for himself like getting married and having a child. He broke his promise to Kagome first. He expected to have his cake and eat it too. Sess has always been opportunistic and when Kagome came into his life he took advantage of her situation but at least he was or is the process of divorcing his unwanted wife that was forced upon him. Inuyasha chose his wife. So what right did he have mucking up Kagomes and guilting her. This is a Sess/Kags pairing and it should stay that way. Even though Kagome is getting ready to feel the symptoms of her period coming on, I hope she is actually pregnant. I know it would make matters more complicated but in the long run it might bring them closer together because it seems as though Kagome is still in love with Sessho.

All the chapters since my last review have been great. Sorry for not reviewing any of them. I will try not to be so laxed again. You are a very good writer and like I said before I like your writing style and stories. Excellent job!


DivaG (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

Hello, long time no see! I hope you are well. So, Sesshoumaru is on track to discover the truth about Rin's kidnapping and abuse and consequently his freedom.  I  would not be surprised if she herself would somehow be insolved in all of this only to make Sesshoumaru suffer, for she is very vindictive and spitefull, and has no qualms about using anyone to achieve her goals, given what she did with Kagome. As for Kouga, to hear only Inuyasha's truth is very unwise, for he is selfish and a liar too and to judge someone through another's point of view is foolish, even if you know saíd person. Great work.


Blommie8 (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

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