Reviews for The Second Journey by Smortz

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lara (Chapter 22) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I'm confused. I like this chapter but it made me felt ill at ease & uncomfortable . I feel like I want to panic & I think I know why.

 I love your writing , I was surprised to see that this chap had been posted & while I was reading it, my chest started to ache with fear & extreme insecurity.  I actually had to take a 25 min break before I could leave this review.I wish I could say it helped but  I don't wish to be dishonest to you. I just ask that you don't find offense with my personal reaction but I can't help the guilt I feel over leaving this review & I don't know if I should erase it & leave no review .................but I feel honesty is the best policy.

You do know that I've always loved your writing.

 


crin_fausta (Chapter 22) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I can't help myself but creating possible outcomes of this chapter...What are the dragons's plan? Hmm...you are devil itself right now! How am I supposed to concentrate on the my homework?!?


Britt (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Omg! So I just started reading this FABULOUS story three days ago and you ma'am have my attention! Can't wait for the next chapters <3 <3 <3


Phoenix89 (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

I must say it is about time!!! :) So happy Sesshomaru and Kagome are getting more action. hehe


Miss.Undo (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011
Love it :)

soulNchantress (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

I don't know what you were talking about.  I didn't think this chapter was slow at all!  As you usually do, you delivered an exceptional chapter.  I'm NEVER disappointed when I read any update from you.

I just don't have the words to dump enough praise on this fanfiction, especially words that I haven't reviewed 30 times before.

:-)

Again, excellent story.  I LOVE IT!!!


KEdakumi (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Oooo.... Don't think the dragon's will handle it well, even if they mate.  I love this story!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

BTW, love your name.  Everytime I see it, all I can picture are Smurfs.  Don't know why. :P

Please update soon!


Ceysna (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

*spazz attack* FINALLY!!!! it's about time!!! *falls over laughing* and the grabs it's first victum!! But the boobs strike back!! lol, great chappy cookie ninja!! looking forward to the next one!

 

*taps chin* just have a question.... why wouldn't the God want the Goddess' plans to go right? I mean... that IS his wife... shouldn't he want her plans to go well? *grabs popcorn* ooooo a Kami marrital fight!! and Kags is the kid they're fighting over!! this is gonna be good!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

I read every chapter and it's got me hooked. It's like the Crusades, only this war is between those 'of the Cloth' and demons in general. It's a good thing that the demons have Kagome on their side or else the demons will go extinct in Japan as well. And what's up with Kiyoko and her jealousy? She has a mate and son and should just get over it. She was a priestess once herself. This line of thinking is only going to get her into trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Ceysna (Chapter 20) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

he named her??? *squeels* so cute!! *nearly dies laughing* can't believe he let it slip that he thought she was beautiful! I love it!

 

Great work! Can't wait for the next update!


crin_fausta (Chapter 21) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Yayyyy! Another amazing chapter! If this is slow chapter I am really excited to read the next one!


jojo661538 (Chapter 20) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

wow again a great chapter keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 20) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

*squees*  i love this story so much!


soulNchantress (Chapter 20) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

Things are moving along nicely with Kagome and Sesshomaru.  This chapter was lighthearted for me.  That's just the perfect thing after the high emotion of last chapter.  Keep going.


soulNchantress (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

Whoo Hooo!!  EXCELLENT chapter!!  I was so ticked off, I wanted to beat him into the ground, er water, whatever.  I wanted to beat him!!

I can't wait to see what else happens!

Again, excellent chapter!!!


Rin (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

Hmm...okay, so Is he the real boss, or more like a right hand man? Or his he even lower on the scale then that?

Stupid dragon, learn your place!

 

As for Kagome and Sesshoumaru, Awww, he's all worried and stuff! <3

Looking forward to the next chapter. <3


Rin (Chapter 18) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

*sigh* if only Sesshoumaru would get off his high horse and look at his emotions...

Yay for Kagome! She's much more open to the possibilies. <3

 

....I rather hope you meant for Ryuichi to be disliked starting now, caus I'm not so fond of his reaction...can't say I was ever really fond of him though...

*read the next chapter now*


crin_fausta (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

I was so taken by the battle that at the final line I suddenly realized.... that like Kagome I didn't notice that you haven't mentioned the monk's name..You are fantastic!


crin_fausta (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

I was so taken by the battle that at the final line I suddenly realized.... that like Kagome I didn't notice that you haven't mentioned the monk's name..You are fantastic!


jojo661538 (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

wow this is one of the greatest stories i haave read so far i really like that kagome knows how to take care of herself i really look forward to the next chapter keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


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