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KShadeslady (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 May 2015

Another really nice chapter. I like the easy nature of their bonding over personal stories. I am loving Kanga. I have a soft spot for Tengu (have you ever read The Heavenward Path? It's delightful, there are two slim novels). Can't wait to see him in action. Alright here's my moan. You wrote 'in all intensive purposes his future wives.' That phrase should be 'for all intents and purposes'. It does tend to get run together. Lovely chapter and Thank  You!


KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Tue 05 May 2015

Very satisfying chapter! Putting down a snotty Ryo and being tended too by Sessh. Just delightful.  And because I am a spelling and grammar nazi, it's reins when talking about a horses bridle, not reigns, which means to rule. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Tue 05 May 2015

I like the way you did that. Gone us the present action and then go back in time to bring us back to it. Hmm confusing sentence, but I think you know what I mean. Again, you did a good job with the fight scene. Just think of it like dancing, with swords. I also like the conflicting emotions of our major characters. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Tue 05 May 2015

Oh I missed reviewing this chapter. Yeah Kagome, took matters into her own hands. keep up the good work. cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Tue 05 May 2015

Such a fun chapter. I enjoyed it very much. You have his character down very well As well as Kagome's. I will most likely finish this today. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Tue 05 May 2015

Loved, Loved, LOVED this chapter! Okay, I'm a horse owner and a huge fan of Pat Parelli and Buck Branahan! You don't manhandle a horse, you become their partner and leader! Turning her back and walking away usually sparks their curiosity and they will follow you. Approaching face on is what a predator would do. Okay enough! You did an awesome job on the horse whispering. Cheers! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 May 2015

Oh, that was a really lovely chapter. You know my favorite part of the 2nd Karate Kid movie was the tea ceremony. It was so elegant. I hope one day to participate in one. She has shaken him to his core. Very nice. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 04 May 2015

That was wonderful. Of course, we all knew that Kagome and Rin would be wonderful together. Loved the chapter and your attention to detail. It brings the story to life. I understand the want for more dialogue but I really enjoy all the loving details you include. Thanks for that. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 May 2015

Another really lovely chapter. I like all the details you include. It's makes for a lovely mental image. Thanks do much for this delightful story. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 May 2015

Wahoo! That was awesome! I love how you built it up And how Kagome befriended the demoness and then stood up to him bristling with indignation! Brought a smile and a giggle! Nicely done! Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 May 2015

Really nice long chapter. Lots of great info. Oh, even though this is 4 years down the road, congrats on your baby! Always a wonderful miracle. I liked how you have put together a wonderful story and still keep it canon. I only have one grinch, sorry in advance, it's a grammar thing. You wrote: 'Kagome's silent baring of her injuries', that should be bearing. Baring means to uncover or make naked or something to that effect. To bear means to endure or to carry like bearing a burden or a child. That has to be the most common spelling error I see in fan fictions. So not just you. Great story, I am loving it. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 May 2015

I think you did a wonderful job with that scene. I liked the void demons and how you had them regenerate. That was very inventive and a new one for me. I also liked how you had them working in sync during the battle. Very good chapter. Just read up on battle scenes and you will figure it out! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Mon 04 May 2015

Goodbyes are always so sad but new adventures await! Very nice chapter. Nice moment with Yasha. How could you not love those ears? Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Mon 04 May 2015

Really nice chapter and fun! So she was able to subjugate him without the beads. Too funny. Poor Yasha, his life has just changed drastically. Very nice wandering through Sessh's garden with Rin and his reflections. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 04 May 2015

Short but nicely put together. You needed a segue to the next part. I'm guessing in this fic that she is not from the future? Or is she and we don't know it yet? Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 04 May 2015

Short but nicely put together. You needed a segue to the next part. I'm guessing in this fic that she is not from the future? Or is she and we don't know it yet? Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 May 2015

Oh I like how you have started this story. I am hooked and want to see where it goes. Cheers!


wiiTneSs (Chapter 18) - Sun 01 Mar 2015

Love the story. Though I'm surprised that kagome is still willing to be intimate with sesshoumaru knowing that she would have to share him with four other wives.


Kira (Chapter 18) - Sat 24 Jan 2015

Hello,

 

I absolutely love this fic! I wonder what's going to be Sesshomaru's reaction to his mothers garden. Will that finally show him how much a truly loves Kagome? Also, wondering when the shikon will come into play. I mean so far she has done great in keeping her duty to herself but I can assume it gets lonely. 


Hyliana (Chapter 18) - Mon 19 Jan 2015

Wow, it has been years since I've read this story before,  and you've improved! You have done so well on improving your chapters,  i love it! I hope you get a chance to update again soon. I would love to see What happens next.


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