My gosh I love your writing style!  Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

xoxox

I think the jump was just fine. It wasn't a drastic jump, which would have made it seem as if something was missing. Now how will Sess make it up to her for pushing her through a wall because of Shippo?

Wooo Hooo! I'm so thrilled that you posted a new chapter!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories.  I love the storyline and the way you've written the characters.  I truly enjoyed finding out more about Kanga and Honoria’s past and I love all the developing relationships that Kagome is making.  They way you've written her makes her easy to love. 

I adore Shippo and I'm so happy that he's out in the open now, but Sesshoumaru needs to control that temper of his.  I'm positively ecstatic to see his developing strong emotions for Kagome, but something tells me trouble is on the way.  The Jewel never lets peace last too long and there is much left unsaid about what her duty to it is.  I also get the sense that no matter how intense Kagome's feeling for the Western Lord become she really doesn't believe that she will be around much longer.  Her duty will call and she'll have to leave or will she!!? Oh the possibilities! You are a creative storyteller you make me laugh, smile, cry and feel amazing amount of passion through your creative writing! Well done as always and I look forward to your next chapter.

please please don't take too long to update your next chapter. great story...loving it very much ;)  keep up the good worki

It almost strikes me as odd why sesshoumaru would be so surprised at this revelation that the unknown scent was shippou. Was it because he never detected the supposed "intruder" before? Or shocked and surprised to how he himself had responded to the scent?

I am really curious!

Please keep updating! I love this story!

Ah, a chapter on how to make a Lord feel a bit like a fool.  I love Kirara's attitude.  Can't wait to see where this goes.

Please do not take so long to update. Its annoying when a good story just disaappears off the map to appear MONTHS later.....lovely chapter though. I cant wait to see what will happen next

* sniff sniff* I woke up and it's not here! T^T

With each chapter...you never cease to amaze me! Kagome is an independent girl, Sesshoumaru is not OOC, the plot is ORIGINAL, the relationship between Kagome and Seshoumaru develops slowly...there is mystery...a lot of it=>the perfect story...which if you didn't know is exactly what I have been looking for...

LOVE THIS STORY!!!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

ha! oh this is too rich i love this! well done my dear!

Hello! Just thought I'd let you know that I really like this story!!! I honestly can't wait to read more!

Please update soon!

I like that Honoria and Kagome are kinda friends...bet Honoria would LOVE to make mischief with Shippo...bet Shippo and Rin will bond quickly when they meet.

wonder how long Shippo and Kirara will stay with Kagome...would wish that Shippo could stay with Kagome to the end of this...whichever way it goes. it's probably one of the safest places for him from the void creatures. I'm a bit surprised Sesshomaru didn't smell that Kagome is saturated in kitsune and cat...bet Shippo might be a bit of a damper for Kanga's advances...I see a prank attack in the future I bet.

really hope Sesshomaru won't breed with any of the other wives...yes he's married to them but I'm very thankful it sounds like they never consummated...and that he wouldn't necessarily have kids with them. seriously with them as mothers who knows what the kids would turn out like...yes Kagome might raise them but the bio-moms could still be a big trouble...plus who knows what kind of power you'd get with youkai and miko breeding.

hopefully in a few decades/centuries Kagome and Sesshomaru might find a way for Honoria and Kanga to be together-together.

maybe they could find matches for the other sister wives too...yeah I really just want Sesshomaru and Kagome together with no other bed buddies...well not bed buddies since they never did anything with Sesshomaru but I just want Sesshomaru to be with Kagome...which he is...ya know what I mean. (not having much hope about the other wives going bye-bye but I have hope that Sesshomaru won't hopefully breed with them)

totally enjoying this. wonder what Sesshomaru will think when he inevitably finds Shippo and Kirara...might be a bit impressed that they got in and then is gonna kick the guards butts in more training.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I adore Honoria.

She pounces! Pouncing is the best!! And head butts!! (My cat tries to knock me out every morning with his head bitts) =D Her kitty behaviors make me smile! And since Kagome naturally gets along with kitties (Kirara and Buyo) they would back good friends. <3 I know right now they aren't REALLY  friends, I can easily see it happening.

Thanks for the update ^_^;; I didn't mean to make you feel guilty for not updating-- I just felt the need to fangirl all over you a little. 

I LOVE your fiction!!!  I thought it might end up as one of those ones where Kagome is such a mary sue character that it's sickening, I'm glad it's not turned out that way.  Your writing style is great as well, I don't mind the more informative paragraphs over the dialogue hoenstly.  Please update soon!  I am very much in love with your story! :D

xoxox

It's very nice to see an update. I was pleased to see that she is meeting the wives and Kanga. I also look forward to seeing what kind of shinanigans Kanga has up his sleeves to try to slip her up. It's sad that Honoria isn't truly with her love though and that Sess sees this. I really hope you can find whatever happens to motivate you to write this because I'm on the edge of my seat here waiting to see what will happen next. I truly adore this story and love how Kagome's character interacts with Sesshomaru.

Hope to see more soon

Hugs
Alpine ^_^

I absolutely ADORE Honoria and the crow boy.  XD

I look forward to your next chapter.  

No pressure.  

Take your time...

(glances at wrist watch...)

(taps foot impatiently)

That just made my day! An update from this story! I know what you mean by writers  block. I have had it quite a few times as well, so I can relate. But I really enjoy this story, and even though i know it is really hard to find inspiration at times, I hope there will be updates! XD

Great work... what am I talking about... it was amazing! I will ALWAYS keep tabs on this story, and I can,t wait to find out what happens next!

I absolutely love this story.  YOu are doing fantasticly.  

I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Kanga sounds delicious.  XD

I've been reading this non stop, keep it up k?

my favourite parts were when Kagome and Rin interacted, or Kagome and Ryu interacted.

I love the humour too, such as in this chapter when Kango stared at Sesshoumaru who looked as if he hadn't just askedd him to try and sleep with his potential wives.

I love Kagome's coyness and how she doesn't fall for Sesshoumaru within a couple of chapters. I hate romance that happens to quick, it needs at least 10 chapters and you executed that perfectly. It enourages me with my Sess/Kag greatly, but you need to update now to allow that to continue!

Please carry this on and don't give up on it, it truly is amazing and kept me captivated.