Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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GreyEcho (Chapter 15) - Wed 25 Nov 2009

Gah! He burned the village. Yeah, I would be made too. Awesome chapter. It was a real treat to see it before thanksgiving.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

Way to go Sess' Mama!  *^_^*  Now that Kagome's in, what sort of trouble will be stirred up?


Connie (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

hmm interesting, inu no taishou doesnt like humans...wonder if inuyasha will be born...


Samantha (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

please I need more of this story.  It's just fabolous!  This is the most interesting and orginal piece of fanfiction that I have ever come across I look so forward to updates to this story.  Thank you and please update very soon


autumngold (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

Poor Sesshoumaru.  It almost seems like he needs Kagome as much as she needs him.  Maybe she can bring some love and happiness into his life.  His mother doesn't seem so bad, but his dad is horrible.  Thank you for the new chapter!  Hope you can post again soon!


chevonne knowles (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

This chapter was so much fun. I do look forward to more. like kagome telling them things about themselves. I want them to find out just how strong she is. I could see her get mad over something they did. what a site to behold.


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

This has got to be one of the best chappies so far! I love how we get to see your portrayal of Sesshou's mother. But I wonder when Inu no Taisho's opinion about humans will change since he obviously mates a human later on. I look forward to learning about Kagome's life in Sesshou's past. Keep up the good work and update soon :P


Tilayha (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

Very well done. And the Inuyashaish 'response to being out manuvered was priceless!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

I've read this twice, so far, and may I pronounce it...perfect? Not a word out of place, nor faint in its meaning. Each and every word and phrase is perfection in its clarity. I don't know of anyone who writes so efficiently and cleanly. It is simply beautiful.


Kanna37 (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

This chapter begins to make me wonder if it isn't Kagome's influence that brings about Inu no Taisho's involvement with a human woman later on down the line.  If, at this time, he dislikes humans so, and yet, later, comes to take a human female as his, there must have been a catalyst...

Just a thought.  Again, a lovely chapter.

Amber


stars (Chapter 15) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

please updata


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Hun u gotta make these chapters longer (tho im not complaining lol an update is an update after all n it still makes me happy that u updated) i got to say tho i am eager to read more :) update again soon im still totally addicted to this fic :)


elley (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

I can't believe you left using hanging on such a cliff hanger! I've been waiting for this meeting.


GreyEcho (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Aw, poor Kagome. That was sweet of Sesshoumaru. Can't wait to see how this goes down.


autumngold (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Sesshoumaru is such a sweetheart!  I love how he keeps Kagome safe!  Please post more soon!


Kanna37 (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Wow.  I just can't get over the young Sesshoumaru portrayal here.  It's just perfect.

Amber


knifethrower (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009

Sesshy is such a brave little soldier!  Cute and touching!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 13) - Sat 14 Nov 2009

lol omg i never expected sesshomaru-sama (no matter WHAT age he is) to do what all small children do and go "ask mom first" get an answer if it displeases you then "ask dad second" lol i never thought he would as sum say "Go Between Parents" lol thats hillarious :) update again really soon i love it :) well i shall keep an eye out for the next chapter much love

 

 

Your loyal reader/fan

Never Let Them See You Cry A.K.A. Shannah Terry


Saholia (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009

lol--sneaky Sesshomaru. Very fice Forthright! Now I wonder if he's going to his mother because she wouldn't approve of letting Kagome staying anywhere else other than Sesshomaru's home? :D


GreyEcho (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009

Haha! ThAT'S GREAT! He's going to get his mom to say yes so the dad can't say no.  >D ~!

I would so do that with my parents...except it was my dad. Great job. And nice description of the people. I like how they went the back way and saw the more common things, rather than some grandness.

~Lune


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