Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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loveyaa (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Jan 2010

I love it!! I hope more little slip-ups like this happen that affect the future but only because Kagome was in the future and saw it and then went back to the past and let it slip so it happens and leads to the future...

well anyway I can't wait for more esp to see how this relationship affects Sesshoumaru and his father and even how Kagome gets home. til next time...


Kanna37 (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Jan 2010

Oh wow... as if that's not twisted - he learned to fly using a cloud of youki because Kagome mentioned it.  The whole time paradox there is going to give me a headache. Awesome!

Amber


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Jan 2010

this is adorable :3


Miss_Clockworks (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Jan 2010

hahaha! So she's the reason he uses a cloud of youki? PRICELESS. I love little Sesshomaru's "It's easy!" Too cute, haha. I think its so clever how you integrate Kagome's knowledge of future Sesshomaru into his younger self becoming his future self, so Sesshomaru wouldn't be who he becomes if Kagome hadn't met him and known he would become that way and gone back in time to use her knowledge of who he would become to tell him... so he could become..himself?.....GAH! paradoxes make my brain hurt! :( you know what I mean though lol


loveyaa (Chapter 23) - Tue 05 Jan 2010

I have to say I think one of my favorite parts is looking in your disclaimer for the little tibit and seeing how it fits in with the story. Not that I don't love your story...well anyway til next time...


Inusbabe (Chapter 23) - Mon 04 Jan 2010

I have loved all of this bite size chapters I hope more come shortly.


Saholia (Chapter 23) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

Such convictions--awesome chapter :) I think Sesshomaru is just the cutest


Saholia (Chapter 22) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

I loved this chapter--he's trusting her more and more :D


Snowfall (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

Aw, too bad Kagome can't talk to Bokuseno.  I was hoping she would find she could trust him with her secret.  Sesshoumaru was so cute!  He's just adorable.


Jess (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

nice chapter :) This is such a good story so far :)


GreyEcho (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

I liked her choice of word. Faith

I like how even you Dialouge plays out. Pausing as anyone would thinking on it, but not just simplely saying she pause. That's why I like your fics. Every word paints the scene, and is never is excess. Out of all your fics, this has to be my favorite.

~Lune


autumngold (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru has Kagome there.  As much as she needs him to survive, it seems he needs her to grow.  Thank you for the update!


Yohko (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

Nice! 'FAITH'... =)

Great Chapter!


Atratus (Chapter 23) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

Lovely as always. I read your stories over on ff.net, but I saw this was updated and had to read it straight away. :)


Angelicatt (Chapter 22) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Does Kagome know about Bokusenou in her normal timeline??? I know Sess does....interesting.

Happy New Year hon


GreyEcho (Chapter 22) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

XD

That would be something to see, the test flying that is. and Yay for the tree...guy...forgot his name...(starts with b..) ANYWAYS! cute chapter.


Yohko (Chapter 22) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Once again, great chapter. =)


serasvictoria666 (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

another wonderful chapter! ^-^


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Oh no, it's one of them mean old trees from the wizard of oz, he's gonna throw apples at you, run 'gome, run!

XP  sorry, just a little bit hyper at the moment

Nice update, I'd love to see another!!!  *^_^*


Samantha (Chapter 22) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

I just loved how he inched closer to her.  Please update really soon this the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading.  It just completely different and I honestly check daily to see if you have updated!


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