Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Kanna37 (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

Awwww... little Sesshoumaru is sooo cute!  I'm curious to see what causes such drastic changes, although I have my suspicions that the seeds for that lie right here in this little 'microcosm'.  Really nice chapter!

Amber


FourShotChild (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

I've been keeping up with this story and I must say that I enjoy it. Even the short chapters make me smile. Everything flows smoothly, the characters are perfect, and the small moments just warm my heart. I think that's what I like best with the story. I love the little moments. I can't wait to see how this story will progress. I look forward towards your next chapters or drabble.

Good luck!


Samantha (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

Oh boy we are getting spoiled!  I can't wait to see more of this story I am dieing to know what the Older Sesshoumaru does when Kagome resurfaces in the future.  I wonder when it will happen and how!  This story is so enthralling!  Please update soon!


knifethrower (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

For one distilled moment, I could feel the connection between the child Sesshomaru and the adult we see in the anime.  No one who knows me needs to think too hard to figure out why I love "InuYasha" so much, the way the characters WANDER and travel on foot, through the countryside, really strikes home with me.  Plus I strongly identify with Kagome.  This chapter really brought home that part of Sesshomaru's character, his immersion in nature, while his parents are in the matrix of demon culture and society.  I love the way you worked in his relationship with Ah-Uhn.  It is so perfect...


Rowdys girl (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

This chapter is like a particularly satisfying treat! One that is sweet and delicious but still filling and nutricious. A funny way to describe writing, but the comparison is apt.


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

Aaww...! That's so cute! I giggled when she's like "I am *not* your mother." As always, more please!


Micah caran Damien (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

Well you've done it again. You've created another story that I am hoplessly addicted to. I love love love love love little Sesshomaru. He is such a little darling, I almost don't want him to grow up. Almost. Anyway, this is an incredible story.


autumngold (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

I am so glad that Kagome is getting Sesshoumaru to go outside.  That he is realizing that even though she is there he doesn't have to change his routine.  Thank you for the update!  I'm just scared what will happen if Kagome shows her miko powers.  Post more soon please!


Mina (Chapter 19) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

sooo cute must update soon!!!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 19) - Mon 14 Dec 2009

awe that was adorable and oh so kawaii!!! Heehee loved it


Oh Please (Chapter 19) - Sat 12 Dec 2009

How sweet.  It made me think of a boy stealing scraps from the table for his beloved pet!


jgem (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

These last two chapters had me saying, "Awwwww. Sesshoumaru is too cute!" I loved the picture you created of him inspecting Kagome's ears and him sneaking a sweet bun, although reminiscent of a child sneaking a treat to a beloved puppy, still had me thinking "Kawaiiiii!!!!!!"

Loving this story!

 

I am curious though. Will the story focus mostly on Kagome in the far past or will we get the ocassional cut to see what is going on with the "future" Sesshoumaru and gang?


laenfante (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

I adore this drabble set - as I do all your work -but the parallel between our favorite pair in this drabblet just made me smile. So young, and yet so wise. One wonders how the adults will hold these memories in the future...


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

>:3 i totally love how he's sneaking his human treats :3 his pet human and his cat hahahahahaa


fatcatmom (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

Awwwww....sigh. So sweet and a pefect foil for how Kagome feels about her families on both sides of the well. Looking forward to more chapters....thanks!!


autumngold (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

Sesshoumaru is so sweet!  I love the way he takes care of Kagome.  She is so lucky that he is taking care of her.  How will he be able to handle it when Kagome has to go back?  Will she be able to go back?  Thanks for the update!


Kanna37 (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

Wow... and if that wasn't a play on her own conuncrum, I don't know what would be.  Nice chapter!

Amber


GreyEcho (Chapter 18) - Tue 08 Dec 2009

>D

That was cute! I liked the different advice he got on women. And his negociation. lol. And it was really cute how he inspected her ears. Gah his curiousity is adorable.

the whole trust thing made me happy and sad. Happy he wants it, sad she can't give it yet. >.< I can't wait till she shares a bigger secret with him and to see how he'll react. ^_^

Haha! And the whole fire/bath incident was great. Poor Sessh.


Kittylin (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Dec 2009

I really like your story. It flows really well. Message me the next time you update if it isn't too much trouble.


Sugabelly (Chapter 18) - Mon 07 Dec 2009

You cannot do this!! I demand that you post five updates at once!! Do you know the kind of hyperventilation I go through every time I see Dokuga Story Alert : Unspoiled?????????

 

Please, please, please, I beg youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu post more of the story! *grovels on the floor*

 

Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Little Sesshomaru is too cute for words. And he tries so hard!!! Awwwwwwww!!!!!! He's the most adorable thing ever!!!!! (Yeah, he'd probably dokkaso me if he ever heard me call him adorable). Your portrayal of his childhood self gives little glimpses of his personality that he retains as an adult. 

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Death by Cuteness Overload


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