Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

Page 1 of 103
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>
Eva (Chapter 100) - Fri 03 Oct 2014

I know you've probably been told this many times, but I just had to express how much I've enjoyed Unspoiled. Something that you declared in the first few chapters was merely a vehicle to explore drabbles and short oneshots evolved into so much more. I've read and enjoyed many of your other stories, as well as works of other authors on FanFiction and Dokuga. I've got to tell you that Unspoiled is my favorite InuYasha fanfiction of any pairing to date.

 

I really enjoyed your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I found the evolution of their relationship very believable. I especially appreciate that Kagome didn't jump right into a romantic relationship with an adult Sesshoumaru after having grown to love the boy. I thought you did an excellent job incorporating instinct and pack dynamics with feelings and choice.

 

I agree with the many people who cited Hisoka-sensei as their favorite original character. He was well develooped and felt like he belonged in the setting. I love Shippo as a kid and a young adult, especially his relationship with Hosoka and Sesshoumaru. The scene at the end in the bath house was one of my favorites. The contrast between Shippo and Sesshomaru as children was very well done. I also appreciate your characterization of Inu Taisho and his mate. Although I enjoy the more playful or mischievous characterizations of the two in other works, I wouldn't have been appropriate for this story in the least. They were very believable and satisfying. Finally, I didn't miss Kikyo in the least. Thanks for not beating that particular dead horse into the ground.

 

You have a compelling voice and style of writing. You also manage to keep your details straight most of the time despite the length and intricacy of your plot line. Your editing is also well done. My compliments to you on your work and vision. I hope that you continue to develop your craft and look forward to reading more of your stories.


nutter-owl (Chapter 100) - Mon 28 Jul 2014

I must say, this is an AMAZING story. Your writing style is beautiful and flows smoothly. The only things that left me wanting was Koga's fate and Sango+Miroku's story. Perhaps you addressed it and I glossed over it in my hurry to get to the end, but I wished for there to be some kind of closure, since Kagome left without saying goodbye to her best friend.


InuYoukaiOfMoonlight (Chapter 100) - Fri 18 Jul 2014

//cries//

ritsuki: TT^TT one of the best stories of milord and milady


SP00K (Chapter 100) - Sat 17 May 2014

Just Wonderful! Amazing story!!


SP00K (Chapter 32) - Fri 16 May 2014

So Good!! 


SP00K (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 May 2014

great chapter!


SP00K (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 May 2014

Little Sesshomaru is so cute enforcing his will on others!


SP00K (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 May 2014

I love it already!!


cindy (Chapter 100) - Tue 28 Jan 2014

i love tis whole thing


satuross (Chapter 77) - Sun 29 Sep 2013

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT but he is technically only 10 years old!!!!


satuross (Chapter 66) - Sun 29 Sep 2013

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahaha


satuross (Chapter 39) - Sun 29 Sep 2013

oh god i love your writings T_T'''' this is so good!


satuross (Chapter 26) - Sun 29 Sep 2013

wow. are you japanese? haha. i have no idea about these riddles


satuross (Chapter 16) - Sun 29 Sep 2013
  • JUser::_load: Unable to load user with id: 1285
  • JUser::_load: Unable to load user with id: 5305?!

what is with dokuga? either way, ssmart move kagome. but i bet its too easy to know its you haha


beachvilla (Chapter 100) - Thu 26 Sep 2013

I have read this story several times. It is amazing. Thank you!


kimchi759 (Chapter 100) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
The birthday kisses...! Pardon me while I squeal. One thing that I cannot click "Favorite" wihtout saying: thank you for the amazing way you portrayed Inuyasha. Most Sesskag's end up making him into an arse or whiny brat or something equally horrible, but you made him into a respectable grown man. And somehow, you kept Sesshoumaru just as elevated and powerful without diminishing the importance of other figures and giving them spotlight time too. I've said this before, but Hisoka? LOOVE. So much love for the cat. I noticed Kikyo was conveniently left out, but it really didn't matter in the end. I do have to say I was kiinda hoping to see Kouga....but a minor disappointment in the face of the pure awesomeness this fic turned out to be!

kimchi759 (Chapter 99) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
Ahhhh! Getting an urge to pick up a pencil and draw the image of baby Sesshoumaru with grown man Sesshoumaru declaring the rote. Buut too afraid I won't do it justice. Asdfghjkkl. Loved this chapter.

kimchi759 (Chapter 97) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
Oh. My. Good. Lord. Sweet. Baby. Jesus. I was suffocating myself trying to my laughter at a minimum. 500 years later and he still wears a fundoushi. Myyy aabbbbs.....ow.

kimchi759 (Chapter 90) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
I am way too attached to Hisoka. I wish you could create a separate story based on him! <:)

kimchi759 (Chapter 77) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
?....please wait a second while I finish banging my head against this wall. Ugh. I understand he's a child and I understand he's nobility and I understand it's Sesshoumaru of all characters and all that, but my feminist inclinations are throwing a riot over here. Getting marked and claimed like an object? Meh. Leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Page 1 of 103
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.