Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Invictus (Chapter 100) - Tue 20 Sep 2016

I thoroughly enjoyed every second of this story. Thank you for writing it! 


ForgottenDarkSoul (Chapter 100) - Sat 14 May 2016

This is probably the third or fourth time I've read Unspoiled and I love it more each time that I read it. By far, one of the best Sess/Kag fanfics. Well done :)


Katishe Reynoldson (Chapter 100) - Fri 06 May 2016

I don't know if you will see this now, but I was enchanted by your story and never knew what was coming next, except a beautiful ending. I was confident of that in the first pages, I've read a great deal in my life, I've been ill a long time and as a poet I'm, well, picky, your work is gifted, you portray the young as charmingly as you do the old. All my favourite characters breathed gently in your hands, thank you and good luck.


Emilie (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Apr 2016

I love this story so much... I have to read it every couple of months it seems :)


rinseternalsoul (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Jan 2016

I have just read this tale. It was absolutely wonderful!!! I used to read and write Sess/Kag fan fiction but I never read this for some reason. It was like uncovering treasure! I loved every word of it! The young Sesshomaru was a character that really left me feeling like I knew Sesshomaru in a way I never had before. Hisoka-sensai was a character that brought it all together and Kagome was made beautiful, smart and caring. I loved the way you answered the reason for youkai to strive to accomplish the human form. Very creative. This story made me cry and laugh and read until my eyes were red! I loved the whole thing from beginning to end! Thank you so much for sharing this with the world of Sess/Kag fan fiction lovers like me!


KShadeslady (Chapter 100) - Mon 07 Dec 2015

Awww...That was just beautiful and it makes my heart happy. I love a sweet happy ending. You have created some wonderful characters in Hisoka and Katashi and made all the rest just as amazing as I wish them to be. So sad to see this come to an end but it will go on my favorites list for sure. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I have read Lord Charming and I hope you go back to that story soon. In the meantime , I will read some of your other tales. You are so gifted. You have the ability to paint beautiful pictures with your words. Thanks again.


KShadeslady (Chapter 96) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Aw...Just to sweet! I like a Yasha/Rin pairing.. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 95) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Another beautiful chapter. I am going to be so sad to come to the end of this lovely story.


KShadeslady (Chapter 92) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Oh...Sigh! That was wonderfully satisfying! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 91) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

Wow! Didn't see that coming! It we know that Sessh is also there. He has waited so long.


KShadeslady (Chapter 84) - Fri 04 Dec 2015

That was just beautiful. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 80) - Fri 04 Dec 2015

These last chapters have been harrowing, sad and delightful. As a firm believer in the reading of nursery rhymes to children, I love all the titles. When I went away to basic training and then to other training schools, I recorded my daughters favorites. We always read them before she went to bed and I wanted her to be able to ear my voice. This was 1980 and there was no such thing as cell phones, Skype and face time. Technology is amazing and so is your story. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 65) - Thu 03 Dec 2015

I really love Hisoka! You have created a wonderful character. He fits in like he has been there all along.


KShadeslady (Chapter 63) - Thu 03 Dec 2015

Finally a reunion, some lessons and some truth. Lovely chapter.


KShadeslady (Chapter 58) - Thu 03 Dec 2015

Another sweet chapter. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 52) - Wed 02 Dec 2015

This is so darned charming! I'm just melting into this story.


KShadeslady (Chapter 52) - Wed 02 Dec 2015

This so darned carming! I'm just melting into this story.


KShadeslady (Chapter 51) - Wed 02 Dec 2015

LOVE LOVE the nursery rhyme titles! And the puppy hugs at the end. Just wonderful!


KShadeslady (Chapter 48) - Wed 02 Dec 2015

This tale just need on getting better and better. It is beautiful!


KShadeslady (Chapter 43) - Wed 02 Dec 2015

Yeow! Things are getting thick now! 


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