Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Sapphire41026 (Chapter 43) - Sun 02 Oct 2011

Ugh! I love it! It's all so sweet. =] I really love what you're doing with the characters!


Sapphire41026 (Chapter 11) - Fri 30 Sep 2011

Tehehehehehehe..... =] As soon as Kagome realized it, I did too. I went back and read the checkered kimono thing and thought, "RIN!" By the way, you're an angel. A literary angel.


Sapphire41026 (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 Sep 2011

Yes, I think I'll keep you... Right in my pocket! He belongs in my pocket!

 

Anyway, based on the first chapter, I have an amazing story ahead of me! I'm a grammar freak, so be very, very proud that I stuck around! I've been throwing out stories that I thought I might read for the past couple of days now. This one made the cut! =] Very nice progression! I love how you have it broken down. =] Oh! There is a space that says "LINE" near the end of the chapter. Thought I'd let you know. =]

You've gained another loyal reader that will most likely read everything in your collection. =] I look forward to the rest!


InuXRin4Ever (Chapter 100) - Tue 23 Aug 2011

Renee Mannings (Chapter 100) - Tue 09 Aug 2011

I cried so much towarss the end of this chapter. This was such a wonderful story. 


Lilly Of The Moon (Chapter 100) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

this story is utterly beatiful,every emotion captivating,the way you protrayed sess differently from his lord of everything and gave it to sensi and inuyasha was very refefshing.I came along this story out seeing all the fans it has creating. So i went and "gave it a shot" im glad to say you made another supporter,because really this sory needs more fans!!! Its amazing i cant say it enough!

~Lilly


the ice within (Chapter 11) - Mon 01 Aug 2011

This is good. But I'm getting a little confused.

 

If the Two Headed Staff was held by Sesshomaru's retainer, then Hisoka is the 'toad'- Jaken. But you say he is Mijin or something, but I don't recall anyone being called that.

 

So, who is this tutor of Sesshomaru?

 

Otherwise, this story is awesome.

 

-Icy-


winggoddess (Chapter 100) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

The perfect ending to a perfect story :)


Torabug (Chapter 100) - Thu 07 Jul 2011

WildcatYST (Chapter 100) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Beautiful ending. I expected nothing less from you! This has to be my all-time favorite Kagome/Sesshoumaru tale. I'm already feeling the urge to go back and reread it from beginning to end. Thanks for taking us on such a wonderful journey!


Loveyaa (Chapter 100) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

That was quite the ride. I am sad to see it over but then quite enjoyed the ending of it. Sesshoumaru and Kagome's interactions were to die for. In fact the interactions between all the characters was superb. You did a fantastic job writing this all and tying everything all together. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. You've set the bar pretty high for yourself but Im sure that everyone knows that you can shoot higher. I guess all good things must come to an end and what an ending it was :)


Selenay (Chapter 100) - Wed 29 Jun 2011

Without a doubt, this has got to be one of the most beautiful and creative, and imaginative, and......wonderful works I have ever read!

 

It has been another trip, I'm fairly sure, I'll be reading more of your work at another time, but I really must get back to my own, your story has been a most welcome distraction from my busy days. So, thank you.

Thank you for writing such a lovely tale, it is a wonderful balm anyone would be priviledged to read.


Patricia (Chapter 100) - Tue 28 Jun 2011

All good things must come to an end. Its bitter sweet coming to the end of such a great story. you rapped up the ending well, even tho you could have gone another 100 chapters and we would have still ate it all up! lol . Thank you, for the story, this is now one of the classics.


Grazia (Chapter 100) - Fri 24 Jun 2011

Thank you for your wonderful story


Saraniya (Chapter 100) - Fri 24 Jun 2011

I keep re-reading the last chapter and the last scene especially! I loved every moment of this story!


Misha (Chapter 100) - Thu 23 Jun 2011

Forthright,

I love this Fanfiction to death! You inspire me so much. I loved the entire thing. I hope there will be a sequel or another fanfic as good as this. I look forward to it!!


Anonymous (Chapter 100) - Tue 21 Jun 2011
The final chapter was well worth the wait! Absolutely loved it.

Ayumi (Chapter 100) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

I loved this story the most...it had me laughing and crying and begging for more. it was different and i liked that. It didn't bring them together to quickly nor did it keep them from each other for too long. From a girl who has been reading Sesshomaru and Kagome fanfiction since she was but eleven I must give you the greatest compliment of being the best fanfic writer i have ever been graced to read. Thank you for this story and i am looking forward to more of them.

Azarius


Wudelfin (Chapter 100) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

lovely story, had plot twist that were just awesome


Dara (Chapter 100) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

Hi I've been reading your story and I have to say that is wonderful.


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