Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Qiwi (Chapter 14) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Kagome is a silly girl indeed: has she not heard the stories of the great Dog General? And now she's going to meet him in the flesh! Exciting :D


Qiwi (Chapter 13) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Oh, cunning little Sesshoumaru indeed :) I was already wondering how a cat, of all animal youkai, managed to become Sesshoumaru's retainer, seeing how his mother behaved in the canon story. On to the next chapter!


Qiwi (Chapter 12) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

After some thinking, I'm slowly starting to grasp the meaning of the penultimate paragraph in the previous chapter, slowly though. I feel like such a dunce. Nevertheless, another entertaining chapter, now on to the much dreaded meeting!


Qiwi (Chapter 11) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Maybe it's the time (probably, it's past midnight), but at the moment I do not possess Kagome's logical abilities, as I reread the penultimate paragraph several times, but still do not understand. Maybe enlightenment will come to me soon though. Onward!


Qiwi (Chapter 10) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Oh, the interaction between Kagome and our lordling is so well-done, I marvel at it. I especially like the end. :D


Qiwi (Chapter 9) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Teehee, so adorable :3 


Qiwi (Chapter 8) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Inu no Taishou said 'Keh'! That's so typical :D Loved the interaction between Hisoka and our favorite Dog General, simple, yet effective. On to the next chapter!


Qiwi (Chapter 7) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Ah, the title struck me as a bit weird upon first reading it, but your note clarifies things :) Very curious as to what will happen when Kagome is presented to Inu no Taisho and the Lady of the West, so on we go! Another interesting chapter by the way :D


Qiwi (Chapter 6) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Cute :) And I can agree with Kagome's mind-whirling thoughts, how such an event can influence the future, or did it not and is this how it is supposed to be? We can only find out by reading more!


Qiwi (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Oh dear, I was totally laughing out loud when Sesshoumaru berates his teacher for not giving Kagome privacy! Another interesting chapter, and the identity of the mysterious Meijin-dono is revealed! Onward!


Qiwi (Chapter 4) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Lovely chapter, with a healthy dose of explanation on inu customs and the introduction of Hisoka :D I like him already. And Sesshoumaru is so cute -squeals in delight-!


Qiwi (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Aw, Sesshoumaru does take good care of that which he considers his, and at such a young age already :) I am curious about Hisoka-sensei, so onward!


Qiwi (Chapter 2) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Lol, Sesshoumaru's first impressions of humans must be amazing now, good job Kagome :') Nice chapter, but I am a bit confused by the last "When?" from Sesshoumaru, and after rereading I still do not understand what it is about. I wonder how the rest of the court will respond with Sesshoumaru reappearing after his first hunt (where are his prey?) with a human!


Qiwi (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jan 2013

Oh, child Sesshomaru is just too adorable, even if he is less of a playful child than most others. I do wonder what those two men have to do with Kagome's stranding in the past though. Only one way to find out, on to the next chapter!


Pricila (Chapter 100) - Thu 15 Nov 2012

Woohoo, better then I remembered!!  I read this at fanfiction and at the time wasnt to keen on the idea of Sessh and Kag but since then they have become my favorite pairing.  This story is awesome!!


PristineUngift (Chapter 100) - Mon 17 Sep 2012

I remember I read the first 30 or so chapters 2-3 years ago. It was wonderful to come back and find the rest of the tale. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us. I especially loved the way you wrote the pack dynamics, and the inu-songs. <3


Mizui (Chapter 100) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

This story was beautiful. I've read published works that were not written half as well. I laughed, I cried, and I squirmed with envy. I can not say enough how wonderful this story was, and how greatful I am that you shared it with us. I am absolutely in love with every single bit of it. I will definitely be reading more of your work.


Mizui (Chapter 63) - Sat 08 Sep 2012

I cried a little at the end. Poor Sesshoumaru! You truly have an amazing way with words.


Mizui (Chapter 57) - Sat 08 Sep 2012

I laughed so hard reading this, the girls across the hall came to make sure I was okay. I can just imagine the look on little Sesshy's face as he thinks through the new problem.


Mizui (Chapter 10) - Sat 08 Sep 2012

I absolutely love this! The entire story is just so adorable, not to mention how your writing blows mine out of the water, but wow. I just can't get over how cute Sesshoumaru is being! 

 

I just don't even have words to tell you how much I am enjoying your story.

Thank you for sharing it with us all. 


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