I need a Beta for my story Hurt No More. It's fourteen chapters long there are five chapters already posted. However I've been told in my reviews I needed to work on my dialogue and description. I need help with this.

Here's the link to the first five chapters.
dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/5662/1

Administrator Edit: warning. this story is rated M. No YIMs please

Kira Hatake,
Please remember its a site rule that if you post a link of any level or kind of Mature content, in the forums, you must make note of that so minors done stumble upon content they are legally not permitted to access. I've gone ahead and made the correction for you, this time.

MoxyMikki
Forum Administrator

p.s. Its wonderful that you are taking the Constructive Critisism in your reviews and actually using it to improve your writing. Often the CC is ignored, which is sad. So glad youre open to it.

Oh thank you I'm so sorry I forgot all about putting the warning in. I promise it won't happen again.

If you're still looking to grab a beta, I'd be more than happy to help. ^_^

PM and I'll give you my email. ^_^

~Smortz