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DivaG (Chapter 27) - Mon 08 Dec 2014

This was a very rough nightmare for Kagome. First she is raped and forced to like it and after, she learns that she was somewhat married to Sesshoumaru and Ko deliberated undid that without her knowing. I only regret that Kagome did not took Ko by surprise and took a very well-placed blow in his loins when she attacked him so that he will never, ever have children again, even if he would be reincarneted in another life. It would be greatly satisfying and would solve a lot of future problems for her. Please, don't let her be pregnant by Ko, if by any chance she is pregnant, let it be from Sesshoumaru. It's good that Sesshoumaru is confused about Kagome's feelings, for it will be easier for her to explain her situation to him. And it's good that his presence went unnoticed in the Island, because he then can make a surprise attack and, who knows, if Kagome can take the fruit, steal it under the very nose of his enemies with his speed. Thus the tables would be turnês in his favor. I'm dying to know what happens next. Great chapter.


Amanisha Taj (Chapter 27) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

All I can say is that.... I feel soo bad for Kagome and Sesshomaru right now... :(


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 27) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

This is too much, I hope something good happens, keep it coming.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 27) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

With Ko kidnapping, marrying, raping and possibly impregnating Kagome I don't see how this is Kagome + Sesshoumaru story any more. I was very unhappy with the last chapter and this one. But this is your story and I don't have to read it any more. It is way to angstsy for me so I think I'll stop now. You are an excellent writer if you can draw this much emotion out of me about a fanfiction. I really don't know if I'll continue reading this story or not. All that aside, you did a wonderful job of writing in this chapter.


cassandra (Chapter 27) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

Oh no! I hope she doesn't get pregnant by that jerk! Maybe she could already be pregnant with sesshomarus k7d from the last time they were together? Now that would be awesome. 


FaerieDearest (Chapter 27) - Sun 07 Dec 2014

You did an amazing job with this story. But I can't read more, it's not good for my health, I'm going to take some rivotril right now so I can calm down haha
Seriously, you write wonderfully, I just can't take more angst now.
I have a question though, is the story near the end? Is it going to have a happy ending? (No need to answer that one if you don't want to spoil the end.)


Tana_san (Chapter 26) - Thu 04 Dec 2014

Oh please, don't let that betrayal that wasn't really a betrayal stop you Sesshoumaru!!! Kagome gave so much of herself to save his very life. He can't possibly believe that she wants this. He is old enough and experienced enough to know that the body can and does betray its very nature.

He would be so stupid to turn away now. He would be betraying Kagome and the mark of mating he gave her. He felt and heard her thoughts through all his time recupering and he's going to let something as slightly as her body feeling the sensation as her heart and mind wanting to be raped? Forced to submit to a stronger force? Sesshoumaru himself forced Kagome when he first allowed Kagome to follow him and she fought his advances until her body began to react. He, himself, didn't truly want to be with Kagome but his body betrayed his feelings, his wants.

He has to know that if he turns away now that Kagome will be doomed to a life she doesn't deserve and she'll be used and turned into something or someone she doesn't deserve to have happen to her. She was trying to help him during the fight when she was captured. She's in this situation because she had come to love him enough to want to fight by his side and to prove to him she is worthy of his affections, his love.

Anyone can turn this around and blame Kagome for the situation she's in but when it's all said and done, they will still feel love for each other and regret for all the misfortunes and mistakes made during their time together, but, they will still love the other. There will still be love and the desire to have that love fulfilled.

How's that for a review, my friend? I tried to review the last chapter but the site or this computer ate it and sent it into cyberspace. I'm happy Sesshoumaru's mother had the chance to keep him there to get stronger and that they recuped just a little of a mother and son relationship. I'm happy she was able to show him she loves him and he saw it for what it was, she is still his mother.

Love and hugs,  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 Dec 2014

What a story. Fact or fiction? What will Sesshoumaru do? There are many fables told and he has to be wondering if what his mother told him was truth. How can he possibly go back there in the condition he's in? He'd be killed with only a minimum amount of power he has left. The power on that island would surely kill him.

I think he needs to rest and regain that which he has lost. I know he fears for Kagome but he needs to try and rest his mind to see if he can feel Kagome through the bond he created with her.

My hope is that they can somehow communicate before anything happens to Kagome. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

So sad, poor Kagome, keep it coming.


Glxydragon (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Don't need disenhearted. This is a great story. I feel bad for kags i hope it gets better for her soon, but i doubt it with the bond being broken in that way.


Kyo (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

I don't like this! Why had he left?????!!! I thought he would save her? I guess let's wait for more updates don't we? It surely is anguished-filled moment right now. I hope they'll reconcile soon though. Can't wait for the monster to get what he deserves. :/


cassandra (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

So does this mean that sesshomaru is going to leave her with that monster? I would think he would have more faith in her than that.  He has  to realize she didn't want to do this. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

no...no...NO!!!  Heart wrenching for Sesshoumaru....Ko moves forward with his insidious plan.

You have indeed captured the height of angst and betrayal.  This did indeed tear at my heart of how Sesshoumaru felt betrayed. Hope he cools off and sees this "betrayal" for what it is.......

All in all a very excellent read. Looking forward to seeing what kind of twisted web of deceit Ko has up his sleeve, and the payback that he will receive when Sesshoumaru realizes what tactics Ko used to tear he  and Kagome apart.


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

 

 

OMG...what Ko did was horrible...that can happen during a rape without your consent...he did it on purpose...I really didn't think it would have happened that way... 

good chapter...and update soon...


Amanisha Taj (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Hey Moonlight Silk!

I am just here to say that your work is very much appreciated! I always look forward to your updates! And like I said, the turn that this story took very much surprised me and it has me hooked. I want to know what happens next. :)

I do have a question though.... Kagome is basically being raped by Ko... so, why would the feelings of hesitance that Sesshomaru could feel through the bond turn into the opposite? Wouldnt Kagome still be opposed to the whole thing?

 


Monica (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Like the reviewer below said...laziness is the key word. With your stories my heart is literally leaping out of my chest because you draw the reader in completely. It's like a serious mind f__k because you just want the hero and heroine to be together and happy. But often reality is much more darker. I really love your work and I'm sorry for being lazy and not reviewing.

Keep up the good work!

 

 


DivaG (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Wow, this update was fast. Don't lose your motivation to write because you are getting few reviews, people sometimes are too lazy to write. Don't forget that was my case. Your story is really good.

Now for the review, Kagome seems to be a woman controlled by lust, she can not resist carnal pleasure when she is taken, no matter who the partner is or even if this is by force. Honestly this is a strange concept to me. Now her bond to Sesshoumaru is broken and, if I get it right, it seems to me that he does not want to rescue her anymore, because he could feel her having pleasure with another man through the bond. Having no control over the reactions of her body will bring her many problems, because she is too easy to pleasure, and convince Sesshoumaru that this pleasure was forced on her will be a challenge. I just hope Sesshoumaru does not forget to destroy the fruit before leaving.


satuross (Chapter 26) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

Thanks for the update. I'm sure many are reading this. Just that is hard to review on the phone where the size of the review pane are screwed up


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Sun 30 Nov 2014

Nice chapter, keep it coming.


DivaG (Chapter 25) - Sun 30 Nov 2014

It's nice to see Sesshoumaru's mother acting as a mother would. She' s right, he will need all his strenght to fight against this enemies and rescue Kagome this time, although I feel his mother's sadness comes from the fact that she fears that her son suffers the same fate as his father. As for Kagome, she is now aware of the gravity of her situation involving Shizu, unfortunately married to Ko and, as it seems, he is becoming aware of her status as Sesshoumaru's mate. I think he will react badly to it, although deep down it's all his fault for forcing this marriage with her, knowing since the begining that she loves another man. Life is complicated. Good chapter.


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