Reviews for Imperceptible by forthright

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snowbird (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

What a cliffhanger!!!  Sesshoumaru would not be in this position if Inuyasha had of used his brain for once and not given in to Naraku's taunts.  Him saving Inuyasha proves he doesn't hate him like he's let on.  I could picture Sesshoumaru looking at Kagome maybe for the last time just in case his escape plan doesn't work.  I'm sure he'll try something.  He still has tenseiga on him and that sword has saved him many times in the past.  Also his youki saved him from being absorbed by Naraku once before.  In my imagination, though, I see Kagome getting away from Inuyasha and running to Sesshoumaru and grabing him around the waist and enveloping them both in her reiki aura.  Her aura is so strong from her desire to save him, it's what let her get through Naraku's barrier to Sesshoumaru and shielding them both.  I had to think of some way to save him or I would have cried because the scene was touching and stressful at the same time.  There are many different ways he can survive and I'm curious to see what you have up your sleeve.  I can hardly wait for the next chapter.  In the meantime, I'm biting my nails while waiting.


anna (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Holy crap. That was such an evil chapter. I can't belive there's such a huge cliffhanger...AHH!!!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

O.O NOOOOOO poor Sesshomaru! Oh I hope he knows what he's doing and I hope he comes out of this alive >.< Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next!


laenfante (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

<jawdrop>

Umm...wow...I'll leave a better review when I become coherent again...<sputter; choke>


Hesunohana (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

what a cliffhanger !! how dare you ?!

 

well, still as great as I ever. I love this work so much too.


Snowfall (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

*dances around on tip toes, screaming high pitched squeals*  Such an exciting and breathtaking chapter!  You played out the battle just as I imagine Naraku would have done it.  Sesshoumaru pairing everyone up was a great idea, but it spoke of his understanding that the flames of motivation burn brighter by the desire to protect.  *squeals more for good measure*  Are your ears huring yet?  Then...OMG!  I know that Sesshoumaru has a plan.  He MUST have a plan!  He wouldn't allow Naraku to touch him otherwise.  I so can't wait til the next chapter, though I'll have to, won't I?  I'll be dancing and squealing until you post it.  ^_^


clara (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

pshaw, as if sesshoumaru would ever die - really... he better not be hurt too badly either... and this whole thing better have a happy end soon... so update already! i'm dying here!


knifethrower (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Wow, you don't let loose and write something long and...  unrestrained very often, but when you do, it is a doozy!  What an awesome chapter!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

WHAT!?! NO!! Curse you, Naraku! Kagome, get off your butt and do something! Use those powers everyone knows you have!

Wow. You had me on the edge of my seat. What a battle intro. Packed full of action, but still clear and easy feel the flow of action. I adore your writing, forth. I know it's not over yet, but I can't wait for more. Naraku, that creep. They better rip him up good.

- CA


LM Bluejay (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Damn! That was a GREAT chapter after an absence of updating. Approved! ^_^


GreyEcho (Chapter 96) - Sat 03 Apr 2010

Yay! ^.^ I'm all caught up. and oooo at a spot to leave it at.  Can't wait.


Unconditional.Attraction. (Chapter 96) - Sat 03 Apr 2010

I'm completely in love with your tale. Beautifully written and their relationship is built on a foundation of trust-- there wasn't much romance that I have seen, only the developement of something beautiful. This is truly a piece of work to be proud of.


Addy (Chapter 96) - Sat 13 Feb 2010

:O !!!


loveyaa (Chapter 96) - Wed 10 Feb 2010

I must say I am quite impressed. I really enjoyed this chapter. Your writing was superb. I can't wait to see the whole thing go down and have the battle start and hopefully have a happy ending (with a little bloodshed of course). I'm on the edge of my seat and am counting down the days until next time :)


laenfante (Chapter 96) - Tue 09 Feb 2010

Oh my, oh my...you do such a great job giving us a wonderful action scene, then leaving us wanting more. I'm breathless with anticipation for the next chapter as the tale draws to its climax.


Yohko (Chapter 16) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

Love this chapter! :)


Addy (Chapter 95) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

:D  Awesome!  I'll think of this as a birthday present.  XD 

 

Interesting development, and I still love this story.


anon (Chapter 95) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

I always enjoy your stories. They are well thought out, well written and exciting. :)


autumngold (Chapter 95) - Wed 02 Dec 2009

Silly Kouga.  Now his abduction is just going to make everything harder.  I just hope that Kagome doesn't try to sacrifice herself to save him.  Incredible update!  What will happen when the group finally meets Naraku?  Will Kagura be able to be trusted or saved?  Can't wait for more!


redoxide (Chapter 94) - Tue 10 Nov 2009

Wow, I really felt the building tension in this chapter! I loved the way Sesshoumaru stepped into organise their strengths and weaknesses. My impression of Sesshoumaru has always been that he'd be a good tactician, well versed in the Art of War. I liked the contradiction between his concern for Kagome which he barely admits to himself and his logical tally of the groups abilities. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter but at the same time I don't want this story to end!


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