Reviews for Imperceptible by forthright

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The Optimist (Chapter 97) - Thu 03 Mar 2011

I shall hope that you will return and finish this great story you have here.

It truly is a wonderful piece you have written.


momoe (Chapter 97) - Mon 28 Feb 2011

I love your story, please tell me you wont leave it there! could you please update? I mean, he can't die! do you think you can extend it more? love your portrayal of sesh~


FragmentedMatter (Chapter 97) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

I truly hope that that isn't the end!!! It's such a good story. The plot line and the subtleness of Sesshomaru's and Kagome's advances is so endearing and captivating. I haven't been so captured with a SessKag fiction in a very long time (not including your other story "Unspoiled" which is also fantastic by the way), and I am very pleased that you have captured my attention with your writing.

I can't wait to read more! Keep up the fabulous work!

-FDS


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 97) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

Gah yanno you've really left this one hanging on the edge of a cliff for a long time, and it's only going to be 100 chapters right??? Any chance you could dish out the last two? I really want to know what happens @_@ I hope Sessho doesn't die, but you didn't put a romance tag on it so I'm going to hazard a guess that they just stay friends??? PLease Forthy the suspense has been killing me for like ever!!!! *gives you bribery cookies in hopes that it'll help*


Sapphire E. Angel (Chapter 97) - Sun 09 Jan 2011

Aww ok youve been able to coax a review out of me for the first time. reading this story has put my artist mond on a whirlwind of omfg have to draw scenes out for this. Only now im asking please update soon....youve gottenn me hooked and now i am craving more. not saying right now but soon?? thank you!

sapphy-kun

 


criticat (Chapter 16) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

Gotta love Miroku and his ways. For sure my favourite chapter so far.


DeathFrost (Chapter 97) - Wed 27 Oct 2010

Please, please, please please. pleeeeeaaaase moooooorrrrreeee!! I haven't slept in two nights to stay up and read this. Pleeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee! forthright-sama!!! We beg you're humble mercy on these poor "Imperceptible" addicted beings!!!! *grovels on pitifully on floor*


Vrey (Chapter 97) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Meara (Chapter 97) - Fri 24 Sep 2010

OMG! My heart was beating so fast during that last chapter! You just love to lure people in and have them hanging on your every word, only to leave them with a cliffhanger. I just want to go ahead and profess my love to you, lol. Seriously though, I can't wait for the next chapter, because my imagination falls short when trying to conjure an idea of what might possibly happen next.  


Seijaku (Chapter 43) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

LMAO! Wow. Plenty of the chapters of this story have inspired all sorts of things from me, ranging from tears to laughter, as well as awe. I especially liked the line about Sess being a daydreamer in that last one. However, the end of this one actually made me what to squeal in delicious amusement. xD Awesomely done!!

P.S. Only reason I didn't let the sound loose is because I don't wanna wake anyone up. xD;


None (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

Wonderfully surprising and yet endearing set of chapters from drabbles to lovely long extended pieces.  It is nice to see a growing trust and friendship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, something that few authors take the time to build in a story.  Beautifully done and exquisitely crafted.  Very much look forward to the continuing chapters.


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 97) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

Ack!  How could you end it there???  Please update soon!  I love this story.  I'm on the edge of me seat here, so much so that I can't even leave my usual long review.  Don't leave us hanging.  Keep up the good work!


Snowfall (Chapter 97) - Thu 27 May 2010

I finally figured out what Sesshoumaru's plan is!  He played cat and mouse, or rather, dog and human, in order to draw out Kagome's power.  Now, he's playing on her loyalty and protection of friends in order to get her to ash Naraku!  *dances around*  Hope it works and hope she gives him a good slap for scaring her to death.  ^_^


Lauren (Chapter 97) - Wed 05 May 2010

*dies* Seriously?! Goading? That was the plan?! What the hell?! T^T That makes NO sense! You cannot bet everything on a trigger that may not go off correctly/the way you want it to. Someone is very cocky. I mean, there's reason, but still... Because, now you'll have two crazy asses running around hacking at Naraku. And of course, this was updated a month ago, so I'll be laying here, banging my head against the transparency that was this foolhardy plan for who knows how long. T^T *dwells in my corner of woe*

I only have one favor to ask: Please do not have a desperate "I love you" shout ring out anywhere. That'd completely ruin this story. All that build up for nothing. I'd be so sad for this fic.

Well, I'm sorry I took so long to read these chapters and have provided you with only a handful of reviews. I do love your story though. I hope everything going well for you o your side of the computer and that you're enjoying to wonderful weather! *gives you a cookie* Ja mata~!

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


cjflutterbye (Chapter 97) - Tue 04 May 2010

OMGOMGOMG!

I spent two days reading to get to Sess being pulled into Naraku?  ACK!!!

I have faith - and hopefully wait it out gracefully.


Lauren (Chapter 92) - Sun 02 May 2010

Alas, it is always Bokuseno that doles out wisdom to our dogs! Why is that? Is it some sort of irony or play on their real world roles? Because that would be funny... Maybe now Sesshomaru can stop over-analyzing and second-guessing his reactions and Kagome and Miroku's treatment of him. I doubt it'll happen, but I can hope, no?

Speaking of funny~ Totosai is so stupid! I love his somewhat thoughtful plans and partially faked memory loss bits. He's so entertaining for such an old geezer. ^^

*yawns* Since I've almost caught up to you, I think this would be a good place to pause (not to mention it's 1:11 AM). Looking forward to your next update(s)! *gives you a cookie*

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Lauren (Chapter 85) - Sat 01 May 2010

This chapter was very sweet. It's very Kagome-like to not tell the group everything about Valentine's Day, if only to spare herself the embarrassment of gift giving. It's also very Kagome-like to be so pleased that Inuyasha'd  "somehow" found out about White Day and they all came together to show her their appreciation.

I like the haiku. It was... appropiate, yet at the same time telling enough.

*OMFG Otters are SO adorable! ^o^ Has anyone taken a crack at drawing Oo?**

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Lauren (Chapter 72) - Sat 01 May 2010

Poor baby... Maybe it is best that Kohaku doesn't get too involved with Sango and the others. He'll only be gone again. And very soon if his attitude and reinstated proximity to Sesshomaru anything to go by. But Kagome's right too (even if she doesn't understand what Kohaku is trying to say). Having the last memories of your brother as being so withdrawn is harsh. I'd think he'd want Sango to have a few good memories of them to place on top of their childhood ones. Then again, maybe it's too painful to fake it.

I really hope you fix Takahashi-san's mistake, make Sango unselfish in the end and just let Kohaku stay dead.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Lauren (Chapter 67) - Sat 01 May 2010

I love how you can make such leaps when starting with unassuming subjects/starting points such as 'Barefoot' or 'Blind'. *gives you a cookie*


Lauren (Chapter 66) - Sat 01 May 2010

Those are all very valid questions. I can see the point you've made with Kagome's line of thinking, but how could it really be considered a "betrayal" if it'd been planned this way from the very beginning? I don't know... Kagome isn't as naiive as she was, but she still isn't very wise nor mature where it counts. There can be and are a lot of extenuating circumstances that need to be factored into every situation. This one is no different. She also needs to remember that they weren't even on speaking terms before this entire thing began.

Trust and friendship, if understood and reciprocated correctly can do many things, but it can hardly change a person. I don't think anything can really change a person. They are qho they are. Or are you trying to counter that point?

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


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