Reviews for Clumsy by forthright

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JeniNeji (Chapter 13) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Eeeee....Oopps. No body...yet

JeniNeji (Chapter 12) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I like her way of thinking. Independent females rule ;)

JeniNeji (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

O_O Kill?!

Jennifer (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo kagomaru is gonna meet her daddy, this'll be good :)

Fox (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

WOOT AN UPDATE. Holy cow, it's so... him. But not. LOL. Well DONE.

catori1207 (Chapter 10) - Tue 23 Aug 2011

Well, I find myself compelled to watch for updates on yet another of your wonderful little fics. Why are you such a spectacular writer? I've recommended all of your works to anyone I know who's looking for a good read (as well as to those who weren't actually looking for anything to read lol). You always manage to keep the characterizations spot on, and I love the storylines you come up with. This one is particularly interesting. I can't wait to read more ^-^

Fish Wishes (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Aug 2011

Gosh! This is one helluva story! I don't know whether to love or hate it, but I think that makes it a good one. I love your writing style, too. It's difficult to adjust, but I still see the souls of the characters and I appreciate how you haven't lost them yet (and I don't think you will)!

majinay (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

I always read your stories, though never leave reviews (shame on that) but this one... I too have a trouble picturing. It's much more... diffrent to accomodate, I guess...

Kimberley (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

This is awesome (: I'm just having trouble picturing it. I'm still not sure if I should think of the guy as a man version of Kagome or a human, nicer version of Sesshoumaru and if the girl is a cold, demon version of Kagome or a female version of Sesshoumaru...
I'm just cofusing myself. Overthinking. Fabulous story though! Looking forward to more (: 

Jo (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

That is an interesting concept. Yes, done before, but still interesting. It's a little jarring, I won't deny, but Sessh still has his - er, her silent deadly attitude and Kags, his optimistic heartfelt ways. Other than that... I'm still adjusting to the masculine Kag and feminine Sessh.

It is growing on me though. Well done and looking forward to the next installment!

Darrakk (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011



Now you are just being mean, teasing like this. YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. YOU CAN'T. You just... can't... please...

JeniNeji (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

well, at least he's alive :)

JeniNeji (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

O_O Oh uh

KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

This has become another favourite of mine. I can't wait to see what happen to both of them now. XD

Paige (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

This story is... different from what I usually read. ;P

I'm really curious to know what Sesshomaru's name will be as a female...

I look forward to the next review!

JeniNeji (Chapter 7) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Eeeeep! Maybe she'll kiss him instead lol

JeniNeji (Chapter 6) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

>_> Oh bother...this keeps getting worst for poor Kag

Noooooo (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Aargh! These drabbles of your must be stopped! It should be illegal or something to have so much goodness but only in tantalising nibble-sized pieces! Its like the smallest of fan-fixes, more than enough to get you hooked but not enough to satisfy and then the waiting!!! *stomps foot, hands on hips* no no no no you can't keep doing this to me! Please! Have mercy, write bigger chapters! Just every other chapter or something, anything! Please!


Great fic, as usual lol. Are you going to carry some gender traits across too? Very interested to see where you take this. I take it that only their genders have been switched? Or might we see Saroku slapping, um, Mingo? Now that doesn't work at all, but I'm sure you could do infinitely better that that lol. Thankyou for another story, update soon!

JeniNeji (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Oh...I bet he liked her eyes XD He must feel very awkward

JeniNeji (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Ugh...apparently he's a very unlucky individual :S

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