Reviews for Clumsy by forthright

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Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

...poor sesshome...that has to suck feet. I mean come on!! All that hard work only to be taken down by stray arrow. -head hang of shame-, that's gotta hurt. I ADORE this though, it's really good and extremely unique. Can't wait till october!!

SuzeHeart (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Hi. Wow, you've updated so much! I don't know whether to be ecstatic about it or sad that it won't happen again for another month. As always, your writing is awesome. The only thing I could say is that it's a little out of character for Sesshoume (sorry if I spelled that wrong) to take this so quietly, though I suspect that that won't quite be the case. If you could maybe update a little between chat nights, that would be awesome! Keep writing your wonderful stories, and Luvs!

Pyre (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Wait!  WAIT!  When, how, WHAT?  o_O *rereads chapter*  >.> So that's what happened.  Hilarious!  Beautifully done, and poor Kagomaru!  He has a new girlfriend er bride!  XD  Now this is gonna be interesting. Nicely written, although it almost appears as if poor Sesshoume's daddy is kinda relieved that she now had a prospective match >.>.

Violetcarson (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011


Paradise_kiss (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Awww pure Sesshoume! I bet Kagomaru will be the one to meld her heart!!

Stell (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

*crickets chirping while they stare at each other....*  Lol.  That is the funniest image ever!  He's probably thinking "What?  huh?  Bride?"


Please update soon!

Kimberley (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Phahah yes! This is going to be sweet. (:

Loveyaa (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Talk about a whirlwind romance. And just like that, both their lives change. Not sure if its for the better for either of them but guess we'll find out. This should be fun. I can't wait to see how they interact when they are forced to. Well I guess she isn't forced to but she cant hurt him. kinda weird and funny how her dad would make her mate a human (he doesn't care but she does). I can't wait to see what happens next :)

KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Oh gosh, this is awesome. XD Bride delivery, by her own father. XD I can't wait to read more.

Jo (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

*jaw drops* Whut?

Pappy get back here! You can't just dump her on him! He... he... she - they... Oh dear. XD

thioss (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011


Sooooo loooong tooooo goooooo.... 

Jennifer (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

i can just hear inside Kagomaru's head "*crickets chirping* WHATTTTTTT?"

JeniNeji (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

pats Sesshoume...I feel so bad for her now...

JeniNeji (Chapter 19) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

lol If you dont want to be need a man to protect. So truthful and logical and so difficult at the same time

JeniNeji (Chapter 18) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Ugh, that IS frustrating >_<

JeniNeji (Chapter 17) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Oh no! Poor girl.... I hope she's ok...

Jo (Chapter 17) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Oh dear... She's never going to hear the end of this... Cuz pappy is going to be meeting mommy. *cackles*

JeniNeji (Chapter 16) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Survive? Me? Sir, it was your daughter who was injured...

JeniNeji (Chapter 15) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

lol Yes, indeed, respects to father

JeniNeji (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I hope Papa is not too angry :(

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