Reviews for Clumsy by forthright

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JeniNeji (Chapter 20) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

pats Sesshoume...I feel so bad for her now...

JeniNeji (Chapter 19) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

lol If you dont want to be need a man to protect. So truthful and logical and so difficult at the same time

JeniNeji (Chapter 18) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Ugh, that IS frustrating >_<

JeniNeji (Chapter 17) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Oh no! Poor girl.... I hope she's ok...

Jo (Chapter 17) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Oh dear... She's never going to hear the end of this... Cuz pappy is going to be meeting mommy. *cackles*

JeniNeji (Chapter 16) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Survive? Me? Sir, it was your daughter who was injured...

JeniNeji (Chapter 15) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

lol Yes, indeed, respects to father

JeniNeji (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I hope Papa is not too angry :(

JeniNeji (Chapter 13) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Eeeee....Oopps. No body...yet

JeniNeji (Chapter 12) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I like her way of thinking. Independent females rule ;)

JeniNeji (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

O_O Kill?!

Jennifer (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo kagomaru is gonna meet her daddy, this'll be good :)

Fox (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

WOOT AN UPDATE. Holy cow, it's so... him. But not. LOL. Well DONE.

catori1207 (Chapter 10) - Tue 23 Aug 2011

Well, I find myself compelled to watch for updates on yet another of your wonderful little fics. Why are you such a spectacular writer? I've recommended all of your works to anyone I know who's looking for a good read (as well as to those who weren't actually looking for anything to read lol). You always manage to keep the characterizations spot on, and I love the storylines you come up with. This one is particularly interesting. I can't wait to read more ^-^

Fish Wishes (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Aug 2011

Gosh! This is one helluva story! I don't know whether to love or hate it, but I think that makes it a good one. I love your writing style, too. It's difficult to adjust, but I still see the souls of the characters and I appreciate how you haven't lost them yet (and I don't think you will)!

majinay (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

I always read your stories, though never leave reviews (shame on that) but this one... I too have a trouble picturing. It's much more... diffrent to accomodate, I guess...

Kimberley (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

This is awesome (: I'm just having trouble picturing it. I'm still not sure if I should think of the guy as a man version of Kagome or a human, nicer version of Sesshoumaru and if the girl is a cold, demon version of Kagome or a female version of Sesshoumaru...
I'm just cofusing myself. Overthinking. Fabulous story though! Looking forward to more (: 

Jo (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

That is an interesting concept. Yes, done before, but still interesting. It's a little jarring, I won't deny, but Sessh still has his - er, her silent deadly attitude and Kags, his optimistic heartfelt ways. Other than that... I'm still adjusting to the masculine Kag and feminine Sessh.

It is growing on me though. Well done and looking forward to the next installment!

Darrakk (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011



Now you are just being mean, teasing like this. YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. YOU CAN'T. You just... can't... please...

JeniNeji (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

well, at least he's alive :)

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