Reviews for Time Floats On by Smortz

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Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Wow! I think my heart was racing the whole time. Does Sesshomaru think that lonliness feeling will get any better as time goes on? Things can never be good if Naraku is involved, who knows he probably has something slipped into his drink...lol I mean why did he continue to slep with Kagome itjuat does not make since. Whay did he think would happen after he mated Kagura, that he would still sleep with Kagome on the side. Anyways, I think Kagome's plan is brillant but I think she is lying to herself if she thinks that if Sesshomaru wanted her she would not take him back, it would take a love thats way more overwhelming for her. And dont think Toga is innocent in this either, I mean come on he had to know of Sesshomarus plans to wed Kagura or the fact that they had been going out, something.

Can you tell that I love this story...lol You know I cant wait fo more but I guess I have to. When is Sesshomaru's marriage? I just want to know because I wanted to see if she wanted this revenge on that day or just make him regret all together.

I was talking with my husband trying to figure out if Kagura would even be consider a full demoness because Naraku is half but My husband was like she is because she came from the demon part of him...i dont know though..grrrr

Another question? I s Sesshomaru's mother alive?

Last bit of rant, how can he not approve of Kik-ho after what he did himself which is really no different.


Mary (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Caleesci (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Smo

I wicked love it (but you already knew that!) Keep it coming!!

Love,

Caleesci


joyouki (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Love it love it love it!!! Awesome story


joyouki (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Love it! Sounds like a kick a** story!


JeniNeji (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

This is--totally--surprising. I've never thought a twist like this was going to appear. Well, I didnt even thought about it. You have--definitely--surprised me (You pulled the carpet from under my feet and I fell down...totally confused and wondering whats going to happen next)


TruGemini (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

I'm excited. I want to see what she finds!


yasurei (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

I must say that the Kagome from the first chapter was my favourite. She was mature enough and strong enough to know, how to handle hurt and move on. Then came the Kagome who is naive and blinded by love although she is an adult. How could she think that Sesshoumaru was serious when she was nothing then a booty-call? And the next blow was rather low. Him announcing his mate-to-be when he just slept with Kagome a day before. He IS exactly like Inuyasha. Really, she should have learned her lessons not to get involved with dogs. They are just not good for her. When love starts to hurt more than bring joy, then it´s not a healthy love. It´s masochistic. I really want to see Kagome moving on, she doesn´t need a male to make her happy. I wish she would heal from this and maybe there will be something with Kouga, he is wonderful here. And if Kouga is a prince then she would be in the "royal circle" to show the others, that she is worth everything just as she is. Kouga as a wolf would never stray from her like the stupid dogs. And stupid Sesshoumaru would really deserve this. It seems that he always got everything what he wanted without any consequences and it´s time for a reality check. He needs to see what an ass he is and losing Kagome to someone else who really loves her just the way she is, would be the best thing for him to learn. He simply doesn´t deserve her. Stay with your stupid Kagura and live your life with her miserable. After all, fate is a bitch and it´s time that Kagome is the one who gets everything she deserves after all these years of hurt and being used.


kissthehentai (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

It is freaking 4:31 AM in the morning. I HAD to read the new updates. You tell me how much I am digging this new series!! I can't wait for Kagome to make Sesshoumaru EAT IT. This is such a twist to the plot and I can't wait for the next prompt. I NEED the next chapters. Damn, you started a monster.. o_<


zandrellia (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

“You always know when I'm trying to sneak up behind you!”

 

lol XD I died.


Loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

Getting the emotions out is always a good thing. Whether it is through writing or telling someone. Kagome has been through a lot but Im glad that you have her moving on and Im glad that we got to see (mostly) the Kagome that has started the process of moving on and not the one blindly in love. You've set it up so that Im guessing most people don't want to see them together. I wonder where you are going to go from here and if you'll have Sesshoumaru ever realize that he was wrong for what he did to Kagome. I can't wait to see what happens and how Koga fits in :)


Alice (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

This story makes me so sad! :'(


Kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

omg!! i cried over this chapter! it was so sad. Poor kagome! i love how you brought in Koga though! Update soon! I LOVE this story


The Lovely Miko (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

That was great Smo!!!! :D I'm so glad you like the prompts!!! :) Can't wait to see what your brilliant mind comes up with next :)


LittleSingingBird (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

So...I'm sick of Kagome right now...she is pretty much living/re-living both her's and mine downward spiral relationships and I feel truly pathetic because I still feel the way she is feeling and its not fair. Being the person I am, I was totally on her side when she made that little jab at not only Kagura but Sesshoumaru as well because His current girlfriend is a Kagura tyoe and she is just.....delightful. And I can admit that before the end of chapter 2, I started to tear up for no apperant reason, at first...and then my Pandora turned against me and put on Adele's song Someone Like You. I cant wait to read chapter 4 and see what happend and I'm sure that the wedding will be...an experience to say the least. Keep up the great work!


Blaire (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

That literally broke my heart :( how can Sesshomaru be such an ass!!! I hope, I really really hope that he has to marry Kagura because of some reason...I don't know. :/ 


Noacat (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

I've always enjoyed a good tale of unrequited love and this one is turning out to be a loo-loo.Can't wait for chapter 4!!


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

omg what a bastard


Sessygurl (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

I must say if you havent noticed Sesshoumaru is not my favorite character in this fic so far, damn and thats saying alot. Inuyasha is actually looking a tad....only a tad better


Sessygurl (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

Damn due, wtf, no wonder she felt like that, did he even think about how she felt at all. I think she should go to the wedding with someone else to rub it in his face, that he isnt the only one that can have someone. It sure sounds like a story of lust and nothing more. Did he think to have her as a mistress, I mean wth. Grrrr I cant wait to see what happening with him. Im guessing she was nothing more thant a fuck buddy. She deserves so much more and the problem is there is no closure between her and Sesshoumaru therefore she cant really be with someone else. I swear you are a great author, I cant wait to read more


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