Reviews for Time Floats On by Smortz

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Aldrin De Guzman (Chapter 22) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

UPDATE i've read your stories in fanfiction archive will start reading here for more ^_^ im really hooked to your stories


Loveyaa (Chapter 22) - Sun 10 Nov 2013

Kagome is slowly, very slowly, being broken down on that matter. I wonde how long she will be able to hold out. With Sesshoumaru soon to work with her and I'm sure his father going to go berserk and get Sesshoumaru back, things should become even more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 22) - Wed 06 Nov 2013

Great chapter, congratulations on the new job. Please update the next chapter soon, keep it coming.


Sessygurl (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

Excellent my friend. Congrats on the new job! I loved the back in time part and when she attack Kagome. It sort of reminded me of Inu's blades of blood. 

A little sexual tension in the air between them as well. 

Im wondering how Daitaro will react to Sessho's plans, Im sure he will level the house.


Ankita (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

finally a new chapter please please keep updating 


s_spina (Chapter 21) - Fri 21 Jun 2013

Wow! at frst, I reallydid not want to read your story, I am not much of a drama fanatic, but curiosity push (especially after reading two other of your complete stories) and I am completely amazed and addicted to your story!

i really admire yourportrayal of Sesshoumaru, it is very refreshing and lovable :) 

Thank you so muchfor the story and hopefully more chapters soon! *wink wink*


Amarie (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Apr 2013

original and well written, i love this story.


Alexis barnes (Chapter 21) - Thu 04 Apr 2013

Please update it gets better every chapter 


Jemillia Grant (Chapter 21) - Sun 24 Mar 2013

please stop now. i want to know what happens between all of them. i hope kagome forgives eveyone  and becomes a happy soul.


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Mar 2013

I stopped reading when Sesshoumaru and Kagome were kissing so pationately in the memory.

Why?

Because I found not only Sesshoumaru super OC, but it's rather insulting to believe that a girl after a break up and in the midst of crying her eyes out would accept her ex-boyfriend's brother to kiss her and touch her like that.

However, your idea and plot are interesting. Perhaps you rushed a little bit how Sesshoumaru and Kagome got together, but I'll continue reading anyway...

Hope my review doesn't hit a nerve for you. I like being honest.

xoxo

~Krazy


Loveyaa (Chapter 21) - Fri 22 Mar 2013

I am absolutely in love with Sango's last line, and you for thinking of it. Everybody seems to be struggling and Kagome may be getting the brunt of it, but she did make her own choices throughout it all. I can't wait to see what happens next and how she deals with her now "unjust" anger :)


Ankita (Chapter 21) - Fri 22 Mar 2013

<3 updateeee sooon


darknessqueen0789 (Chapter 21) - Thu 21 Mar 2013

I feel really bad for Kaogme in this chapter. Plus why do I feel like the reason why everyone excluding koga, rin, sango and christopher treat kagome like she is a powerful begin out to destroy the world? I can't wait till everything is out in the open and realize that kagome is not after power. From all of the chpaters it seems she just want's to help out the hanyou population. Great chapter and can't for the next one.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Thu 21 Mar 2013

Keep it coming.


Loveyaa (Chapter 20) - Wed 20 Feb 2013

Well...don't know if this could have gone better. Considering. I do like the struggle you portray and how the struggle changes. I can't wait to see what happens next and what this "discussion" between Sesshoumaru and his father will bring to light :)


Leahchan13 (Chapter 20) - Sat 16 Feb 2013

OH SNAP CRACKLE AND POP!!!! I love this story~!!! Please keep up the good work and update soon~!


Madam Fluffy (Chapter 20) - Fri 15 Feb 2013

So sorry I haven't wrote a review for this sooner my computer wouldn't let me. I hope Sess makes eveything right with Kagome and that gets her confidence back. So will his dad fly off the handle? Or will he just have steem come out of his ears ? thanks for wrighting  keep up the good work


Ankita (Chapter 20) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

pleaseee udate sooonnnn


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 20) - Mon 11 Feb 2013

Keep it coming.


Sessygurl (Chapter 20) - Mon 11 Feb 2013

Bad move Sessho. I mean I know why he did because something was off in her aura but still. The shit is going to hit the fan in the morning. Though, I must say im glad he is finally getting some balls. I cant wait to see what happens next.


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