Reviews for Time Floats On by Smortz

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R (Chapter 22) - Sat 22 Dec 2018

So, I'm not sure how influential reviews are on such old stories, but I can't help but send my wishes along after reading this piece!  I actually started reading this story knowing that it was incomplete after having just finished your other work, Striking a Deal with the Devil, and I was Jonesin' for more awesome works. When I began the story I knew I was going to kind grieve the loss of completion for these characters, which was a little heartbreaking. That said, I couldn't stop reading the damn thing! To begin - you're obviously a very gifted writer. Between the fluidity of the pacing, the seamless dialogue, complex plot, and well-written characters I found myself absolutely lost in the piece. You always know when  a story is well-written when you ache with empathy, especially during those heart wrenching moments of betrayal, and feel the burn of wanting redemption for the pain of love lost. I know that it's been so, so many years since you last approached this story. If I could reflect on anything I think that there was a way that the story became a bit stuck in the tug-of-war between the two sides -- both hurt and a path to resolution not yet found, though the hints becoming clearer. That said, it felt like you were dancing on the verge of finding the path for them. I know it's such a long shot - and you're working on another piece (which I'm also reading!) - but I thought I would throw in my two cents and beg you to bring fresh eyes to a story that you obviously spent so many hours pouring your talent into. I loved your characters and would love to see them find resolution in this fantastical story arc you put together. Thanks for all your dedication! 

Toni (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2018

just found and read this story  sorry you decided not to continue  too many things left unsettled  you are a great writer  really was looking for more chapters 

Samantha (Chapter 22) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

AH! I was so sad when I hit the last chapter and realized you hadn't updated in a long time. I enjoy your writing and hope you return to your incomplete stories!

Aldrin De Guzman (Chapter 22) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

UPDATE i've read your stories in fanfiction archive will start reading here for more ^_^ im really hooked to your stories

Loveyaa (Chapter 22) - Sun 10 Nov 2013

Kagome is slowly, very slowly, being broken down on that matter. I wonde how long she will be able to hold out. With Sesshoumaru soon to work with her and I'm sure his father going to go berserk and get Sesshoumaru back, things should become even more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 22) - Wed 06 Nov 2013

Great chapter, congratulations on the new job. Please update the next chapter soon, keep it coming.

Sessygurl (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

Excellent my friend. Congrats on the new job! I loved the back in time part and when she attack Kagome. It sort of reminded me of Inu's blades of blood. 

A little sexual tension in the air between them as well. 

Im wondering how Daitaro will react to Sessho's plans, Im sure he will level the house.

Ankita (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

finally a new chapter please please keep updating 

s_spina (Chapter 21) - Fri 21 Jun 2013

Wow! at frst, I reallydid not want to read your story, I am not much of a drama fanatic, but curiosity push (especially after reading two other of your complete stories) and I am completely amazed and addicted to your story!

i really admire yourportrayal of Sesshoumaru, it is very refreshing and lovable :) 

Thank you so muchfor the story and hopefully more chapters soon! *wink wink*

Amarie (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Apr 2013

original and well written, i love this story.

Alexis barnes (Chapter 21) - Thu 04 Apr 2013

Please update it gets better every chapter 

Jemillia Grant (Chapter 21) - Sun 24 Mar 2013

please stop now. i want to know what happens between all of them. i hope kagome forgives eveyone  and becomes a happy soul.

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Mar 2013

I stopped reading when Sesshoumaru and Kagome were kissing so pationately in the memory.


Because I found not only Sesshoumaru super OC, but it's rather insulting to believe that a girl after a break up and in the midst of crying her eyes out would accept her ex-boyfriend's brother to kiss her and touch her like that.

However, your idea and plot are interesting. Perhaps you rushed a little bit how Sesshoumaru and Kagome got together, but I'll continue reading anyway...

Hope my review doesn't hit a nerve for you. I like being honest.



Loveyaa (Chapter 21) - Fri 22 Mar 2013

I am absolutely in love with Sango's last line, and you for thinking of it. Everybody seems to be struggling and Kagome may be getting the brunt of it, but she did make her own choices throughout it all. I can't wait to see what happens next and how she deals with her now "unjust" anger :)

Ankita (Chapter 21) - Fri 22 Mar 2013

<3 updateeee sooon

darknessqueen0789 (Chapter 21) - Thu 21 Mar 2013

I feel really bad for Kaogme in this chapter. Plus why do I feel like the reason why everyone excluding koga, rin, sango and christopher treat kagome like she is a powerful begin out to destroy the world? I can't wait till everything is out in the open and realize that kagome is not after power. From all of the chpaters it seems she just want's to help out the hanyou population. Great chapter and can't for the next one.

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Thu 21 Mar 2013

Keep it coming.

Loveyaa (Chapter 20) - Wed 20 Feb 2013

Well...don't know if this could have gone better. Considering. I do like the struggle you portray and how the struggle changes. I can't wait to see what happens next and what this "discussion" between Sesshoumaru and his father will bring to light :)

Leahchan13 (Chapter 20) - Sat 16 Feb 2013

OH SNAP CRACKLE AND POP!!!! I love this story~!!! Please keep up the good work and update soon~!

Madam Fluffy (Chapter 20) - Fri 15 Feb 2013

So sorry I haven't wrote a review for this sooner my computer wouldn't let me. I hope Sess makes eveything right with Kagome and that gets her confidence back. So will his dad fly off the handle? Or will he just have steem come out of his ears ? thanks for wrighting  keep up the good work

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