Oh no, I can just imagine Kagome's face when she realizes that her worst fear did, in fact, come true. ;_;

And my heart just broke during that Inuyasha/Shippou scene. You don't see that sweetness often, and not to that degree.

As much as it'll kill me, I can't wait to see what happens.

This is a great story...Please update soon. I just found this today and couldn't stop reading it. You are very well written. Thanks

I think that  I am madly in love wih Takeshi! The character is just so perfect. *wink*

The way you write..I can feel everything, every little emotion as if I am there. It's awesome.  *wink*

I like the fact that you outline the deep bond Sesshomaru had with Rin and that in doing so, he is not OOC. I am not very fond of a Sesshomaru who turns oh so lovely overnight..I actually hate those kind of stories. What I want to say is to take your time in creating the bond between them..Fluff is anywhere on fanfiction.net but stories with a complex plot..you can count them on your fingers...(not that I don't like fluff...I love it...but I also like to see the relationship developing which is a little bit hard to find..)

.......your story got a REAL big problem...even if the story in itselt is breathtaking and probably you have also other things to do...could you pretty please update??? I surely wouldn't mind at all. I don't know when or how but I have slowly become addicted to it... Feed my addiction?!? *puppy eyes*

Nooooo! Shippo! *sobs in corner* I think a resurrection is called for! Kagome has the power to do it, andit would make a great plot development. pleeease? or i'll cry more ;_; and hate you forever. (said sort of jokingly)

I write this with tears in my eyes. It has been a long time since a story has effected me so. I feel so sorry for Shippo and I can only imagine the pain Kagome will feel when she finds out. It was nice to see Inuyasha with such feeling.

I can hardly wait for the next update since so much is happening at once! Shippo dead, Kagome and Takeshi defying there lord and Sesshourmaru hell bent on punishing them! 

Can't WAIT!!!!!!!!!

I both love and hate you right now. I can’t believe you killed off Shippo is Sesshomaru going to revive him I hope so.  And I’m so glad that Takeshi is helping Kagome he is an awesome character you did a good job in developing his character so far. Well I can’t wait for your next update to find out what happens with Kagome, Takeshi, Sesshomaru, and Shippo.

Loved it. One thing though Bella Morte is Italian for beautifil death, Belle Mort is the French version.

wow, you updated so quickly this time. AWESOME
i can only ask you to keep up the good work

I soo loooved the pissed-as-hell kagome turning on sesshy-chan
i so want kagome to scream in agony and sesshy to hear it so that guilt or his own pent up emotions come to bite him in the arse.... real jerk (so it gives me a real in-character feeling) 

hope you update really soon XD

~lily

... so sad... I liked the kinder side of Inuyasha you portrayed. It was a nice change of pace. You made me cry! I don't cry. 

please update soon, my little heart beggs you.

Wonderful story so far! I do love the different take on Sesshoumaru, even if he is a douche bag. lol And Takeshi is becoming my a favorite character! :) Its very sad that Shippo died. :( Can't wait to see what happens next, hope you update soon!

I am really enjoying this story.  I have to admit that I am extremely sad that Shippo died.  I am happy that he atleast had Inuyasha by his side.  I hope that Kagome kicks Sesshomaru's ass.  He atleast got to be there by Rin's side, yet Kagome did not get to be there for Shippo.

But he is my favorite little fox-boy!!!!  I do hope you bring Sesshoumaru around soon, his Lord Poutiness needs a good slap.  :P

Awww, that was such a sad ending to this chapter. Shippo dying? Aw, man. I hope it gets better from here on out. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha sees kagome for the first time in a while after being in Sesshomaru's palace. I wonder what kind of emotions would come out when he confronts her about Shippo's death. For some reason, I hope he especially takes his feelings out on Sesshomaru when they see each other. Can't wait.

I am really enjoying this story so far and can't wait to read more!

Damn, poor Takeshi. Come on Kagome! Get your act together!

Ahem, I love this story, it's awesome and I think you're doing absolutely amazing.

There is one thing that is bothing me when the 2 demons that were speaking to Sesshomaru, it is very intresting what they had to say, it was almost as if they knew of this plan and if Kags and Sesshomaru don't find a way to cop with eachter then everthing will be fall, but what puzzles me is there converstation at the end.

"She will not thrive here." he murmured.

"She will fail." Shigure whispered to the taller youkai. "Unless she can gain approval, she will ultimately not succeed."

"And the West will fall."

What are they talking about!!! it is so hush hush and so..... like they know that she needs to succceed in the thing that she is about to do other wise something will happen to the west? very intresting, why would they care, if there LORD does not!!!!.

I Hope you update soon!!!.

I honestly hope that she succeeds in ecapeing because, hear is the thing, Rin can expect for kagome to do the work and Sesshomaru to not show is kindness or his graditued with out beging rewarded, If she honestly things that it is all about her Lord and no one eles matters, than she is truly crazy and I hope Kags puts the kid in her place and says, "NO, I will not be the only one that will only try on beging friends with him, she is not a servent to him, nor is she  butt kisser like Jaken. I hope she relizes that with out both parties trying there is nothing one can do with out the other one as well.

It should not be only kags who puts the effort in!! Sesshomaru has to try as well, but beging the little spoild Prince that he is, I don't see that happening any time soon, so with that in mind I hope she leaves and Sesshomaru really feels that ok maybe he needs to change is addittued towards people, because there is so much a person can take before saying "Enough is Enough" and no one is that Saintness not even kags in a way, so I hope she gets  brain and leaves.

I can't wait to read more Hugs

Megan

I was so wondering what happend, to this story, I am happy that you updated, I thought you forgotten this amazing story, I am so hoping for another and I hope you update real soon, I hope Kags guard does not get wiped!!!

Hugs

Megan

-_~

sooo goodd!

Sadness...

Wow..... pretty good chapter. You have your way with words, and I like it ;P
I have an inkling as to where this could be going.... ABSOLUTELY CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPP... XD

please update as soooooon as you can

~ily