Someone in the city is a traitor! The sad thing is, that whoever it is probably has Rin..

Oooh. Maybe this is wrong coming from me...but I have issues with authority anyway. Yasha should have decked him a good one and closed his mouth for him. Something is being covered up here and I know they'll get to the bottom of it.

Have no worries about being delayed on an update, my dear friend, as much as we all would love to live in this world, the RW must take presedence. I, myself, have been dealing with 'things' that the RW has kept me from my sweet haven I have here, so do what takes priority.

I must say that this is just getting better with each new chapter! I love, love, love, Yasha's fire!!! I can see him standing there like he owns the world and he won't take anyone's crap. Him staring down Kagura making demands... Him taking Kagome back to Cresent Moon to face her ghosts, carrying her into Maru's office...Him not even letting a higher rank brass get away with talking about his brother and Kagome as if they were traitors to their country. He kept his full temper in check though. He stood his ground,with pride and honor to his family line. Only you make InuYasha a worthy character in most everything you write.  JEN

Poor Kagome... I dont think Inu-Yasha is making this any better... just staring like "I know what you did, wench"

The story is FABULOUS! I dunnoh what your gonna do with sesshomaru yet. weather you keem him dead or have him alive the story is already AWESOME!  

This is sooo amazing. It's also very... emotional. A part of me is hoping that Maru ends up alive, but I know that its very unlikely. Just the hopeful inside me, can't accept Kagome's saddness. But anyways, I can't wait until the next update, and I think its very amazing!

hahah! Wow I love the ending to this chapter

Oh, that's so nice :)

Loved the descriptions and sweetness of their first time. Also, loved Inu-Yasha

Oh My gosh O!! You wrote their first time so beatifully and I really could see Captain Maru sitting and writing this as it went on. Wonderful chapter lady. Awesome Job! And to describe the call between Yasha and Maru and the promise between them. I can see Kagome and he becoming good friends if not more once the whole ordeal passes, but I believe there is a while to go and more twists and turns you have in store for us.

yay thiz chpt waz awesome cant wait for more

All I can say is... Wow

Hm, why is it there always has to be some idiot always ready to start trouble? Kagome showed great strength in restraining herself from getting involved in a physical fight. I'm sure her training had alot to do with it, just as her knowledge that she would probably be the one held responsible. It's a good thing Yasha showed up just at the right time. Not the way he had intended to meet the woman who held his brother's heart, I'm sure. I can imagine how difficult it was for Kagome to keep it together when she saw the family resemblance.

This is just so intriguing. I actually dreamt of this fic last night. Weird. I don't remember ever doing something like that before. This was the last thing I read before falling asleep though.  JEN

Inuyasha is finally on the scene! Seems like everything is really going to be picking up speed now! Great job by the way. This story deserves the kick ass award so far :)

Sorry...that review was mine... checks why Im logged out...

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I still think its sad the Captain is missing...or dead

Warning: No matter what I say, I love this fic!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! How can this be a SesshxKag if he's dead?!?!!?!???!!?! He better not REALLY be dead.... I don't even wanna think about what might happen if he is.... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is pure evil!!!! How can you make Kagome suffer so much????? And whta if she's found guilty?????? OMG!!!! I might die!!!! This is PURE INSANITY!

*deep breath* Great Story so far! Update Soon!

is sesshoamru really dead? i kept thinking hes still alive. if hes not i dont want to get my hopes up.....

i love his jorunals about her. they are so romantic. i want him to be alive so they can still have the life together they could have had.

Soooo...the Captain got her pregnant on purpose. Wow! and he knew which is why he looked how he did when she was taken. Man, this is getting to be a serious mystery. Keep up the great work!!

It really is a wonder how Kagome even survived. The dirty, dank environment and the horrendous torture was pure hell, but then to come home and be forced to recount every little detail just to save your own life once again...and then, to be given a medication to supposedly help you calm down and rest, only to have all those memories of you and your lover come flooding back as if it were yesterday only to wake up to find that's all they were, memories and the people you fought so hard to protect are now trying to condemn you for something you never did.

Oh, the heartbreak to hear he wrote of his love for her and that he wanted her to marry him and have his children. To hear how he could have possibly planned for her to get pregnant... I can't help but cry right with her. I know I must sound so redundant, but I can't help but feel so bad for Kagome. From the frying pan into the fire.

So the pregnancy has been found out. I am surprised that InuYasha heard about it.  Are the fates at work here, or what?  JEN

Two things: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   I so hate you right now!!!! Why are you making everyone one suffer, espcially when I'm hyped up on Monster?! GAAAH!

Oh and the second thing you misspelled story on:“They just want to see if you will change your sorry is all. Don’t worry; I’ll be right there with you.” She led the girl to a table inside of the café, telling her to sit down. “I thought you could use some fresh air; you like the place?”

Other then that I love your story and dont take the first thing as an insult or a complaint, take it as a complement. If you can evok emotions in your readers that make them want to kill you but keep you long enough to finish the story I would say your doing a pretty badass job! LOL.

P.S.

Gosh dang!! I wanted Sess/Kag smut!! Not past weird-name-person-who-is-rerenceed-like-Sess-but-it-might-not-be-even-though-I'm-pretty-sure-it-is/Kag smut. If you figure out what I was trying to say kudos to you!! You can now speak my language!! Delux Style!!!! LOL, JK