Reviews for Sweet Betrayal by Kanna37

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FayeMegan (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

Yay, good job! I like the interactions bewteen Sesshoumaru and Kagome, it's cute. Looking forward to the last part!


kira (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

It´s wrong that Kagome adresses Inuyasha and Sango with the sama suffix, they are beneath her station. She is the mate of Lord Sesshoumaru and they have to call her Kagome-sama. Inuyasha is a bastard as his mother was not mated or married to Inutaisho and Sango is only a normal human, not a noble. They should only be called Inuyasha-san and Sango-san nothing else. Kagome knows this things as that is still common in modern Japan so please change that.

I hope that Kagura is still alive. Her and Miroku would make an intersting pairing. I´m glad that Kagome forgave Miroku and Shippo somewhat. I did not blame them really although they should have told her the truth. They did suffer, too. But I´m glad that she doesn´t care for Inuyasha and S ango anymore. They still don´t get what they have done to her. I wouldn´t forgive them either, once a cheater always a cheater. Sango is actually someone who would go over dead bodies to get what she wants, she did betray the group once and tried to sacrifice Rin at the final battle. Stupid bitch. Or Inuyasha´s constant switching from one woman back to the other. People like that can´t be trusted.

I feel sorry for Kikyou, too. She´s really cursed. If she were alive I would have wished for a Kikyou and Miroku pairing. I could see Miroku being devoted to the beautiful, graceful and wise woman. They would make a handsome couple.

 


Patricia (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
Very, very good. It may be bitchy but I hope that Inuyasha and Sango continue to pay the consequences. (and pay, and pay, and....)

Amy (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

MORE UPDATES!THIS STORY ROCKS!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

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0o0o0o0o I'm so excited! SEriosuly love that Miro gets off the hook b/c Sango

and Yusha Ef'd up. Though I'm kinda hopeing for an odd pairing for Miro if he

gets one, like Kagura, or Shiori. r0o really likes the idea of Shiori with miro

mostly b/c i think she'd put him in a barrier when he acts up. Maybe even

shakes him up some when he does it too! 0o0o0o0o i cant wait for more!!!!

you always make me bake new update bribery c0okies to wiggles at you!

*wiggles them all hot n smellin yummy* MORE!

r0o


Karen (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Jun 2010

I read your story & i most say I love it.  Is there going to be a chapter 2 ?  :)


GreyEcho (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Jun 2010

GAH! You stopped THERE~!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter. nicely done.


Patricia (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Jun 2010
*stares at Amber in awe* Not fair. You got me hooked on another of your stories. Can't wait to see where this is going. :) Wonderfully done, as always.

Feminafures (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

This is wonderful...I hope you update soon cause I was on the edge of my chair wanting more. 


sara (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

Well, a bit cliché but well written and it´s Sango who Inuyasha has betrayed Kagome and not Kikyou; that is not so cliché. Although the Inu/Sango pairing really creeps me out. There is really no chemistry between them and Sango might be a good fighter but I find her absolutely boring. Don´t know why it´s always Kikyou who is bad so I´m glad it´s Sango this time. Kikyou is at least interesting.


Sess Koibito (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

I just love it when you write these mini-chapter stories! I think Inuyasha should get to walk in on Sesshoumaru and Kagome mating ... and get sliced up by Sesshoumaru ... it's only fair since he did it to Kagome. :)  Can't wait to read the next part!


Seshiepersonalpriestess (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

As always, you have me hooked. :)


Lexie (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

ooooooohhh!!! O.O i really wannna know - are they gonna bust in on kags n sess whilst they're mating? uh oh!!

please update!!


Mimiru (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

ooooo! I demand moorre! Please write more soon?

 

..Please? O.O


Mariposa (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

Amber! when I first saw this fic I knew that it was going to be amazing. I didnt even have to read it and I already knew. Just like everything else you write this was fabulous. In the beginning my heart was aching because of the betrayal...and what a betrayal indeed! (way worse then sneeking off to see Kikyo) Like other readers I will be sad that its going to be a three-shot but I did really love the long chapter!

I cant wait to read the groups reaction, and of course the actual mating between Kagome and Lord Fluffy! I'm so excited for those updates!

also I hope you are feeling better,(I heard that you were sick for a whie) and I am super glad that you are back. 


Happy2SeeAll (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010

Excellent as usual! I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter. I know you said that this will only be a 3 shot but I am already disappointed that it will be ending so quickly. I do like the length of the chapters. I hope InuYasha doesnt go too crazy when he finds Kagome. He has Sango now and hopefully he keeps that in mind.


nogooddeed (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

Awesome please update soon!!


Hoshi Phoenix (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

Lovely chapter Kanna! Can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely have me on the edge of my seat with this chapter! :)


FayeMegan (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

Good! I'm love it so far, not too cliche! Can't wait to read the rest ;)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

*giggles insanely happily* 0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o when you updates i get s0o0o0o0o happy!!!!! *gigglfes more* stupid yusha >_> Sorry i cant help it!


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