Reviews for Sweet Betrayal by Kanna37

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Beautifully Wicked (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

I LOVED IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I wwould not have changede a thing, but I do wish that it was longer as your fics are so good.


snowbird (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

I sort of felt sorry for Sango but it was poetic justice for her and Inuyasha.  Besides, I'm sure there were many orphaned children that they could have taken in and raised instead of living out their lives alone and lonely and probably bitter. 

I had to laught about Ayame accepting Miroku's proposition to bear his children.

So, overall, this was a very enjoyable mini-story.


Dragoness (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Wow, what a great story. I love that they got what they deserved in the end. I can't wait for your next story.

 


TruGemini (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Amber...I loved it! You wrapped this story up beautifully. I didn't expect Kikyo to do what she did, but it was the truth that was spoken. Great Job!

 

 

On a side note...I read Malice, and I had to give you a standing ovation on that one. It was the best.


TruGemini (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Amber...I loved it! You wrapped this story up beautifully. I didn't expect Kikyo to do what she did, but it was the truth that was spoken. Great Job!

 

 

On a side note...I read Malice, and I had to give you a standing ovation on that one. It was the best.


Hoshi Phoenix (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Amber I loved this story! Of course I love all your work anyway... :) Inuyasha and Sango definitely had it coming to them. Can't wait to see what you come up with next! :)


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!  I loved this sooooo much!! I will be adding this to my favs!! This is perfect in showing that when you do wrong by others it will come back on you sooner or later.....WITH A VENGENCE! That's why it pays to be honest, even if it hurts.


martha (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

I loved the ending. Thanks for sharing this with all of us


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

>:3 LOVES!

 

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I love that miro ended up with a youkai, Ayame at that! no one gives her loves in fiction! and i really love it when she ends up with miroku or even inuyasha, I think i'm just a fan of the odd pairing. I have to say my favorite part is Kikyo's curse. Seriously, it makes the most sence not only does it punish both sango and inuyasha, but it made her hatred go elswhere so that it wouldnt affect Kagome or her unborn. I love that. Though its kidna sad in a way, b/c not with the curse the way it is, Sangow ill always have to be watching to make sure that inu doesnt run off, thus betraying her. The curse, makes it so HER womb is rotting, not anyone else, so in theory inuyasha could have kids but with someone else, makign Sango always have to worry if he'd leave her mate or not.

Again i really love this!

♥s!!


SaraSama1 (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

There are certain life lessons that we carry with us and I just learned another one today. When Amber writes a story, make sure you read it and you will not be disappointed.

Beautifully executed story. I enjoyed every minute, and as with all your other stories, I wish it was longer. Brava!


GreyEcho (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Yay! I'm glade Shippou and Miroku joined their group.


Firehauke (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Jun 2010

This is a good story - much different than I've read recently.  Good characterizations and detail.  Looking forward to the next installment.


river (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jun 2010

Can't wait for the next chapter!  

I don't necessarily mind Inuyasha and Sango as a couple but in this story... yeah, not cool to keep it a secret from Kagome.  At least Inuyasha won't confuse Sango with Kikyou, but the two of them both have a way of fixating on their goal and completely ignoring those around them that they hurt (Inuyasha with Kikyou and being a full demon, and Sango obsessed with Kohaku... the two of them do leave a lot of carnage in their wake.)

Miroku (and Shippou, but he is just a kid) too, he had the ulterior motive to keep the secret but then, his ulterior motive also forced him to stay with Inuyasha and Sango for 8 months watching the woman he loved with someone else.  Maybe now that the wind tunnel is gone, he will mature and not grab so many butts in front of the next woman he loves, because that gets old real fast. Maybe having an eight month taste of his own medicine will have him reconsidering his ways.

I think Kagome will forgive them in the end, because she is not the hating kind, but it doesn't mean she has to forget what they did.  I think she will wish them a happy life and then distance herself once the Kikyou thing is taken care of (I don't feel sorry for Kikyou, she is another selfish character, plus she devours souls, taking away their chance for reincarnation so she can continue with her made-of-fail plans to take down Naraku.)

Whatever direction this story takes, I am eagerly anticipating the final installment!  Thanks for sharing!


Wood (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Jun 2010

Ooo. Oh so good. Sweet Heavens that was a great unveiling of Kagome and Sesshoumaru being mates. I was cackeling (spell?). I can not wait to see what else comes to bite Inuyasha in the back next. Hehehehe. I also enjoy a the strong Kagome and Sesshoumaru is well written. Congrats on another great chapter.


Mimiru (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

OH! This was awsome, and well worth the wait for! Kanna, your an awsome story spinner that's for sure!

The reaction to Kagome's reappearence was more then I pictured! And poor Miroku =( I hope he finds his happiness in the end he well deserves it!


knifethrower (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

This is just soooo good, Amber!  I was afraid this was the last chapter.  So glad there is more to come, can't wait!


Fubuki (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

Ahhhh, thankyou for the new chapter twas thoroughly enjoyable, neatly tying up loose ends.

can't wait for Kikyo's temper tantrum that is about due!

Will Shippo decide to stay with Kagome? or move on with Miroku?

And when will Sesshomaru tel Kagome about her ability to birth full bloods? or will he let her find out for herself??


TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

Ok Amber, I know you are going to fuss at me about leaving a review and not being logged in, but I'm not at home....Sorry!! LOL! Why does Sango and Inuyasha believe that they are above reproach in any way for what they did? Did they really think she would just "get over it" and come back like a good little girl? How stupid of them! I hope they learn what it's like to be lonely for a long time! At least she knows where she stands with Sess, and him always being turned on is a bonus...heehee!


snowbird (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

I'm really enjoying this little mini-story.  Inuyasha and Sango should have been honest and up front to Kagome about their feelings for each other.  Even with her not leaving the pack, she still would have ended up with Sesshoumaru because he was determined to make her his anyway.  I'm glad Miroku and Shippo joined his pack.  I have a feeling that in the future beyond the telling of the story, Miroku will ask the wrong demoness to bear his child and she'll have him on his back and mated before he knows what hit him.  That would really be funny.


laenfante (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010

<showers adoration on Amber> May we have some more, please? Pretty please? With chocolate and sprinkles on it?


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