Excellent story, great writing, quite a cliffhanger. I'm sure Kagome will learn some things from Totosai when the new armor is made that will shake her world. Please update soon and kepp up the great work!!!.
mary (Chapter 11) - Wed 31 Mar 2010
i thoroughly enjoyed it.
mary (Chapter 10) - Tue 09 Mar 2010
*awed*
Yay! I love this story! Great job once again!
So when will Sesshou tell Kagome the whole truth about Inuyasha's death? And how will she react to this information? How will she feel about Sesshou once everything is out in the open? I look forward to see how close Kagome and Sesshou could become on this quest to save youkai. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Sun 07 Feb 2010
Nice update! It must be so hard for Kagome not only to realize that Inuyasha is dead, but that she only missed seeing him by a couple of days. I have a question though, would the well only let her through because he was dead? Or was this just another trick of fate? Please post again soon! I can't wait for more!
Am I the only one who thinks that Sesshoumaru really is a bastard? The only thing he cares about is himself! Using Kagome like this! Outrageous!!!
It's like as if he still didn't learn anything! Even after listening to the heartwreching story Inutaisho told him! (Which btw made me totally cry like a lil babe!) He needs some Kagome lecture quickly! Cuz if she won't be able to change him, no one would!
^_^
Wow, I'm having great difficulting imagining a way of Kagome finding out that doesn't end in a very purified, very dead Sesshoumaru. And all us fangirls know, a dead Sesshoumaru is a significantly less attractive Sesshoumaru. Unless their is any necros out there. In which case, no offense meant. Anywho, I digress. I'm really enjoying this story, though I don't think Sesshoumaru really realizes that it's probably a strike against him in the long run to use Kagome for his own ends, not to mention decieving her, which as previously mentioned, is just overall bad for his future health. It's like walking around with a time bomb, not really knowing what the ticking sound and the countdown mean. Looking forward to the next installment!!
Tara-Yomitorika
Dani (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Feb 2010
I like it, a lot. Great work!
What a shock Sess will be in when he realizes that he cannot manipulate her without consequence? That will definitely be an interesting tale.
mary (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Feb 2010
yup enjoyed it.
i think oshiikame would not just surrender her shell. and how will they survive now if seshomaru is turning into a human? kagome is still untrained. and how long is the whole journey gonna be anyway? so many questions. hopefully it'll be answered quickly.
You are a wonderful story teller. I am completely engrossed in your story...but it is so sad. Feels like everyone is dying off. Kagome will be so sad. I wonder how she'll react when she finds out what happened to Inuyasha. ><
O_O-! Gah this is going to suck, for both sides. I'm eager to see what happens. Is he goinbg to tell her...or ..
Oh noes!! A cliffhanger!! I love that Inupapa is still causing havoc from the grave, and what's Sess going to say? Can't wait for then next chapter!
sess is in a world of trouble. But, i guess now will be the beginning of learning life's lessons that he has looked over for so long.
autumngold (Chapter 8) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
Oh no, what will Sesshoumaru do? Will he be honest and tell Kagome that he killed Inuyasha? She will probably try to kill Sesshoumaru if he tells the truth, who could blame her? She's waited three years for him, only to find that he was killed a couple of days before she came back, by his own brother. Life is cruel! But, what will it do to Sesshoumaru if he starts to lie? How will he respect himself after that? Can't wait to read more! Please post again soon!
mary (Chapter 8) - Wed 13 Jan 2010
ohhh man, you're reaaaally drawing this one out aren't you? i wonder how things will turn out now. will she forgive him? and how will you get them together?
mary (Chapter 7) - Mon 11 Jan 2010
now i feel bereft at waiting for another chapter. what is it that seshomaru must do in order to live? bah! stupid waiting! will it ever go faster?
more words please more more more... BWAHAHAHA!
Tisha (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 Jan 2010
You i've always ment to get back to this one finally did. well written, well done. It had reminded me of the seven fuedal tales. I cannot wait to see what you do withth is epic tale that you have started.
YAY! >D
Well there is a load of suck for Sessh if things don't go right. Gah and what will happen to shippou? Poor kagome to get back only to find out her friend is dead. ;_;
Either way I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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