you're a wonderfully witty writer . in fact, i could practically hear someone read those words to me. each chapter captured and retained, increased my interest and curiosity. i have only encountered three other writers in fandom that did that. you're one of them. this story is especially memorable because of the way you portrayed the characters. it was very thoughtful. it was a perfect mix of all the elements that says well thought out work of fiction.
expecting to read more, hopefully in the not so distant future.
autumngold (Chapter 5) - Thu 03 Dec 2009
I have never been a fan of Inuyasha, but I really wish that Sesshoumaru's father would have given him this talk years ago. Even though I don't know what he is going to say, I have the feeling that it might have saved Inuyasha's life. Of course, it didn't really seem that Inuyasha wanted to live. . . Hope you update soon. Will Kagome be in this story?
:O! So aparently the lack of life in the area and Inu not being able to be ressurected has something to do with the whole 'no life forever in the place they fought' ne? Can't wait for the next chapter. Am I right :P
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Nov 2009
How very, very sad. I wonder why Sesshoumaru was so concerned about keeping his promise to his father when in his own way he loved Inuyasha? Even though he saw him as a stain on his family tree, he was family. Great update. I just wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do next? Please update soon!
Oh you have to continue! I demand it of you pretty please! I am on edge!
You have me on the edge of my seat yet again. Wonderfully written and I cannot wait for another update from you. Now lets just see how well Inuyasha learned to take care of himself..or if a certain little miko will decide to intervene per usual. :P
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Thu 12 Nov 2009
Will Sesshoumaru really be able to kill Inuyasha? Where is Kagome? Thank you for another update to your interesting story. Can't wait to see how the fight between the brother's plays out.
taixi (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
nice job so far.
ah, I'm always so conflicted when I read SessKag stories detailing InuTaisho's treatment (abondonment/neglect) of Sessmom in favor of Izayoi. I always feel so sympathetic for Sessmom (and here it was hearbreaking to hear of her treatment by InuTaisho) that it feels right to have Sess simply exterminate Izayoi and Inuyasha (even thought it's not even their faults, it's really InuTaisho and a culture that systemically pits women against each other). So on the one hand I am rooting for Sess to get his (and his mother's) revenge and certainly not to love any humans in the future. On the other hand I love SessKag so I know he's going to come around eventually. Ah the angst!
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
I don't blame Sesshoumaru for being bitter. His father was such a jerk to his mother. It must have been horrible to always feel second best to a human. I just wish Sesshoumaru's mother could have taken him when she left. As it was, she was left with nothing. That's sad. Thank you for the update. Hope you post again soon!
I'm completely hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
Wows! I really love it so far, I can't wait for the next chapter
Beautifu start.
Ooooohhh, what a WONDERFUL start!! I am so VERY HAPPY that you are continuing to write... the world of fan fiction, as well as Sess/Kag, would have lost a TERRIFIC talent if you had truly decided to quit. This promises to be another CLASSIC Sianna blockbuster!!! I can hardly wait to see what's coming next! :D ~~Wiccan~~
Ah Sianna,
You're work has pulled me in once more. I can't wait to see what happens next. Seems quite original so far. :) I wonder what you have in store for our favorite characters.
jgem (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
This looks like its going to be another interesting story of yours to follow. The intro has me hooked. Can't wait to see the plot develope.
Ameire (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
Nice intro. *giggles* I feel like I'm sitting down for story time, it really does sound like the beginning to a legend or fairytale.
Ameire (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
Nice intro. *giggles* I feel like I'm sitting down for story time, it really does sound like the beginning to a legend or fairytale.
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
Very interesting beginning to your story! I like your explanation of how youkai came to be. Is DaiGin Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's father? Please post another chapter soon. I can't wait to read more!
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