Reviews for That Night by susie

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LibraCourt (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Apr 2020

Oh snap. Things just got a whole lot more interestin. Can't wait to read what happens next. 


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Apr 2020

And pleaseeeee, don't make Inuyasha too miserable. T.T Seeing him being tortured in any way is hard for me. 


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Apr 2020

Gosh this chappie was broke my heart so badly. When I read first chapter, I didn't care about Inuyasha because he is the one who betrayed his partner first. But as the story progresses, I started to feel sympathy for him. He deserved the betrayal simillar as he did, but yet, he is too pitiful to lose his own wife. Finally his brother will have everything include his wife and he will waste in his humble hut. It's would be nice if he got remarried with Kikyo so everyone can be happy. Even little Kiyoshi will understand his stepfather someday. And sorry for Inuyasha T.T I sincerely was enjoyed romantic moment that happened between his wife and brother. Whenever I see them, I feel strong feeling of guilt, but sadly I love them much more than InuKag X_X It's a addictive ship and susie, you're a surprisingly talented writer! How can I don't like SessKag?!


Purple Rain (Chapter 10) - Fri 17 Apr 2020

Wow epic chapter. Well I can't speak for everyone on here but I have said it before, possibly on a different site, but I'll say it again. I love this story and despite my reviews spewing hate on one or all characters. It's not a poor reflection on your writing but actually shows the skill of your literary prowess to evoke such strong reactions in your readers. Again, personally, I only speak for myself when I say that my comments are not meant to influence the story in anyway. I'm simply reacting to what I read and how it makes me feel. Now with that said... on to the review...Ok and response to some of the other comments...

I in no way condone cheating of any kind nor do I see any of the trio as totally innocent in this. It's a hard situation and yes I stand by my comment with regards to Kagome. Young though she may be, she is not stupid. Yes, her reaction to Inuyasha's infidelity may have been reasonable but she chose to have sex with Sesshomaru as payback to Inuyasha. He tried to give her several outs but she refused. If you're going to cheat for that reason it might as well be with 1. Someone you are attracted to. 2. Someone who you are comfortable with and 3. Someone who it will cause the most damage when it comes to light. Of course you won't think of the consequences when you are doing it.

She is from the future and that's why I blame her/ have harsh feelings towards her. She knows about one night stands and flings. She knew how to seduce Sesshomaru and she knew who her husband was. Yes, it was her choice to stay with him even before all the other nonsense he hid from her came out. Ok so u want to stay and you try hard to repair your marriage, then do that. It's the mixed signals that I object to. Yes, he is hot and persistent but she needed to stand her ground and keep him involved in her son's life. True, it's flattering to have the attention of someone like him but she could have tried 2 help him move on too. It's the mixed signals that kept the flames going. He's a dog demon, of course he wants what he can't have. Essentially she turned him into her in the Inuyasha- kikiyo triangle and she should know better. They ALL should. He is giving up everything for her and she is just willing to let him. She says one thing but seems to be doing another. If she pretended he was mukotsu the poison master I'm sure he could feel her belly and be platonic. But no, be has to give up full blooded heirs, his pride "ruler of the West has to share his brother's wife like some desperate loser while she gets to gloat that she has him under her ass rather an let him go to find happiness elsewhere." It's not modern times yet and she expects people to think like her. I get wanting to make a change but she CHOSE Inuyasha so that's the bed she needs to lay in. Inuyasha chose to lye, cheat and manipulate. She CHOSE to make her point to the people by making out with him in public. She CHOSE to to not encourage Sesshomaru to have a new relationship while reassuring that he can still have access to his child. Its his first kid so of course he will cater to her to make sure his kid is taken care of, that's only fair, but the extent could have easily been limited. So yes her child growing up fast is a wake up call. You are not forever. They are not forever. Your choices matter and have impact that you can't predict so use your head at least some of the time. It's ok not to want to be with your child's father but how she set it up made the bio dad feel desperate to have any access to the baby, yes he loves her but her initial words made it logical for him to try and get her to be with him at least so he can be a part of his child's life. That's my point.

Thank you for sharing this story with us and I look forward to reading more soon. Please keep up the good work.

~PR~


Nile (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

I've been enjoying this, and can't wait for more.

I think it's fair of Sesshoumaru to add his stipulations. InuYasha should've just said yes to letting him mark. He's already crossed the line by even allowing this, and frankly, with the prospect of Kagome being able to raise her kids and live longer, it seems more of a win. Both InuYasha and Sesshoumaru get Kagome. I think Kagome needs to step up and say "wait a minute." We're past the ashamed phase and I think she deserves to say her part.

And honestly, why the hell didn't InuYasha mate her? Is she not good enough? Or what?

 


Chidi (Chapter 2) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

This story is quite interesting to me because each character has some fault. First Inuyasha was the catalyst by kissing Kikyo when he was married to Kagome. Interestingly he says in the second chapter that he hasn't slept with Kikyo since they got married but I wonder about the premarriage time. I'm sure Inuyasha courted Kagome before marrying her so his language makes me think he was cheating on her even back then. Then Sesshomaru and Kagome willingly sleeping with each other adds fault to both of them. But then Inuyasha also kept the fact that hanyous are infertile from Kagome despite knowing that she wanted kids. If you think about it, that's incredibly selfish bc after some time she would probably blame herself for thinking she was barren. When would Inuyasha have finally told her?

I don't even know what to make of their current situation with the kid. Why didn't Inuyasha mark Kagome earlier if he's now going to be concerned about Sesshomaru marking her? Sesshomaru, while still having some selfish desires, is not as selfish as he was at the beginning. Kagome is honestly an enigma to me right now and I feel she needs to do some real soul searching to figure out what she wants and why she wants what she wants. 

also where is Kikyo now in all of this?

looking forward to more from this story! 


Mecca (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

Oooh, the plot thickens! I am so curious to see what Sess has up his sleeve to finally secure Kagome. It makes sense; Kagome is only really tied to Inuyasha by a sense of obligation and some love, but Sesshomaru is the one for her, let's be real. The prospect of having a long life span and living to see her pups grow up and have pups of their own - that would just be too much to turn down in the end, I just know it. You're too good to us Susie! Love your creative mind! 


Koree (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

I sat here & wrote the longest review ever because I was ranting lmao only for it not to post & now I lost the whole thing :/ . So to some it up I feel like Kagome needs to accept a bigger fault in this , the whole situation is terrible on its own but what's done is done but I really feel for Sesshomaru . They are basically living his life infront of him while throwing him a bone of being a second father to Sano . I understand Kagome is trying to make it up to Inuyasha but she needs to stop being so complacent to everything , I think it's selfish of Inuyasha to reject the mating he opened that door when he accepted their current arangemnt . He's only turning it down because of his jealousy but it's not just for Sesshomaru's benefit but for Sano , future kids , Kagome & HIMSELF . We all know Sesshomaru doesn't agree but he was going to come around & say yes because he cares so strongly for Kagome & even if it's for a night he'll take that little piece of her because he barely gets anything ( besides Sano ) our of this whole thing . Idk this story has me in my feelssssssss lol Amazinggggg


D (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

I love this  story. I love the fact that kagome didnt jump ship so quick. I love her conflict of loving to men. Her basically high school sweetheart and now i am woman love. Its interesting the way you write. This one be 100% okay witj if they you know had 3 person imitate relationship as they all married to each for Kagome. I 100% agree with Ladyhikikomori. Keep writing it the way you have been


SmilingFool (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

Wow, that was an amazing chapter.... I loved it.  Stupid Inu Yasha always being selfish.  lol... Anyways, I loved it.  Thank you for updating.


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

But i want kagome with sesshomaru...... Can't wait for the next


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

I'm dizzy. Inuyasha didn't wsnt to cooperate. Kagome have husband and mate with the different person.


Eliza (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Apr 2020

I agree with what Ladyhikikomori said, all of it.

Your story is amazing and I can't wait to read more.


ladyhikikomori (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

I'm actually surprised how much your portrayel of Kagome is frustrating other readers. I have read stories in which I disliked the characterization of Kagome but this is not one of those. Everyone has their own opinion and while I can't discount others who do take issue with your stories' Kagome I must say that I and I imagine other readers actually really love your story and ahope that you aren't discouraged with the reviews you are getting. 

 

I totally understand where some of the frustration with what Kagome has done comes from but I think other readers are giving Sesshomaru way too much of a pass. Sesshomaru was a willing participant in the affair when he was fully aware of Kagome's steadfastness with Inuyasha. He is not so much a victim as just an adult having to deal with the consequences of their actions, just like the rest of the characters and adults don't always handle things with perfect grace. Every character has likeable qualities and flaws, Sesshomaru is not exempt from that just because he is a sympathetic character here. These are all hallmarks of excellent writing. 

 

I'm loving the unfolding of what seems to be a relationship that will integrate all parties into a more tolerant and co-operative dynamic. Please continue the story as you see fit and don't let writing that is so good it provokes strong emotions in the readers from discouraging you or causing you to doubt what you are crafting. I eagerly anticipate your next chapter!


Klee (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

I am having a hard time liking Kagome in this story. Sesshomaru is giving up to much. Inuyasha is very selfish. And what nerve of Kagome to ask if Sess would be seeing other woman when she has a whole husband! 


Toni (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

inuyasha is one selfish man  

I think kagome needs to be more assertive and let him know just how she feels about not being able to be there for them as they grow

it should be her decision not his  


Jess (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

Ahhhh!!!!!! This is one of my favorite stories on Dokuga, ever. Please keep it going! Thank you!


Ovela (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

Thank you for another wonderful chapter. I really like Sesshomaru's perseverance here. I hope it pays off!


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

I never thought that sesshomaru will reject it. But its good...he's not only want kagome's body


Purple Rain (Chapter 9) - Sun 05 Apr 2020

Very nice chapter. I get that it's been only six months and I don't wanna sound like I'm an uncaring, heartless person, but I'm glad Kagome is suffering because she's selfish and she deserves it.  Again, I know the heart wants what it wants but I still don't see the appeal in her at all. Granted her sex game is good but aside from that I'm pretty sure he can find a good bed mate elsewhere, someone to talk to, someone to start over with. I think he should start that healing process to move on. Hell even Songo now finally understand why she slept with him. And feudal era or not Songo's initial reaction to Kagame's infidelity is somewhat confusing. She should understandable more than most what Inuyasha put her through with Kikyou, even after they were married. Feudal society where men were allowed to do such things openly like have concubines may have played a small role in her mindset but she knows Kagome is from the future and knows the struggle they had to be together.

 

I'm not condemning Inuyasha now because he is trying and is trying to make his wife happy but they chose each other. They both agreed to stick with each other so they need to focus on the adoption or another demon. I still really want Sesshomaru to find someone else, even if it's an original creation. When she had him begging her to leave her husband she was adamant that she wanted to stick with him, so it's unfair for her to now make her husband feel like he is inadequate as a husband because he can't have kids. She knew that when she agreed to stay with him. Unconsciously, or not making him feel like crap that he can't give her kids is a really messed up thing to do.  She loves Shippo unconditionally and I know it's different from having your own kids but she had time to think about all of this. Now that her son is growing quickly that's her punishment for her selfishness. Everyone in this is going to end up hurt especially The baby Keyoshi.

 

i'm so sorry, but I'm trying to see past my dislike for Kagame but I just don't see a reason yet. She is so happy and feel so proud that the other demoness' are jealous that she got to have a baby with Sesshomaru. Yet she wants to feel a bit of jealousy when they want to do the same as her because she knows they'll generate full blooded offsprings. She's reading like one of those ratchet baby mothers that you hear about who on some level yes they love their kids but more likely focus on their own needs and wants. 

 

I know this is SK but I'm really waiting to see her do or say something redeeming of her character. All she's willing to do is let others sacrifice for her happiness and bend over backwards for her. I see that kind of sick satisfaction she gets that Sesshomaru still has a thing for her and i'm pretty sure she fantasizes about banging him while she's with her husband but I don't see the redeeming inequalities in her at all. I'd like to see where this goes but regardless I will continue to read because it's a fascinating story and it rattles me up something fierce. ;).

 

 I look forward to reading more soon and as always please keep up the good work. 

 

~PR~


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