Reviews for That Night by susie

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Koree (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 May 2020

D: this is the second story ( that's my fav ) that has ended this week !! I'm saddddddd but I throughly enjoyed reading your story it was amazing & took me on a emotional rollercoaster lol 


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 14) - Mon 04 May 2020

LOVED IT!!!~well worth reading.

c'ya'


SHORTFRY (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 May 2020

Oo, totally know what you mean by researching feudal era items! Sometimes it just takes too much time to research, it's fiction anyway! Great job on this! I'm loving the tender caring side to Sesshomaru in this fic, and all the smutty goodness.  Gonna binge the next chapters :)


Annie (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

Awesome!!!!!  What a wonderful ending.   Kagome and Sesshomaru are happy and so are Inuyasha and his mate.


CCR666 (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

This was great! Thank you for a really good ending. I like Only Human A LOT also, so I'm psyched that you'll be adding to it! My account is very new, but I've been "lurking" for quite awhile. I really enjoy your writing. Thank you again! ????


Mecca (Chapter 14) - Sat 02 May 2020

Who loves YOU?? We do!! Oh thank you so much for giving us such an awesome ending! It feels complete and so satisfying! I truly did not expect Inuyasha to have gone to the future, what a fuckin twist! Thank goodness for awesome writing and great and happy endings. You could always do one shots based off this universe, like from future Kags and Sesshou's POV or something. Also, thank you so much for adding that last bit! I was wondering how it actually happened. It would make sense that Sesshou had to be pushed past that sense of honor of his or strongly coerced somehow. Another gem of a story! Thank you for this <3


Purple Rain (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Standing ovation for this masterful fiction. Job well done and I love that it fels complete in a way that is totally organic. Thank you again or sharing this story with us. I look forward to reading more of your works soon. Please keep up the excellent work. 

~PR~

4got to sign it ????

I'm also glad there was closure all around and that it wasn't a poly fic. Kudos


Purple Rain (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Standing ovation for this masterful fiction. Job well done and I love that it fels complete in a way that is totally organic. Thank you again or sharing this story with us. I look forward to reading more of your works soon. Please keep up the excellent work. 


Niomi (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Who loves you? US! Thank you for a fantastic wrap to their journey. I'm glad got closure. It was sweet, peaceful. I guess that's sometimes how life works. I'm soooooo looking forward to Only Human updates and all the other goodies you have up your sleeves!!!! Wooohoo. You're amazing. 
P.S. I so thought the last scene was going to be the "study" scene that Inu warned Kiyoshi to avoid. Haha. That he was going to walk in on them! But nevertheless, it was great! 


Young Kagome (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Wow I loved this! What a perfect ending!! Sesshomaru and Kagome we're getting bizayyyy lol goals fr. Excellent job! I look forward to reading more of your work.


aGirlCalledPablo (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 May 2020

Love how you wrapped this up. I'm glad you didn't go poly on this either. I don't think it would've been fair for anyone. Can't wai to read more of your work!


Purple Rain (Chapter 13) - Thu 30 Apr 2020

Wow wonderful chapter. Thank you for letting us know little Hirohito and the glimpses into his relationship with Kiyoshi as well as the "uncle Inuyasha ". It was a great read with the right amount of humor. I especially like the part with seeing his mate and aspects of her personality in his son. The character development are great and the situations flow nicely in this chapter. I love that as mates they can balance each other's personalities when It comes to their parenting style. That they have the respect for eachother not to discount or ignore the other's reasoning or methodology. 

On a different note, I wonder if his time with Rin taught him anything regarding children or if it's pure instinct. I may have to reread this from the beginning but I can't recall what happened to Rin. She would love to meet his kids and play with them. Has Sesshomaru's mother been made aware that he mated a miko and if so, has she met her grandkids? So many questions I know but this is so exciting I just get carried away thinking about these things after I have read the chapter. Thank you for updating and as always keep up the excellent work. I look forward to reading more soon.  

~PR~


Nilee1 (Chapter 13) - Wed 29 Apr 2020

Where is Inuyasha?


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 13) - Wed 29 Apr 2020

Ah, new chappie makes my heart ache again..Teenager Kiyoshi reminded me of his father that appeared in Swords of Honorable Ruler. Cold, strong, wounds in mind from his daddy's absence. Perhaps it's much more painful than I think that his daddy suddenly disappears is even though he still has his biological father. I adore and respect my uncle like my daddy, so I totally was confused when he's gone. He wasn't a talkative person nor friendly one, but he always gave me and his guests warm receptions in his way whenever I visited him. I found him suffering from a chronic disease after his death. It still hurts. I don't think Kiyoshi understands problems between his daddy and his father yet, but he grew up enough to understand the difference of "Daddy" and "Uncle" anyways. Inuyasha has to stay by Kiyoshi's side at least until he reveals covered facts by himself. Obviously Inuyasha wasn't best husband nor daddy. However I'm sure Kagome and Kiyoshi love him so much even he left them like now. Hope you didn't kill Inuyasha. ;[


++ I'm sorry to say this, but I feel bad everytime I see new kid's name, Hirohito. It's a name of an ardent leader in World War II, one of the most terrible wars in human history, and killed many of his own people and foreigners..T_T Could you change his name? I don't want remind myself of a war criminal when I read one of my favorite fic......It makes me terribly dizzy. Please consider about this.


Young Kagome (Chapter 13) - Wed 29 Apr 2020

Getting more insight to how Kiyoshi felt about Inuyashas disappearanc was nice. Kagome not allowing that toxic discipline happen is excellent! I'm so happy you're updating quickly. Please update soon. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 13) - Wed 29 Apr 2020

Getting more insight to how Kiyoshi felt about Inuyashas disappearanc was nice. Kagome not allowing that toxic discipline happen is excellent! I'm so happy you're updating quickly. Please update soon. 


Purple Rain (Chapter 12) - Mon 27 Apr 2020

Bravo, I really enjoyed this chapter. The closure with Kikyo was well written and it was nice for them to have a non violent confrontation. It made total sense for both  women to finally get thing off their chest and acknowledge their mutual respect as well as an understanding of the other's point of view regarding Inuyasha. The final realization that they both have so much in common that their lives are parallel. 

Such a time jump while I can see serves the plot to move the story forward, I would have liked to learn more about the second son and how his father's constant absence has affected the dynamic between the siblings and Kagome. Will we get to see this in later chapters? For instance, has Kyushu spoken of his papa to this younger brother whose never met him? Dispite not being the bio-dad, Inuyasha was a big part of Kyoshi's life, there is no doubt that he was loved by the child, so how is he managing with all these changes so quickly? Will we get to see the parents address these concerns w9the pups? 

Sesshomaru ordering his unborn pup to be a girl scene was too precious. I'm glad he acknowledged his feelings about his brother and wants to find him for his own peace of mind and not just solely because he promised his mate. I'm also happy to read that Kagome gook Kikyo's advice to not neglect  Sesshomaru. 

Overall, I have to say kudos again on a work well done and I look forward to reading more soon. Please keep up the excellent work. 

 

~PR~


Young Kagome (Chapter 12) - Sun 26 Apr 2020

This is sooo good! I always wanted to read a story of them fighting over her. This is perfect. What happened to him!! I think he wanted to give her her wish of a family and took himself out of the picture. Anyways please update soon! 


aGirlCalledPablo (Chapter 12) - Sun 26 Apr 2020

I really liked this interaction between Kikyo and Kagome, with their mirroring love lives. I think you struck the right balance in trust and vulnerability between the two. Kiky?'s advice to Kags about not taking Sesshomaru for granted made me even like her a bit. Can't wait to see how you wrap things up!


LibraCourt (Chapter 12) - Sat 25 Apr 2020

Loving it. Readlly wonder where Inuyasha went. 


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