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First Person Critiques? 14 Years, 3 Months ago Karma: 10
I rarely write in first person but wanted to give it a go with Sesshomaru as my target for my latest fiction. (Phases of the Moon)

I'd love to hear some feedback, the many things I did wrong, maybe if I did a couple things right. Thanks.
 
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