I have started to write something and I want someone to read it for me and maybe give me some pointers on my writing. I don't want to go too far into it and find out the story makes no sense.

Please PM me or post here and I will copy/paste what I've written in a PM for you to read.

I will not be sending this to everyone so if you can, please tell me why I should send it to you. (I.E: You are an experienced writer or are a good critic, etc...)

I don't want to be told about typos or words that were autocorrected to something else, I will correct those like I usually do after.

Last thing, I apologize if I posted this in the wrong place, I tried to go with what made the most sense.

I forgot to mention the story is going to be rated MA because of strong content later. Possibly lemons as well.

Also, if anyone wants to read this, what I expect is to know if it makes sense, if the development is going well and not too rushed or too slow, although it is quite early to tell. I never really stick to the original character very much so OOC is to be expected, but in this one, I'm trying to keep true to Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's personalities.