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Re:A little feedback 1 Month, 3 Weeks ago Karma: 6
Hi!

I've got some spare time, so wouldn't mind giving it a read along with some feedback. If it's short enough, just send it in a PM, or ask in one for my email adress.
 
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A little feedback 1 Month, 3 Weeks ago Karma: 112
Hey,

I just finished writing out the first little bit of fiction I’ve written since elementary school (I won’t say how long ago that was) and I’m looking for someone to give me some feedback on it. It’s a little drabble thing, so it won’t take long to read. I’m fairly confident of my grammar and punctuation, but I’ve left a fair bit implied in the story and need to know if it’s too much.

Thanks!
Nicole
 
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