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Buttercream (Chapter 7) - Wed 14 Dec 2016

Yay an update. Now we all know who the mysterious man who helped Kagome and brought her to Inuyasha's apartment.   I see why Rin dislikes  Kagome because she had listened to the snobbish girls just to fit in with those losers.  I still cannot stand Sesshomaru. I hope he gets whats coming to him.  It is entirely his fault that Kagome is in this situation. Love your story. Please continue the updates. 


NellyWhirl (Chapter 7) - Wed 14 Dec 2016

I love stories like this. I suppose it's due to the fact that people sometimes take folks for granted. I really hope that she won't forgive them. But it is your story. I look forward to the next chapter.


Susy V (Chapter 7) - Wed 14 Dec 2016

Thanks for the update! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to light a fire under Sessh's butt!


Adrianna (Chapter 6) - Fri 09 Dec 2016

you need to finish this! 


Koree (Chapter 6) - Wed 09 Nov 2016

Never would have though Kikyo would be the sweetheart & Sango the bitch ! Omgggggg i hope Sessh did not actually pick up the phone when she called & just dropped her off at Inu's :( i really hope he didn't but if it wasn't him then who was it ? * dramatic music * Great chap :)


Halcali (Chapter 6) - Sat 05 Nov 2016

Thank you for the update! I'm glad Kagome found an ally in Kikyo, and it's good to know that Inuyasha and Kikyo will be there to support her. As for the mysterious helper, I think it's someone they knew personally, but for some reason, this person doesnt want to be found out. I doubt Kagome could provide directions to the mysterious person given she was beat up badly and pretty sure in a state of shock too.

Sesshoumaru probably doesnt trust Kagome anymore after she lost their child, but I'm guessing Rin egged him on further by saying Kagome killed the baby. Her own biological mom hated her, so in her own twisted reasoning (which Sesshoumaru bought), Kagome probably hated the baby too. Rin is dangerous. Any future reconciliations (if and only if) will never be successful with her in the picture.


KeikoTakataxx12 (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Nov 2016

Omg, I need more. update soon!!


Katrina (Chapter 6) - Tue 01 Nov 2016

Yay, am so glad that Kikyo is not a bad person. I know that both Inuyasha and Kikyou will both help Kagome and give her support. I'm still wondering of who this person could have saved Kagome? I wonder if this person by chance killed the attackers? Would be nice if they were killed. I don't know who is mystery person is, but I hope it is Naraku. If it is, Sesshomau going to have a serious competition.

Would be cool if Naraku was a vampire instead of a half spider demon for a change, but it your fanfic and you can do whatever you want. Keep up the good work and take all the time you need. I can't wait to see what going on with Sesshomaru, Sango, and Rin in later chapters.


J (Chapter 6) - Sun 30 Oct 2016

this story struck me too deep and is absolutely crushing and upsetting and a whole plethora of emotions i cannot even process, it's where it's so bad it's traumatizing it's hell it's all the negative emotions crashing down on you.

First of all rape and infidelity are things that have several layers to them. you don't heal overnight and even after several years even after 10 years it stays with you to be honest i'm of an opinion that these scars these nightmares these betryals and manipulations and sexual abuse never leave you. you can be insane it can drive even the strongest (kagome who is emotionally strong) person insane. And though i realize this is fanfic still what happened is too realistic for me to just pass it up as fanfic any longer. realistically speaking kagome instead of recovering quickly will suffer severe depression for years and years with relapsing cylces bordering on suicide or suicidal thoughts if she does not meet the right people she can go insane and never recover who she really is the road to redemption (kagome building herself) will not be a cherry pie.

I root for sesskag but in this fic i really don't wish for that in the interest of kagome's own health sufferring too many personal betrayals and a physical and emotional violation she should have a better crowd. i hope she gets a new life (i agree with a lot of whom have expressed the same opinion) away from all these people connected to her old life true she needs to grow as well but she has been wronged there's no two ways about that. the people she's with are dicks period. you got me bad! i must say emotionally i was pulled and sucked into it. excellent writing , i must say the plot is a bit too much but yeah this is reality more than a fanfic at this point.

Also, your summary sounds innocent compared to the actual gravity of the content, i think a bit more heads up on how grave it could be would be better, a warning of rape and infidelity would be good as i tend not read stories like that because i find that hard to deal with the excess emotions caused by it, i get emotionally invested in what i read and im sure a lot of readers too. well to be honest it's the timing and combination of both and parties involved that really sank it's fangs into us. (true real life is bad even worse) so we can have ample warning should we decide to read and a clear choice if we want to opt out. (you don't have to read this point it will be a lil bit annoying and getting off topic)****the reason why im in dokuga is mostly to read successful love stories and faithful happily ever afters and a devoted husband to escape harsh reality of supporting yourself, finding a real love, and having a successful marriage and life that is fullfiling maybe im greedy. so i tend to like more fluffy and innocent ones and even deeply loving ones because i can connect and feel with something that's not happening in my life and is but a dream i wish to experience, ma can be disturbing at times to be truthful so a bit more heads up would be appreciated in a very emotionally rattling story like this. (sorry i rambled on and a on and took a loop before getting to the point)

but other than that good job done, i liked the story a fresh new sess we hate and not love at all , rin and sango are villains and inu and kik are friends to kags and decent human beings. way to dash the characters we associated them with in our heads though done absolutely harshly but i guess u felt u had to do it that way to erase all thoughts that sess is a good guy in this story. looking forward to your update and next time i'll be emtionally prepared before i delve knee deep into your story the emo blacklash is harsh bruh. 

thanks for writing appreciate all the effort and time that goes into story making as im just a consumer.

keep em coming and best of luck w the fic

despite all my intial reservations i fell in love with this 

and heads up to someone who commented No way back home loool that was too funny !!! 


SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Sun 30 Oct 2016

Hi I believe you have the stories mixed up


Buttercream (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Hooray an update.  Now we know why Sesshomaru was being mean to her because she lost their baby.  That is still no reason to treat someone who lost a child. I can't wait for the next update. Who helped Kagome in that alley?  Will she go on with her life?  Please update soon.


NellyWhirl (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

This story is one of my favorite. The plot is what draws me in. I look forward to the future chapters


Violla (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Finalmente ai aggiornato ,un capitolo bellissimo mi piace tanto , spero  Kagome diventa  più forte e  puo prendere  a calci in culo  a Sango,Rin  e Sessomaru e ti prego aggiorna più spesso . 


xDori (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Uwahhhh! Yay Kikyo is going to be an ally in all this? Maybe? She has no hidden agenda right? Right?  Lol. I hope she will help Kagome along. Thanks for the update!  Love the chapter. 


REDWOLF (Chapter 6) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Sesshoumaru is hateful! I hope she refuses him and Sango! Sango is an awful friend. Maybe, this could be a chance for Kagome's freedom!! I was so happy you updated :) 


rini (Chapter 5) - Mon 19 Sep 2016

Wew... I feel like pulling my hair & then Sesshoumaru's hair from its roots, kick him in the balls & shove his head where the sun doesn't shine. 

Besides that I am curious how you will put things back to their right places in the story, especially how you will pull Kagome together & develop her character as a woman healing & growing while keeping her character true. I just hope Sesshoumaru & Sango won't be let off easily, & that Rin learns the lesson. Though I found it little strange that a little girl who has experienced so much trauma in her life & had been suicidal at some point would take things for granted now. And i hope you won't add too much drama & shock value since at times they tend to spoil good stories.I don't mean to offend you in anyway by writing such things.

 Anyway how many chapters have you thought for this fic?  

Well all the best with writing & other things. Waiting for the next update. Have a good day.

 

Koree (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Sep 2016

I am crying ! Legit tears :(


REDWOLF (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Sep 2016

Is Rin that hateful or what?? Ohhh, does she really hate her mother this bad? I wonder what will change Rin to ever see the plight of her mother? Really enjoying the story. Great work :)


Linda (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Aug 2016

Seriously, I hate Sesshomaru, Rin and Sango in this story.  Sesshomaru has to wake up and get a reality check.  He always boast himself as being honorable.  HA!  In this story, he is nothing but a selfish, cheating and cruel a-hole.  Rin is nothing but a slutty, self-centered, spoiled-brat.  Sango is a backstabbiNg, lying, slutty whore.  I hope all three will get what's coming to them.  The way they treated Kagome was uncalled for.  Also, I think Kagome needs to be stronger.  I hate those three characters, but can't wait to see what happens next.  Hopefully at the end Kagome will have a happy ending.  Please update soon!


Linda (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Aug 2016

Seriously, I hate Sesshomaru, Rin and Sango in this story.  Sesshomaru has to wake up and get a reality check.  He always boast himself as being honorable.  HA!  In this story, he is nothing but a selfish, cheating and cruel a-hole.  Rin is nothing but a slutty, self-centered, spoiled-brat.  Sango is a backstabbiNg, lying, slutty whore.  I hope all three will get what's coming to them.  The way they treated Kagome was uncalled for.  Also, I think Kagome needs to be stronger.  I hate those three characters, but can't wait to see what happens next.  Hopefully at the end Kagome will have a happy ending.  Please update soon!


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