your story is controvertial and i am sure, struck a nerve with some people. so i am begging you, dont just write this story willy nilly, finish it and write it in a way that gives justice to women who experience abuse and rape in the world. i know its fanfiction, therefore, it is a place to write drama but it should also be balanced with evil  getting what they deserved. hopefully, she gets saved and not raped... i will wait and see the next chapter.

As disturbing as this chapter was. Im curious what will happen next i hope shes rescued before she vialated and i hope sesshomaru catches some rightoues diesease and sango gets burned. And they both get caught and kagome gets revenge in the best was possible. As for rin i beat her ass. Shes catch some act right real quick. Anywaysss... your story struckca nerve,sorry. Please continue

Im gonna try to give this story a chance. It made me sad but in all fairness you did have a warning. kinda scared for the next chapter.

???????????? .. why dint he answer ..  sango is such a bitch

WTF What the Hell!! SANGO. Sesshomaru you Fuckin Basterd

Oh my god. Words cannot begin to explain how much I love this story. I love and hate how this story plays with my emotions and i can't wait to see what happens to Kagome. I have so many thoughts running through my head that I can't formulate my words into sentences properly lol. I just hope Kagome comes out stronger, better and makes Sesshomaru and Rin work hard to get back into her good graces. I need to know how they became like this and afterwards kick their ass because there is no excuse for how they have treated Kagome thus far.  As for Sango, apologizes in advance for my language but fuck her! Worst friend ever! i should have seen it coming with her pushing Kagome to get a divorce and getting all hyper when she found out Kagome left the house. While I hate all three of them, I can't help but feel anger at Kagome for being so stupid. Like seriously, you couldn't stop for a minute and think of a game plan before locking your keys in the car and walking around an area you weren't familiar with? SIGH. Emotions are truly a powerful thing. Anways, I still have love for her and I hope she gets out okay! I can't wait to read what happens next and update soon! :)

I'm really liking this story, It certainly is a change of pace from most story's that I read that include a alternate world modern twist for the Sess/Kag genre. I will say reading your story I find myself completely wanting to gut sesshomaru and have rin sent to military school just for payback. And I have nothing but hopes that Kagome starts to live her lofe for herself and do many amazing things, before Sesshomaru ends up coming back into the picture, which I hope wont be to soon. All in all I feel beside myself cause I'm hoping for the best but the way you written this story I'm all so eager and expecting a bit of surprises along the way, like for sango perhaps she'll get a taste of what it's been like for Kagome since it a[[ears she's completely okay for disregarding Kagome and Her feelings involving Sesshomaru to the point that she'd sleep with him Knowing what Sesshomaru's behavior is like, I almost hope there wil be some karmic justice. In the meantime I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

I am so mad, I can't even... As a rule of thumb, in my capacity as a reader, I do not interfere or try to tell the author how to write his/her story. Just this one time though, I can't help but wish that you would not let Kagome get back together with Sesshoumaru. It's silly, I know, because this is Dokuga where SessKag is the endgame. But letting Kagome stay in such an abusive marriage is just... wrong. Honestly speaking, there is simply no way to justify Sesshoumaru's action and behaviour at this point in time. He doesn't have the whole caveman-oriented culture of the olden time to fall back on, because this is set in the modern time.

There are so much more that I wanted to say, but I couldn't bring myself to. Because, (I'm sorry but) this Sesshoumaru is repulsive. My motivation to continue reading is to see karma biting him back, HARD (crossing fingers). I hope you're not offended that I hate the Sesshoumaru you have written for this story so darn much, Stardust Miko.

So far, I'm enjoying the story and hope that Kagome doesn't get raped, but just have to wait and see of what will happen in the next chapter.

One things comes to mind. How old is kagome? Just curious since Rin is 13 , so how old was kagome when she gave birth to Rin?

What an intense chapter! 

Man my heart won't calm down with the ending of the chapter. 

Stupid  Sesshomaru, Rin , sango.

Dang it, Sango betrayed KAgome!

I hope kagome doesn't return. Ihope she goes on a long journey, make something of herself, make him kneel andd swallow his pride. (So bitter)

Make each one of them reflect, especially herself. 

Looking forward to more chapters. Please update soon, i'm dying to know what happens next. 

I think Sesshoumaru decided to use Sango just to hurt Kagome even further. I can see him gloating over the fact that he can even make Sango betray her (no difficulties encountered there - Sango wanted him all along), & leave her with no one else to rely on. Make her feel that she's truly alone and she might as well return to him & their daughter. I bet this is one of his twisted yandere schemes to prevent Kagome from leaving. But alas, his plan is gonna backfire and there'll be no gloating over anything happening.

If a miracle happens, I hope Kagome escapes, but if not, I don't see her escaping this with her mind intact. I'm afraid this is gonna be her breaking point. If she learns that she's been betrayed by the vulture Sango...

Speaking of Sango... that biatch! I knew there was something iffy about her. I re-read the first chapter again and from the get-go, she was not sincere at all and was waaaay too happy when Kagome decided to pursue a divorce. Not in the "I'm-happy-for-you-you-deserve-to-be-free-and-happy" kind of thing, but in a "Yes-now's-my-chance-to-snatch-him" eager, eyes shining, gross kind of way. I hope she gets her comeuppance.

Lol, this is my fifth time reading this chapter and I decided to leave another comment. I'm sorry for the long ass review! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Last time I said I better prepare myself for this. Apparently I am not prepared. I am speechless right now I don't even know what to say. Right now, I despise Sesshoumaru, Rin, and Sango -- I knew it. She's gonna betray Kagome. I don't even know, man. What they did is like the ultimate form of betrayal. I don't see how Sesshoumaru can redeem himself, or Rin or Sango for that matter.

Poor Kagome. Oh my God she doesn't deserve this. I really wanted to know why Sesshoumaru treated her that way. But even if Kagome was the cause of their marital problems, she really doesn't deserve to be raped.

I hope Kagome doesn't forgive Sango. What an opportunistic vulture.

A+ writing. I love the angst. This chapter will stay with me for a very long time. Can't wait for the day of reckoning. I will enjoy Sesshoumaru's tears.

argg

i csnt wait untill the turning point in this story

im so freaking pissed off right now im shaking

but i absolutly love this story

evoking all kinds of emotion from me and it only the 3 chap

keep wrirting

ill just be sitting here waiting on an update

*sits in the cornor*

I hate them all. Sango too. Thanks for the story, please update soon

I excel in dick chopping and I just finished sharpening my choppers, come here little puppy you're in need of a good neutering too. Muahahahaha! UPDATE!!!!!!! *100 PWEASE

Your writing is as captivating as ever and you've always been a favorite author of mine. I don't think I will be able to read this story though. :( right out the door you hit on three of my worst fears, four if you count the kid acting that way and five if you count him hitting her. The big ones are the cheating and possible rape though. It all made me so sad I didn't want to keep reading because I don't like feeling that way. It's my hope that Sango is just testing him or something will stop them, anything. It is also my hope that Kagome is saved, maybe by Kouga or InuYasha...anyone. though leader of a gang would more be Kouga.

So for once I actually agree with Rin. That two faced fake ass bitch! (Sorry but that pissed me off.) At this point, no one in this story has any redeeming qualities outside of Kagome and Kohaku. Can Kagome have at least have one genuine person in her life? At least one person who's on her side? It can be Inuyasha, Miroku, Koga, Sesshomaru's parents and hell even Naraku. 

I also have a few ideas about what the title means. The first one that comes to mind is Kagome going back to Sesshomaru which is my least favorite no matter what he does to win her back. Then I'm thinking maybe it refers to Kagome returning to the person she was before her relationship with Sesshomaru and going home in a sense. And last theory is that the title is more about Sesshomaru and his journey to the person he was before it all whent to hell and whatnot. Honestly I'm waiting for everyone to be brought to their lowest just as Kagome is. Lessons shall be learned. 

Well that was my piece. Overall, your writing is phenomenal and I really look forward to seeing how everything unfolds. Please update as soon as you can.

~punkish furball