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Ankita (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

XD kago acting as if she is in a horror movie hhahahahah n sessho as if he is the ghost now your turn to dieeee hahahah really enjoyed this chapter; )


Mona (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Great!!!  Looking forward to more. 


Dani (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

This story is turning out soooo cute. I'm always excited to see how sessh acts out of character :)  just like a puppy trying to please someone. 


Didie (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! *fainted*

Chest sign: 'Please don't dare to wake me up until the next chapter of this story added'


Lena (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

So uh is Sesshoumaru courting Kagome and she doesn't realize it? Lol 


roberta. (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Aw what a nice chap to base kagome is soooo clueless ha-ha.


Saiya (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Hahahahaha oh hell ya loved the ending so Cute. Poor Kagome doesn't even reailize what's going on so funny.


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

XD..... NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!


FaerieDearest (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Sesshoumaru is definitely courting Kagome!
Can't wait to read more *o*


cassandra (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015

Why do I get the feeling that sesshomaru is doing some kind of courtship thing? I can't wait to see how this plays out. 


Elizabeth (Chapter 11) - Thu 27 Aug 2015

this is good, keep it up


roberta. (Chapter 11) - Thu 27 Aug 2015

Just came across your story. It's great I was sorry that there was only 11 . looking forward to next chapter. Again just fantastic.


Jow (Chapter 11) - Wed 26 Aug 2015

Kagome's getting the idea!! Reciprocation is huge!!


Saiya (Chapter 11) - Wed 26 Aug 2015

It sound and looks like he could be Courting her but so Cute.


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

Sqeeeeeeeeee! Another "aww" moment!!!!! It's just so fluffy!!!!! (feeling like Renge in OHSHC).......anywho.

Maybe conciously Kagome does not realize what is going on, but I think her instincts and her subconcious mind already knows what is going on or is figuring it out. Why else would Kagome be so flustered and anticipate Sesshomaru's return? or be a little apprehensive about him finding her cooking lacking or even outright rejecting her own efforts?

It will be very interesting to see what happens when her subconcious lets her concious mind come to the realization she is beginning to truly care for Sesshomaru far more than an ally and temporary protector. I think by the time Kagome gets her powers back and eventually comes into contact with her previous pack, she will no longer wish to separate from Sesshomaru, but stay with him. She may or may not already know she is beginning to love him, but she won't want to leave him and his pack.

 

I think you are doing an awesomesauce character development between Kagome, Sesshomaru, Shippo and the remaining pack members. Why I do believe Sango feels like Kagome is a sister, and perhaps Miroku does too....Sango already proved in the manga and anime that Miroku and her brother come before anyone. With Miroku's life hanging in the balance of defeating Naraku, whom just got a whole lot stronger, I do not find it difficult to imagine Sango convincing herself to leave Kagome behind. Kagome is thought to be the weakest in the pack (at least until much closer to the final battle) by her own pack. Shippo, to me, is the only one that never doubted Kagome and even gave her encouragement (to me, he gave her the most).

While Miroku occasionally gives out wisdom and mediates any fights, he would put Sango over Kagome as well. In his and Sango's mine, Kagome could always go home and be safe (forgetting the fact Kagome has always been too honorable to leave her friends in the mess they are in).

As for Inuyasha, from your plot, he is still in his "who-are-you-going-to-choose" phase. So in his immaturity I can see him abandoning Kagome. While it would break her heart, I think the abandonment by her "sister" and "brother" is what truly scarred her. She may not know it, but the tentative way she acts around Sesshomaru (unless that's part of their relationship at the moment), shows she is a bit more hesitant in trusting in everything. Sure she trusts Sesshomaru for protection. But she worried about the food situation until Sesshomaru asked her. She never offered food to him before. She doesn't really try to engage him like she did when she first met each member of her previous pack. There's a definite change in her actions with her new pack.

 

But that is just me re-reading all the chapters too hehe

 


SilverontheRose (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

I have completely fallen in love with this story. The short, leading chapters, the way the both of them are acting without knowing exactly what the other thinks about their actions... it's a masterpiece of storytelling. I can't wait to follow where you lead!

 


Eva (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

Chuckle surely Buy presented her with kills, no? Perhaps not, too fat a lazy. She really hasn't got a clue about dogs and packs does she. Oh the surprises in store for her.


rose (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

next chapter please


Didie (Chapter 11) - Tue 25 Aug 2015

Aaah..... *nod nod*

The Art of Courting......?

Anyway, nice, Sesshoumaru! Just need a little work on communication...

And nicer and nicest, Chie-san! Ehehe...


Ankita (Chapter 10) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

Heh i would be musing tooo this sessho feels so out of character  


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