Love it! Nicely done.

Hi!

I love your stories! If you would post a new one I will be waiting for reading it!

You're a very talented writer! 

Until your next story!

This was a great story!! I loved it thank you very much for sharing. I hope you write more stories.

awwwwwwww !!!! i cant believe its actyally over. this story was totally awsome

Loved it thx

I enjoyed your story and I think you should post your new one.

Awesome

next chapter please

next chapter please

All eight chapters are great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Belated Mother's Day!

M- is the million things she gave me.
O- means only that she's growing old.
T- is for the tears shed to save me.
H- is for her heart of purest gold.
E- is for her eyes, with love & light shining.
R- means right, and right she'll always be.

Happy Belated Mother's Day!

next chapter please

next chapter please

Wow! I can't wait for more! 

Great chapter, can't wait for the update.  I like the possible Rin and Inuyasha pairing.

next chapter please

next chapter please

You go Kagome! Show mama what you are made of! I am ashamed of Kagome's mother. How could that woman birth such a sweet child (Kagome), is beyond me. I am so glad that Kagomes mother and those nasty priests got what is coming to them!
Now.....wonder how Kagome will treat those youkai during the presentation and what in the world is that evil hanyo got up his sleeve?

Great update, I do hope the person Inuyasha is to meet is not Kikyo.  Also I hope Kagome punishes those she sees fit, especially the elder and leader of the 'used to be' mikos and priests.  Maybe she should damn there souls for against the Kami's and the rules of the Land.

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Before I read any more of this chapter I need to point something out to you. When women in the real world have their period, it means their bodies are getting rid of the eggs in their system. It means they're almost not fertile. It is POSSIBLE to get pregnant when on your period, but not as likely. The most fertile time for women is the OPPOSITE time of the month, when we ovulate.

So, unless you write something into your story changing human biology, your entire story loses believability when you say 'How can you not be fertile when on your cycle?' when the 'cycle' you're referring to is the part of the month when Kagome is bleeding.