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Howdy (Chapter 13) - Thu 02 Nov 2017

Rin's a.. powerful miko too?  This is a really interesting story with a fascinating plot, but it can be really frustrating in some parts.  Some of the grammar and spelling errors are odd (ex. using due when you mean do).  And the convenience of some aspects seem like they were added to fill plot holes.  Kagome gets knocked out in almost every chapter so far, no one noticed that Rin hadn't been marked, Kagome is every kind of miko there is... I mean, Sesshomaru can call the moon?  I don't mean this as a flame, so please don't take it that way. There are just parts that I'm reading and I have to go back and reread to see what in the heck I missed to not notice the new developments that seem to come of out nowhere.  Also, and this is kind of nitpicking, Kagome is already considering Rin her pup when they've known each other for a day?  

aneles (Chapter 17) - Sat 08 Jul 2017

I love this story and have actually read it multiple times. The only problem I have with it is that you might want to look at currency exchange rates. Yen doesn't translate into much compared to us dollars, so 8 million yen is only worth about 70k or so. Definitely not enough to get a company on its feet. 

Darknessdawns (Chapter 24) - Sun 02 Apr 2017

I thought you did a good job with this. The story and characters were interesting,overall it was well written, and there was plenty of fluff.


Rebecca Kelb (Chapter 24) - Sun 07 Aug 2016

Hi, this fanfic was recommended to me by someone close to me, i found this fanfiction to be amazing, it had adventure, betrayal, love, drama and humour and forgiveness, I really liked this fanfic, and I was disappointed for a little bit as I was waiting for something to happen and then it did, so i absolutely loved your story and I would like to read your next fanfic :)

Inudemoness (Chapter 24) - Mon 04 Jul 2016

I loved this story!!! It was amazing!!! i enjoyed reading it and i am sure i would love to read the Ultimate sacrifice as well because i like your writing style. I hope you soon post that story!!! And even better if it is complete cuz that way i won't go crazy waiting for a new chapter. 

Please do more stories :D GR8 work again!!

candace peaches (Chapter 24) - Thu 30 Jun 2016

i have read many of your stories and i love each one of them. i have you on my faves list on this story was wonderful. i liked the idea of Inuyasha gettinga another chance to have love in his life and getting his brother back. i dont read Inu/Kag fics b/c i love, love, love Sesshoumaru. if he were real i would be sad b/c there would only be one of him and he is to yummy to be the only copy. maybe if he were a twin or triplet that could work(ha,ha). i wish and hope that you upload your new finish story 'Ultimate Scarifice'. i really want to read it. your are a GREAT writer and i hope you keep doing what you love. oh, i like the fact that Kagome is powerful. she has to be in order to catch the eye of the ultimate killing perfection. c'ya' and Ja Ne

Rose (Chapter 5) - Sun 09 Aug 2015

Why didn't Kagome purify Inuyasha'a ass? I wanted to step in the pages and give her a good shake to get some backbone and defend herself 

Kittyinaz (Chapter 24) - Tue 28 Jul 2015

So much love for this!!  I started to read on Fanfiction, then remembered you from reading your other stories.   Thank you for sharing this, it was an awesome treat to have when I just came back to the fandom to read!!  I admit, it so engrossed me, that I skimped out on my writing and editing to read!!

Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Jun 2015

I read your author's note and it made me happy. Thank you for mewling it till it was complete. The story seemed awesome and dramatic already can't wait to read more

pclark (Chapter 24) - Thu 25 Jun 2015

I always love your stories, they are always wonderfull. I do have a question, I was wondering if you take ideas from people for stories?

running1book (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

You should post your new story!  I throughly enjoyed reading this story!

Alma (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

I really enjoyed this story. It gave the charactors. real depth and believabilty.  I would love to read any other stories you write.  It was so good. Thank you very much.  I loved the way you portrayed Ah-Un. 

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

I loved your story very much. I loved the ending and the badass momma Kagome. Although I didn't review that much but I never missed a chapter. You are a wonderful writer full of ideas and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. You can count on me reading all of them. Fantastic writing job.

NerdyChick13 (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

Post it

trinity3000 (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

Great ending to a great story.  I loved how Kagome finally got tough.  Please post your new story!!!

Pixiekun (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

Love it! Nicely done.

Misao Sagara (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015


I love your stories! If you would post a new one I will be waiting for reading it!

You're a very talented writer! 

Until your next story!

Serena (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

This was a great story!! I loved it thank you very much for sharing. I hope you write more stories.

GomeMaru (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

awwwwwwww !!!! i cant believe its actyally over. this story was totally awsome

sonja hand (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Jun 2015

Loved it thx

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