Reviews for Adoption by Aya

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tonya (Chapter 9) - Sun 02 Nov 2014

love all the updates! great story!


maricela (Chapter 9) - Sun 02 Nov 2014

awesome updates thank you so much.


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 8) - Sun 02 Nov 2014

Oh how i'm loving the frequent updates. I can see how much fun you're having with this story. It's definitely all yours now :) Great work. As badly timed these updates are since i'm swamped in school work and work work, i still sneak away to read them, lol. Can't help it. It's very realistic, with naraku's struggles with fatherhood here and there. I do look forward to reading more from this story. Keep up the great work


tonya (Chapter 5) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

love the updates!


maricela (Chapter 5) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

great chapter thank you.


maricela (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

so so cute thank you.


cassandra (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

I thought he was having a hard time with kagome picking things out. I wonder how he's going to react to souta wanting a kitty. 

 

 


rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

next chapter please


Selina (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

Good work! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for updating. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.


tonya (Chapter 3) - Sat 01 Nov 2014

great story!


maricela (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Oct 2014

that was great thank you.


katie (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Oct 2014

Ahhh that last sentes is funny as hell. Please keep going it is getting good


rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Oct 2014

next chapter please


Yin - Yang M (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

I like it. It's cute and funny.


Marie (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

So far so good. I think I would to follow your story and see how it develops.  So far you have me interested.  Keep up the good work


Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

I read the story that you gained inspiration from about a year ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it and i could see the resemblance after the first paragraph. That story first opened my mind to the idea of Naraku as the protective older brother/father figure instead of the enemy. Anyways, back to your story, i would love to read another story around the same theme and i'm already seeing how you're making it your own. I'll definitely be looking out for future updates ^_^ Keep up the great work. 


rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

next chapter please


maricela (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Oct 2014

so far really like it thanks.


katie (Chapter 2) - Wed 29 Oct 2014

Wow now its getting very good please keep going u got me hooked


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