next chapter please

next chapter please

Dont know i'm addicted to sesskag's story. Please do continue it!

Oh man I was looking forward to a chapter....  

Boo Hoo....  Okay okay....  So let's see what we can give you.

As for Shippo I'd say have him older than a teenager but not an adult yet.  Ahh for Kikyou I'd say keep her as she is for the most part but don't make her totally evil just indifferent and secretive knowing youkai are alive but doesn't care either way until she meets Inu Yasha for saving her life or something like that.  

Hopefully this may have helped some.  

Good, keep it coming.

What a refreshing take on Naraku and fatherhood! Having him as one of the good guys made the story very interesting. Anticipating the succeeding chapters ^^ Good job author-nim!!! 

I think it would be nice to enter Shippou as a orphen child (maybe Kagome visits the orphange a few times and falls in fimiliar love with him and eventually adopts him or Sesshoumaru adopts him for her).

As far as Kikyou (please dont let her end up with Inuyasha maybe Naruka), present her as long lost family member (cousin)(aunt) of Kagome.

By the way I enjoy your stories

Shippo should probably be in someones class, perhaps middle school or some sort of training class for his abilities? I personally like Kikyo better wwhen she is nice versus mean, but it is your story after all, so your preference........can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

I say Shippo should be a baby or a toddler.

If shippo is a child would that not make it hard for him and rin to be together what with demons aging different then human?  I would like kikyo to come in through training. 

For shippo they meet in middle schhol on the first day. Someone could be picking on kagome or shippo and the other saves them and thus friendship is born. As for kikyo have her be friends with kagome same with ayame. 

Cant wait for tfor the next chapter

Love the story line, you know out of the thousands of inuyasha stories I've read, i have never seen a geeky kikyou.

That was good please keep going

Interesting, keep it coming.

I absolutely love it!!!! Super cute, and I like how Naraku isn't the bad guy this time! :-)

excellent!

I'm so happy you're writing this! I was/am in love with the inspiration for it so when I realized you were making it your own I'll admit, I came in ready to judge harshly, but you've done nothing but impress.

You have a lovely writing style as well, I absolutely cannot wait for updates.

next chapter please

next chapter please

Wow that is very good please keep going and it is funny too