Reviews for Asphyxiate by Lace

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Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 Sep 2014

I added this story to ma favourites but... Is something going to happen anytime soon?? Started off really good, but now it feels kinda boring.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 31) - Mon 01 Sep 2014

Wonderful chapters, keep it coming


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Wed 02 Jul 2014

Great chapters, keep it coming.


Stella Mira (Chapter 26) - Tue 01 Jul 2014

This new development is exciting!! I wonder what she's going to discover now...secrets, mysteries, Sesshomaru trapped inside a magic lamp. Just kidding about the last one. XD

I love your choice of words and flowing metaphors!!

Looking forward to more! :)

P.S. Wonderful use of the prompts!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Mon 30 Jun 2014

Nice chapters, keep it coming.  


cakeiton (Chapter 21) - Mon 30 Jun 2014

I sense some dramatic intrque or a shift in the story coming up!


cakeiton (Chapter 20) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

i know those feels, kags.


cakeiton (Chapter 19) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

I adore when Hojo is not made into a jealous bad guy. He never was, and people aren't so black and white. However, he is unshakably noble, and I like that you have him like this here.


cakeiton (Chapter 18) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

good word choices in this one!


cakeiton (Chapter 17) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

It is!!! And the visuals are amazing. This is not good times for Kagome


cakeiton (Chapter 16) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

.... Oh what!? Is it who I think it is???


cakeiton (Chapter 15) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

This is dark and vicious and I love it.


cakeiton (Chapter 14) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

Oh, what!? That's sounds like how the well takes her, but instead of cushioning blue light, it is darkness! Love it!


cakeiton (Chapter 13) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

I like the tone of this. She is disconnected from the world, but it is written in present tense. Like, it is her otherwordly visions that are keeping her anchored.


cakeiton (Chapter 12) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

Ojii-san is perfect!!! And so is Kagome's heart. She would do something like that regardless of who could see or what they would think at the time


cakeiton (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

Well... THAT is not going to help her mood any lol. Little brothers...


cakeiton (Chapter 10) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

I love the ominous Wisp character


Stella Mira (Chapter 19) - Sun 29 Jun 2014

So the slightly touched in the head knight enters. Lol I'm sorry, but I can't see Hojo as 'sane' either.

Looking forward to those updates! Thanks for the wonderful read, Lace! ^^


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Sat 28 Jun 2014

Good, keep it coming.


Wunderberry (Chapter 19) - Sat 28 Jun 2014

Looking forward to the more updates, I'm so excited for how you're going to fit Sesshomaru in!


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