Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
lattie (Chapter 5) - Tue 10 Jun 2014
I hope a twist is coming up and Kagome is not a tramp. T_T
Love the story!
Still, wouldn't Taisho realize something was off and try to find the true answer? Especially when sesshomaru tells his father what he saw and felt (the mailce, demand that he answer to his crimes?). After all, if he was in the right, then wouldn't Kagome feel joy at the fact she caused him harm? Or feel glad that his heart is incased in coldness and ice? Instead, it's dark (as if she has been hurt and betrayed) and she was demanding retribution. The only retribution she should demand is him finding her out and harming her.
very confusing though
So sad, keep it coming.
I love your story. But I have some questions.
Why was there no comment regarding the lack of blood from the so-called male Sess struck? Even if he had managed to escape, there'd be evidence of his presence with his blood.
I know you explained that Sess isn't thinking straight, that makes sense when the incident took place but it's been decades, surely he'd be able to see now that something's off. Especially because of his pride, because if he happened to be mistaken, and its obvious that something strange was going on, then both his pride and his honor would be in question.
I couldn't help but notice you have the same tendency I have, he he, of leaving words out, most specifically propositions. And you have many mistakes you might want to fix.
Anyways, great work! Can't wait till your next update!
Mimiru (Chapter 4) - Sat 07 Jun 2014
I do feel bad for sesshomaru, but more for kagome. I think he will get what he deserves though and in thinking that i wonder will kagome ever find it in her to forgive his betraly. I really love your story so far and now you started it :3
please keep up the good work.
Nice chapter, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
Somethings off and I can't figure out why Sesshomaru didn't notice it....when there was a bright light, if he didn't harm Kagome, how did she end up bleeding and blood on his claws? Why did a light take her? Why wasn't the male in the room with them once she disappeared? It doesn't add up that she betrayed him.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lchan (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 May 2014
Can't wait for the next update, this is a really good story so far!!!
Great chapter, keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
I'm excited to see how this turns out. :)
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