Reviews for Two Can Play It by kashi

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MomoiroOhiOni (Chapter 2) - Thu 01 Jul 2010

I bet it's kagura! Haha she's hilarious when's she's making a fool of herself >:D


jojo661538 (Chapter 6) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

hehehe poor inuyasha keep up the good work ^_^


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
update soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soonupdate soon update soon sooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!! n_n

daapatemysoul (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
The story isn't half bad. Its a fun idea and one I haven't seen alot of before (which is hard to do in fanfiction-land). However, the writing isn't top notch. You seem to rush through some scenes. You defeinitely leave out parts of sentences and use a decent bit of bad grammar, but a good beta could fix that issue (my grammar is horrid until my beta tears through my fics). Concentrate more on saying what you want to say in the best possible way, using detail to help the scenes evolve, instead of just getting your ideas down and posted instantly. The fic has potential- I'd love to see it live up to that potential.

His Lady (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
this chapter was soooo funny please update soon....you have to PUHLEEEEEEZE

Lilith (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
^.^ Kitty ears!! Very nice chapter, even tho it was short... but i can't wait until the next chapter!! ;)

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
such a short chapter! And so not fair!!! Update soon!!!! >_<

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
Hehehe... I just wish that you would have prolonged a little bit more the night-club scene or written down a little more details about their interactions... Anyway, as usual... awesome ^^

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 4) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
aahhh the wonders a little music and dancing can do......... *winks*

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
LoL... Poor Sesshoumaru. He will soon feel Kag's wrath xD

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
OH DEAR GOD... I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! ... *runs off and keeps on reading* . .. ...... .. .. . .. PS: really, you should fix that grammar of yours xD

~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
LoL Though Sesshomaru is OC, I don't mind it at all. n_n But you surely need to get those tense-shifting fixed! ^^ ... Anyway, it was very nice :D

His Lady (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
omg i really am not liking you right now....but i remember and then i forgot this story so im good =D [[but i dont know if you can remember and forget...is it possible]] but anyway LOVED IT and please update soon hey can anyone tell me what in the world is up with these spambots??

His Lady (Chapter 3) - Sat 20 Jun 2009

i know i read this story somewhere before..but i forgot if it was on here or somewhere else..hrmmmmm

 

but please continue soon


Zalika (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Jun 2009

I really like this story. Its a nice twist from the usual high school/college thing. I can't wait to see what happens next.


Starlyte (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2009

I liked this, its not too serious, but has a good story line! Look forward to the update!


Tiana+Love (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2009

The ultimate fan girl is Kagura. I have the feeling I've read this before. Was it on sparks or fanfiction?


InuYoukaiLiz (Chapter 2) - Sun 14 Jun 2009
Ahhh this sure brings back funny memories of when I first read this on DA. ROFL I'm glad to see it here. People need to read this hilarious story.

tataiana (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
Interesting. Please update soon.

tatiana (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
Roommies aren't so bad, but I guess it depends on the ground rules the 2 (or more) of you set and how much space there is. My aunt said she had a couple of guy room mates on the first floor who were quite noisy and entertaining. She says that they pushed their sofa out the window and screamed " The University Order is now in effect!" I guess the UO is when you put all of your desks in the main room and the furniture is put around them or somewhere else. Any way, she said it happend a long time ago.

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