First all let me say that I truly love and adore your story. I have followed it for quite a while and I anxiously look foward to each and every one of your updates. While I love your OC Aoi and find his feelings toward Kagome intriguing. I am not to keen on a Threesome involving him, Kagome and Sesshomaru. Chalk it up has beeing a die-hard Sess/Kag person and believe that them being together should involve just the two. With that being said, early on in the story, you let everyone know that Kagome doesn't want Aoi because of a broken heart and you also allow Aoi point out her feelings for Sess. I believe he, Aoi, should back off. Let Sess have Kagome. Now you would think that after that plea (and believe me it is a desperate plea, because i do not review very often and when I do it is usually either when something extreme happens or the story is winding down.) that I am against threesomes, especially with Sess/Kag. Well I am here to tell you that is further from the truth, There are very few stories where I love the threesome involving Sess/Kag, It would be just disappointing for me, with having followed this story from the beginning and seeing its twists and turns that Sess would actually share his potential mate with a Guard, even if he is of high calibre as Aoi. With Sess ruling persona and his pride, I believe that him sharing with a guard would be beneath him and it is something he would not do it... maybe with a concubine, but not with Kagome that would be an insult to her; and both Aoi and Sess have more honor than that to put her in that position. If there should be a threesome, let it steer toward Miroku...We all know he's all talk, but to have Sango turn the tables on him and do something so overtly sexual would rock his world. Anika, having come from the background she has, would not see anything wrong with intruding on such. You have developed the dragons as devious and with no honor whatsoever. But with Anika, you snuck her up on us in the end...she at this point is a more flexible character, so she could LEARN new things from Miroku and Sango, like sharing, companionship, trust, honor, loyalty, etc.
I know many of your loyal readers, and maybe even yourself, will probably disagree with me...And that's okay, because you would be such an amazing author if your story didn't pull all sorts of opinions, good or bad. I just saying, for myself and a reader, that it would be a shame that after all the pushing away of Aoi's affections, Kagome has been doing, whether it be reluctant or not, Sess should be the victor of her heart...mind, body and soul. And, Aoi should find him someone else to pine over. I do apologize if I have offended your or your readers with my opinion...it was not my intent. I just wanted to give you and honest review and my view point. You REALLY, REALLY do have an AMAZING STORY and you are an euqally AMAZING writer. So keep up the fantastic work and whether you make this a threesome story involving sess/kag or not, I will follow this story to the very end...and any other story you may write in the future.
WELL DONE :)
Kristina (Chapter 347) - Wed 31 Jul 2013
Ok you opened the door to sharing Kagome between the two of them I totally think you should LOL. Poor Kagome she is in for it now!!!
Oh, hello!! Some lovely lovely lovely moments of pure naughtness with two dogs! So great!
To bad Sess is starting to think again, nothing good ever come from his mind... Had he followed his instincts, Kagome'd be his mate ages ago.... and people say Inuyasha is the dense one.
Can't get enough, keep it coming.
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